Pinjara Khubsoorti ka ~ 1
So finally , after ages I have updated this story and may be you all forget the first part so , i posted it again . The story have more then 6000 words , So I can't post them together, so I added 2000 words in its first part . Will post second one soon , as it is almost half written . I have divided this part in two parts , those who have read it's first part a month ago can check its 2nd part . You will find it easily , but it would be better if you read it again .
Now , I will not waste your more time , go and read the update .
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{ Part 1 }
we can see a girl sleeping in her king - sized bed . And some sun rays are falling on her face making her face more bright and shiny . She starts feeling irritated in sleep . After a lot of difficulty , she starts opening her dark brown deep beautiful eyes . As she opens her eyes , she takes a yawn and her glossy pink lips change into a beautiful smile . Her prettiest cheeks change into dimples making her face looking more cute .
She came down from her bed . Just then her room door opens . A lady in her mid 40's enters the room with a tray and wishes her good morning with a smile . But her smile vanished when she saw sun rays on the girl's face . She keeps the tray on table and rushes to the window and closes it and says : bela ye kya baat hai , Tumne fhir window khol li , beta sunlight se tumhari white milky fairy skin dark ho jayegi . Tumhari beauty kam ho jayegi . Kitni baar mana kiya hai window kholne se . Agar ab mujhe tumhare room ki window khuli dikhi , toh mai isse permanently close karwa dungi . Waha table par face pack and roses rakhe hai . Face and body par ache se laga lena okay . Aur fir gym mai jaake thodi exercise karke fir hot bath lena . Isse tumhari body fit rahegi .
Bela : okay mom . I'll do it .
Lady goes .
Bela's Pov
Aapko kya laga , yahi na ki meri mom mere liye tray mai breakfast ya bed tea laayi hongi . Mere subah se shaam tak ka schedule sirf apne aap ko khubsurat rakhna hai . Aapne dekha hoga logon ko morning mai milk peete hue . But mere naseeb mai toh morning mai milk se bath karke apne body ko beautiful rakhna hai . Mene aaj tak bed tea , bed breakfast and morning milk enjoy hi nahi kiya . Yahan tak ki lunch se phle bhi mujhe face pack lagane ko kaha jaata hai . Mai independent aur rich hokar bhi ek kaid mai jee rahi hu . Jahan muje meri marzi ka khaana tak nahi milta . Mene aaj tak apne ghar k servants aur neighbours ko nahi dekha because sabka kehna hai ki usse mujhe nazar ( evil eyes ) lag jaayegi . Aapko sun kar believe nahi hoga ki mere paas tv , laptop aur smart phone bhi nahi hai . You know why because meri eyes are weak ho sakti hai aur spectacles se meri beauty kam ho jayegi . Aapko lag raha hoga ki kaisi hu mai , jo jabse khud ko beautiful kehne ka koi moka hi nahi chod rahi par kya karu . Subah se shaam tak yahi word toh sunti hu sabse . Duniya dekhi hi nahi hai , isliye es duniya k aur khubsurat or colorful shabd bhi nahi pata mujhe . Mere four friends hai , and they are the four walls of this room . Mujhe nafrat hai meri khubsurti se , kyuki es khubsurti ne mujse meri khusiyaan cheeni hai . Es khubsurti ki wajah se meri behen ko jalan hai mujhse . Es khubsurti ki wajah se mai apne maa papa ko apni kaabiliyat (ability) nahi dikha paayi . Doctor banna chahti thi , par ban nahi paayi , kyuki kabhi college hi nahi jaa paayi . 10th k baad , apne kamre jaise pinjare mai band ho gayi . Par mai uneducated bhi nahi hu . Because meri dil ki dhadkan , meri dost , meri cousin , Dr. Vishakha , haa woh doctor ban gayi . Shayad mai bhi ban jaati , agar exams de paati toh but woh mujhe padati thi . Mene doctor banne ki padhai ( study ) toh ki hai , par kabhi exam nahi de paayi . Isliye aaj bhi mera Dr. Bela sharma kehlaane ka sapna adhura hai . Talaash hai toh bs ek mouke ki . Aur woh mouka shayad mujhe wahi de skta hai . Joh meri khubsurti nahi meri kaabiliyat dekhe . Meri zindagi shayad un khubsurat panchiyon ki tarah hai jinhe ek pinjare mai kaid kar diya jaata hai . Unke pankh hone k baad bhi woh udd nahi paate hai . Kyuki woh pinjara unse unki udaan cheen leta hai . Mai bhi bilkul un khubsurat panchiyon ki tarah hi hu . Jisko ek pinjare mai kaid karke , uski udaan cheen li gayi . Itni padi likhi hote hue bhi mai kuch ban nahi paayi . Meri khubsurti hi meri pehchaan ban gayi .
