Title: Delusional World

Written by  London_kitkat_lovely

Genre: Fanfiction

Reviewed by : Pournu

Ratings: 2.5/5

Cover , Title and Description:

 The cover is good but it can be more creative. There is no author's name on the cover.Cover also plays a role in communicating the story line to readers. Good job on the title. A little bit evasive but makes you curious at the same time. Description is good and gives us an hint about story line. Lets peep into the story.

First chapter:

It was a sweet chapter but a bit short. Cliffhanger right from chapter one sounds interesting.  There wasn't much details about the wedding taking place or the introduction of characters. It will be good if you give a preface or a short introduction so it will be good as a standalone book too.  A good chapter but with a preface it will be even better. 

Character Development:

There isn't a clear character sketch and an idea of events happened before. King and Pragya share a sweet bond. Tanu as usual jealous of pragya.  Abhi is behaving like a typical male who got his ego bruised. And King 's character is beautifully designed. I think Purab needs to think from Pragya's POV too and Aliyah did show her vile nature. Good characters and lets see what happens next.

Plot and Story line:

It's a usual plot I would say.  But the story line is good. But the chapters are too short and It needs a preface. I wasn't able to understand what has happened before. But the turn of events make it interesting.  A common plot with uncommon twists. 

Grammar and Details:

 Your grammar needs a bit of fine tuning and story needs some detailing too.  Line breaks need a bit of your attention too. I didn't find much typo . You make sure to read the chapter once before publishing so that you can avoid small mistakes. Keep writing more and more as it will help you grow as an author. All the best.

 My View as a Reader:

I don't know if its a sequel or not. I read it as a standalone book and I needed a preface and character sketch to get an insight into what has happened before.  As the chapter progresses, the real face of everyone comes into picture. King is someone who everyone wishes to have as a husband but alas he is fictional. You are good at cliffhangers. But I suggest you edit your description and use some other fonts because it becomes difficult to read. All the Best for your future works.