Thriller/Crime

Written by: chainedinshadow

Characters:

I love the way you wrote the characters. Everything about them and their interactions are very natural and all seem realistic. The way you describe it all makes it very easy to see it all happening in real life.

Overall review:

You have a very intriguing plot that keeps you pulled into the story. I really enjoy your prologue that gets the readers interested right away. It keeps them looking forward to what's to come even when you go back to a normal pace in their everyday life. As far as I could tell, your writing didn't really have any mistakes. Keep up the good work!