Werewolf

Written by: duaa_shams

Punctuation:

I thought you did a good job of keeping most mistakes out of your writing, you just have to watch for those few mistakes where you might have missed a comma or had a spelling error. It really helps to just go back and reread your chapter to try and find those before you publish.

Characters:

You did a good job of introducing all the character and fitting in details about them throughout the chapters, so you continue to learn about them. The relationship development between the characters as well I thought was good, especially between Camille and Devan. The only thing that I might add is to give a bit more detail between her and her friends to define that relationship more.

Overall review:

I really enjoyed your book and the contrasts that you created. Something that I notice, something in lots of people's writing, is them rushing the plot. I thought you did great with details but could've added a bit more to help move the plot along instead of jumping from point to point. You just want to make sure you find the balance so you don't end up dumping too much information on the reader. Otherwise, I thought you did an amazing job!

If you enjoy werewolf/romance books, this is a great one to check out!