So, hopefully this first review can be a good example.

GreyRavenKing23

Name: Shock Meistr
Interesting name, I like it, but Meistr is misspelled and may be a bit hard to understand. 7.5/10
Age: 19
Nice age. 10/10
Pokémon: Magneton
Magneton isn't a Pokémon for an OC you'd see often. 10/10 on your Pokémon choice!
Personality: Loves to play pranks and loves to shock people, has a bad flaw of short circuiting the electrical systems wherever he is.
That's a good personality! But does he short circuit the systems by accident or on purpose? 8/10
Likes: Pranks, and reading romance
Interesting. 9/10
Dislikes: short circuiting electronics
Again, needs an explanation of by accident or on purpose. But I assume it's by accident so 8/10 for this.

Overall score: 52 points! Because you didn't include the optionals in your form, I can't mark it out of 100. Instead I will mark it out of 70. 52/70!