Book name : PreRish- Humsafar

Writtern by aalina4734

Genre: Fanfiction

Reviewed by Pournu

Ratings :2.5/5

Cover , Title and Description:

The cover is nice but couldn't find authors name and also the font needs a bit refinement. you can get help from any GD for your covers as it will help in gaining the attention of readers. Short title immediately catches our attention and caters to our curiosity.  A good start for the story from the aspect of title. You did a good job by providing a detailed description. But it needs a bit more clarity. Also I could find some typos so I suggest you to read it once again to avoid the same.

First Chapter:

You could've placed a small introduction for the characters. Not everyone is aware of the characters some might stumble across without even being a part of fandom. Just a suggestion though. A lovely start to the story . The bond between Prerna and Rishab was nice. And also the bond between best friends is adorable.  Lets see what happens next.

Character Development:

There could be a basic introduction for each of your characters so that even a general reader gets an insight of characters. The bond of best friends and also Prerna and Rishab is cute. Bajaj family is nice and also the turn of events. Each character has a way of  showcasing themselves. All the characters have a trait and glad you show them well.   The bonding between brother and sister is well described.  But a character sketch will be helpful to give a picture to those characters. 

Plot and Story line:

 Plot was a bit dragging and cliche in the beginning but the twist and turn of events made it interesting. The way each incident paved way to other is nice. The entire Bajaj family is lovely whereas the Basu's were disgusting. The way Prerna was treated by her family was almost a reality check to all those who trust and prioritizes others over their own child.  A lovely story line and good execution.  

Grammar and Details:

I know English is not your first language but you need to work on your grammar and detailing. Also add some  more detailing to your story to make it pleasant while  reading.  You can ask someone to proofread for you as there are people to help you out with such detailing and grammar issues. Spelling mistakes and line spacing errors can be corrected if you go through once again.

My view as a reader:

The beginning was a bit confusing but then the turn of events made the plot interesting. There is still room for improvement but your characters were lovely and Bajaj family was something like a dream family. Keep writing more and more . All the best for your future works.  I am sorry if I offended you.