"Chaliye bahut ho gayi baatein , mera gym jaane ka time ho gaya hai."
Bela's Pov ends .
when she completes massaging her face with rose petals . She goes to the gym and completes her exercise . It's day time and she is writing something in her diary . Just then, her door opens and her lifeline vishakha enters , making her jump in happiness . She goes and hugs her . Then she goes and locks the door .
Vish : Beautiful , you know why I paid a sudden visit there today .
Bela : I know , because you missed me right .
Vish ; yes , but today I have a surprise for you .
Bela : SURPRISE ! WOW ! Tell me what it is ?
Vish smiles at her cuteness and takes out a gift box from her bag . Bela opens it . As she frees it . She was shocked to see it .
Bela : wow ! Vish tumne new mobile liya hai . Bahut acha model hai . Take it .
Vish ; no , this is not for me . This is for you . I purchased it for you . So that you will feel bored . Please keep it away from everyone . If anyone sees it , then they will snatch it from you . And one more thing . Don't use it much , otherwise you get dark circles and your mother will doubt and take it away from you , Okay .
By listening to this , Bela jumped in happiness and hugged vish tightly .
Bela ; thank you ! Thank you so much for this gift . I love you so much . Now I will be able to see the outside world through it .
Vish smiles seeing her happiness . As she knows , her relatives make her suffer so much . She is not able to live her life independently . So , she wants to give her a little happiness . Vish tells her how to use it . After a little chit chat . Vish bids bye to bela . Bela sees its sunset timing . So , she opens the window and stands there to see the beautiful evening
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Otherside ,
A boy of mid 20's in his tees and shorts , making coffee in his kitchen .
Boy's Pov
Welcome to Mumbai mahir , mumbai toh aa gaya , job bhi mil gayi , Flat bhi le liya . Saaman bhi set kar liya . Ab bs mumbai ka famous sunset dekhne ki baari hai .
By saying this , he pours the coffee in the cup and goes to his balcony and keeps the mug at the side table and stands there feeling the cold breeze . He starts seeing his surroundings . Just then , his eyes fall on a Window , where a very beautiful girl is standing with a bright smile . He starts admiring her beauty .
Mahir didn't believe his eyes , he rubs his eyes and opens them again and sees the girl talking with the birds . Like she knows them and they understand her talks . Her prettiest smile starts making him feel goosebumps in his stomach .
Mahir : wow ! She is an angel . How beautiful she is , from inside and outside . Yeah ! Her heart looks like a heart of gold . And I can say that her inner beauty is the real reason for her outer beauty .
Mahir pov ends , when bela's mother closes the window , making him confused . He starts searching for another window but the room is totally closed .
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Bela's mother ; bela how many times , I need to tell you that the city dust is not good for your face . Why didn't you listen to me ? Baby , I care about you . That's why I stop you from doing all this .
Bela : no you are wrong ! You didn't care about me . You cared about my beauty only . That's why you kept in this room for the past 8 years and didn't let me go outside to see the outside world . You know , you make this room a cage for me . A cage which is made up of my beauty .
Bela's mother ; what do you get outside ? Outside world is not good for beautiful girls . People use you for their own . This modern world is not good for innocent , naive , beautiful girls like you . You know who lives outside this room , monsters . Yes , monsters ! All the people are devils outside this room . They trap innocent girls and ditch them and make their souls impure . You know , you are an angel sent by god with a pure heart . You didn't deserve devils and monsters . You deserve an angel like you and I'm sure he will come one day . Till then , I will protect you from all the evil eyes . I will not let those monsters hurt you .
Bela : but mom there are many beautiful girls in the world . Why only me ? Why do I have to live in this cage ?
