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Tommy and the Chocolate Factory

My mind went from Tommy Coco Cola, to chocolate, to SBI poisoning chocolate, to Charlie and the chocolate factory within 5 seconds, and said 'SBI Promp'

Prompt:

Tommy liked chocolate, everyone did. There was one company called 'SBI' that had the best chocolate. It was super sweet and rich, so he loved it the most. 

He always got chocolate to a local candy store run by a dad and his two son's. He had been getting his candy there for years, because of how friendly they are.

One day he learns of a contest where every school would be put in a raffle, then whichever wins would have the students each get a candy bar and five students would get a golden ticket in the wrapper of the bar. The kids that got it would be allowed to go in a tour of the SBI's candy factory!!!

His school was chosen and everyone was given a candy bar, but Tommy was too nervous to open his. He waited until close to the date of the tour to finally open his after the Candy Store's owners had encouraged him too.

His friends Ranboo and Tubbo had also gotten golden tickets, and it wouldn't just be cool to go on the tour, but going on it with his friends would just make it even more special, and he doesn't want to be left out.

He hesitant unfolded- (wait- no kid is patient enough to do that-) he hesitantly tore parts of the wrapper off before unfolding the last part.
Hmm... there was something glittering in his chocolate...

He had gotten a golden ticket!!!!

Tommy was so excited!

He got his older brother/dad to take him to the factory (Sam would be the dad, and Dream the brother depending on wich you choose). They where happy for Tommy to go on the tour, knowing it's like a dream come true for the blonde.

When the day came to go on the tour Tommy was so excited! After arriving there to see he was the last one to arrive, he was a bit nervous, but quickly brushed that off when talking with his friends before the tour started.

When it started the trio that owned the factory lead the kids and their guardians around the factory- the three seemed familiar, but Tommy couldn't quite figure out how.

Slowly though, some of the other kids and the adults went missing, until it was only him and his father/brother left. It felt it was a bit odd, but the owners told him that the others weren't feeling well or wanted to explore some of the rooms longer. Eventually his brother/dad disappears too when looking for the bathroom.

After everyone had disappeared the three factory owners had lead him into a glass elevator that took him to the top floor, wich only the trio has a Key too. It's then that Tommy realizes something bad is happening.

The three trap him on the top floor, which seems to be like a house. The three reveal themselves to be the candy shop owners, the ones that told him to open the candy bar the had the ticket.

He learns that the entire thing was planned, his school was chosen for a reason, and the people where planned to get rid of any attachments. Because the candy factory made them rich, they where able to wipe any evidence leading the disappearances to them.

So, now Tommy is trapped on the top floor of a candy factory with three candy makers. He has no way to escape and has loads of cavities.

Notes:

I feel like the factory would be run by Oompa Loompas, or something similar to them.

I think their version of Oompa Loompas would have wings and be covered in feathers, similar to a crows, but still humanoid. They would fly around to get to places faster, and enjoyed shiny things. So, they are paid in coins because they like the shiny-ness of them, instead of being payed in actual money because it's worthless to them.
Their feathers would also not fall off oddly, and only came off when they have them pulled out.

But they still would be terrifying like the ones in the musical- Google a picture of them from the musical and tell me they aren't creepy.

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