Title:
The night that changed everything

Author:
MsCrysaniaMajere

Review:

The cover is amazing. I liked it as this completely portrayed the BL story.
The title is actually pretty interesting as I had disbelief of long titles but this one certainly can be used for a romance, action, horror etc and so many genres. Great job with this 👏
Description was good but it was a little much short. I mean I love short descriptions but this was much short then expected. So I would request you to make it a little...just a little long!

The first chapter was soooo good. It was wonderful and expressed the emotions so perfectly. The anger and drunk feeling was described so perfectly.

Character development was wonderful I liked the development of Wei. It was so good. I am out of words for this.

Plot was good and unexpected type. But I expect the plot to be more twisted and interesting. So that it can be interesting Romance tale. I would suggest you to add another genre with romance, it suits a lot and makes the plots interesting especially for BL Stories!

Grammar was way good but still it should be more correct. There was some sentence and tense problem was there. I hope you will clear it during editing.

Rating: 3.5 out of 5.5

PS:
Everything I said was my opinion if I have said anything wrong then please forgive me!
And all the best of your future!❤️