Romance

Written by: EraRexon

Overall review:

I absolutely love all of the detail you had in your writing. You have a way with being able to paint a picture with your words. You know how to get a plot started and pull the reader in. My only note is to make sure you go back and read your chapters before publishing to catch any grammar, spelling or punctuation mistakes. It's really easy to miss when you're first writing so just going back and fixing those can make a big difference.

Otherwise I thought your story was really good and a very interesting read. Definitely a great book to check out!