|Haiku|
for wattpad poetry contest
#wattpadpoetry2017 #mayisflowering

That lily flower
She's still waiting for that fly
Who sat on her, first.

Dears,
Plz help me with suggestions to make this work better.

And, readers of Slowly, yet Suddenly,

Was it clear who was killed by our narrator? Plz react, for I have to make it clear today who that was, if not.
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Love,
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