❝ Like eggshells we must break
Like mirrors we'll reflect ❞
by __Carrots__

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Life is like a boat without an anchor,

where you just flow like the river

with every passing phase, without not-so-much grace

It's just flowing or it seems so

They say, eggshells are really hard 

protecting the inner part, by being in the outer 

what they don't wanna know, it must 

break too, in order to be innermost

our life is just like that, no matter

how hard the shell seems, but it

must break once, without breaking 

it's just nut-shell, with no taste-no protein

we must break to gather the pieces, 

we must know how to be breaking

more than once, we must know what's pain

when it's just illusion of nothing lasts.

Pain lasts, the aching lasts even when

the grief passed, I know how is it like to be

now I don't wish to be in forever at last. 

because my actions reflect in my veins.

the actions ruminates the reflex tones, 

heather shy away its blossom, 

just like the mirrors, it lies 

when I see what's coming through its eyes. 

still I know, I must reflect my own vows 

I must bear its taste, when it's bitter 

since it's my own seeds, I shall reap 

I shall reflect its own reactions, when it's all about actions.

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Which one is better? The form with [i] free verse or [ii] acrostic?