Account: GoldenUnseen

Rater: missace123

Username: 4/5

Your username is easy to remember and is mysterious, which shows off your love for horror, as represented in other areas of your profile. 'Unseen' holds some suspense, which complements your display name. However, what forbids me from giving you five out of five is the lack of explanation for the chosen username (e.g. is gold your favourite colour?). Usernames, like display names, should reflect on you as a person, and it's difficult to decide with your username.

Display Name: 5/5

I am in love with your display name. I don't know how you managed to copy and paste such a font as your display name, however it perfectly portrays your love for horror. The way that you explained that you're a "Horror Queen" supports elements of your profile, such as your profile picture, header and your stories' genre.

Profile Picture: 5/5

Similar to your display name, it shows how much you love horror, as your profile picture is a digital art version of a woman who could have easily come from a good horror movie. Also, I've noted that you're a graphic designer, and putting two and two together, I'm assuming that you made your own profile picture, which further reveals more about you and your exceptional talent.

Header: 4.5/5

I really enjoy the way the header makes the profile picture pop out more as the profile picture has all of the colours, whilst the header is greyscale. It also suits the horror theme, the mystery of the person / people by the window as an introduction to your horror addiction.

Bio: 4/5

First, I wanted to say how impressed I am on how much information is included in your bio, including some of the fanbases you support, the communities you're part of, your favourite genres, and follower milestones (congrats on one thousand!). I feel as though I can learn most information about a user by looking at their bio, and you've used that to your advantage.

However, my main concern is the variety of fonts. Yes, it is quite aesthetically pleasing, however too many fonts used can actually make your profile seem unprofessional and even be unappealing. I would suggest sticking to a maximum of three fonts, all with their own designated purposes (e.g. a particular font for subtitles). As for now, it seems a little confusing to me.

Other than that, I don't have much to complain about. Your bio is already amazing, and with that minor change, it could be outstanding.

Location: 3.5/5

Same, girl, same. I'm still waiting for my Hogwarts letter, even though I'm past the age of eleven. However, it's not an actual location, and if you added an actual location in front, it would suit the category 'location' better. For example, you could say, 'at home, waiting for my Hogwarts letter'.

Book Covers: 5/5

They are all fantastic, and showcase your incredible skills even more. Your covers fit the respective genre and book description exactly, but it is also captivating to readers as the cover always has some kind of mystery to it. Wattpadders often judge books by its covers, and I have nothing else to say except for the fact that I'm intrigued with your books, even though I'm not a horror fan myself.

Reading Lists: 4/5

I want to say that you have too many reading lists, however, upon looking at them, I find it impossible to shorten them, and I understand why you had to create a new list for each category.

However, I do have some reading lists that I feel could be combined to make one large reading list. I would say that "Authors I support Who's Books I'll read" and "I Wish To read" could be combined as "To Read", and the "Read 4 Read" books could be moved to "READING REQUESTS". Besides those four, I just can't see any of the other reading lists combining.

Theme + Colour Scheme: 5/5

You seem to portray a horror theme throughout your profile, which I really enjoyed and found really cool, which is even shown in the reading lists, despite the fact that the word 'horror' isn't mentioned in that category. I can see that from your favourite reads that many are horror stories, which means that not only are you a passionate writer, but also a vivid reader.

First Impression: 5/5

I was initially shocked by how neat this profile was. It follows a similar theme throughout the entire profile, every element has been used efficiently, and it's probably one of the best profiles I've seen on Wattpad (and I'm not just saying that— I truly mean it).

You either know how to create a successful profile or just happened to be lucky, because I'm a very judgemental person and hard to please, however your profile truly pleased me. I think that with a little reflection on my feedback and deciding whether it's worth it or not is worth a try, depending on whether you agree that your profile would be more suited that way or not. Either way, it's still great.

OVERALL SCORE: 48/55

I found your profile near-perfect, and even without changing anything, it would still be eye-opening. Using some of the feedback given, I believe that you could further improve your profile.