@JustARandomMudkip
Name: Abby (Or Abby-Blossom as some sort of nickname/code name.)
Nice, common name. It's good to see a regular name we see commonly for people used for a Pokémon. 9/10
Age: 10
Nice age. 10/10
Species: Phantump
Never before have I seen a Phantump OC. Very nice! Her age suits her evolution stage as well. 10/10
Personality: Very giddy and overall joyful, alo though she loses hope very fast once something bad occurs. She is shy towards new people/Pokemon, but is a bit friendlier to children. She is polite and keeps to herself when needed, and has a couple of 'trigger words'. (Not meaning words that get her offended, but words or phrases that give her flashbacks and panic attacks.)
A nice, detailed personality! It's good to see a detailed one once and a while. It does seem to be a but split, though. 7.5/10
Likes: Children, Ghost Types, Others in general.
Nice likings. 10/10
Dislikes: Darkrai, Poachers, Bullies.
If she likes Ghost-Types, why doesn't she like Darkrai? Still, ill half the poults taken off for this for the given reason below. 7/10
Backstory: Abby used to be a 10 year old girl, until she was killed in the forest. Virizion took her in and adopted her. (There's more to the story, explaining her disliking towards Darkrai and such in a story I'm going to write, so if that's confusing, this is the reason.)
Very interesting! I anticipate learning more, I really do. Even though it's a short backstory, you get a perfect ten. Please tag me in this story when it's out! 10/10
Moveset: Tackle, Astonish, Feint Attack, Phantom Force.
Nice, basic moveset. I don't think Phantom Force is a very common move, so points for that! 10/10
Other: (Creator: For (most) role plays, Abby is a shiny.)
Okay. 10/10 Good to see shiny Pokémon.
Overall score: 73.5/80
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