Romance

Written by: TashaTSammy

Overall review:

I really enjoyed reading this story! I love the excitement that you add to the story, you create so much suspense! You do a great job of going into detail about the characters and their relationship so the readers know how everything connects.

If I had any feedback I would just say make sure you go through your story and just make sure you're editing. I just noticed a few grammatical errors and few words that should've been capitalized. Making sure your read is free of those just makes it that much easier to read. But otherwise I really enjoyed your story! Great job!