Well watching from the response of the first chapter, I conclude that my update was not funny enough.

It was not up to the mark.😭😭🥺😭😭
And I'm not really satisfied with the outcome and effort I put in.

So I've been thinking to change my way of writing a bit.

I'll be writing the dare and truth scenes in hindi.( I speak it more than English)
And translate the meaning of the dialogues in English within the bracket.

It's not my first writing in this style.

Here goes a scene from my a 3 shots book called 'Maa Da Ladla Bigaad Gaya'

(momma's boy has become spoiled)

In this book, the male protagonist was taken in for a gay as he was avoiding marriage topics and rejecting females.
In end he's not gay but has a gf but hidden by him.

If you liked the writing style in the screenshot I'll give it a try.

BIL( Brother in law)

Welp if I'm not satisfied with outcome of my work and efforts put on this book, I'll unpublish it later on.