Bela's mother ; baby , I can't save every girl of the world . They have to stand and fight for themselves . I have just taken an initiative by keeping you away from all the evil eyes because my baby is so innocent and naive . You are not strong enough to face those devils . You must be thinking that why I kept you away from mobiles and all . It's because of social media , a lot of faq people's lives . They will take your advantage . By hacking your address , mobile number or anything . And you know na , your father doesn't like television . That's why you are not permitted to watch it . Baby , never ditch your mother or never lie to me . Because you are my lifeline . You know na , I'm the one who called vish as your personal tutor . Who can teach you? So , that my baby will not remain illiterate . You want to know na , why I didn't let you see outside the window . It's because many of the evil eyes are waiting for an angel , who can satisfy their wants . And if they saw you . They will take you away from me . They will take you in the world of darkness . Baby , I have done everything , a mother could do . I have completed all my responsibilities . Now , you have to decide , Is your mother doing wrong by keeping you away from monsters ? If yes , then tell me , I will free you from this cage . My daughter's happiness is everything for me . Your happiness is mine .
Bela : no mom , you can never be wrong .
Bela's mother : that's like my baby . Now , I have to go . Your dad must be waiting for me .
She said while hugging her . She leaves her after a while and goes from there .
( guys what do you think , bela's mother is saying anything wrong ? I guess not , what's your opinion on this ? Is the modern world safe for girls ? If Bella is outside the cage then will she be safe till now ? According to me no because somewhere this world is responsible for her living in cage not her parents. )
Bela in mind : sorry mom for lying from you . I have a mobile but I can't tell you about it . But I promise , I will not misuse it . I will use it for learning new things .
Otherside , Bella's mother Poonam is walking in the corridor thinking something .
Flashback ;
Bela' father yashkant came inside the house with so much anger . He goes to poonam and holds her hand tightly .
Yashkant : tumhe es ghar mai , maine sirf ek hi kaam diya hai aur woh hai bela ka dhyaan rakhna but woh bhi tumse nahi hota . Kitni baar kaha hai ki bela k room ki window humesa close rakhna hai but tum itna bhi dhyaan nahi rakh sakti . Abhi maine office se aate waqt dekha ki bela window par khadi hai . Shayad tum bhul rahi ho ki bela ko hume es duniya se dur rakhna hai . Woh kisi aur ki amaanat hai aur hum bas uski jimmedaari le rahe hai . Aur tum janti ho , issi wajah se mene bela ko sabse dur rakha hai . Aur bs usse khubsurat banaye rakhna hai by face and body both . Jisse jab woh bela ko lene aaye tab woh humari parwarish par sawaal nahi uthaaye . Woh ye nahi kahe ki humne unki bahu ko khubsurat nahi rakha , uska dhyaan nahi rakha . Hum phle hi mere friend k saath contract sign kar chuke hai ki bela sirf unke ghar ki bahu banegi . Unka beta yuvi jald hi london se waapas aane wala hai . Tab hum unki bela ko unhe sounp denge . Bela k itne saal tak duniya se chupi rehne ki condition bhi unki hi thi . Aur tum janti mai mere vaado ka pakka hu . So , agli baar se mujhe sikaayat ka moka mat dena . Jao aur usse samjhakar aao . usse es contract k baare mai pata nahi lagna chahiye . Aur aise samjhaana ki aaj k baad window nahi khule .
Poonam nodes in affirmation . Tears are flowing continuously from her eyes .
She goes to Bella's room and closes the window and makes her sit on bed .
Flashback Ends .
A teardrop escapes from her eyes thinking all this .
Poonam's Pov ;
Shayad mai es duniya ki sabse badnaseeb maa hu . Jisne apni bachi ki khushiyon ka gala apne haathon se gouth diya . Jo apni bachi k liye kuch nahi kar sakti . Jo apni beti ko angel k sapne dikha kar , usse ek rakshas k hawaale kar degi . Kaash mai kuch kar paati apni beti k liye . Kaash mai usse es narak se dur le jaa paati . Kaash mai woh souda 8 saal phle rok paati , par mujhme himmat hi nahi thi . Bela teri maa bahut kamzor hai . Aur Shayad mene tujhe bhi kamzor bana diya hai . Shayad tu bhi kabhi galat k khilaaf , meri tarah stand nahi kar paayegi . Hey baghbaan meri beti ko shakti deta . Usse meri tarah kamzor aur bujjdil nahi ban ne dena . Mene sabse chupkar jo usse education dilwaayi hai , usse uski taaqat bana na . Usse galat k khilaf stand karwaana . Jisse aur zindagiyaan barbaad naa ho .
Poonam's Pov Ends .
{ PART - 2 }
Bela mother goes out and Bella opens her new mobile and starts surfing through the internet and starts seeing the outside world , through pictures and videos .
Otherside , Mahir, who was waiting for her to come in the window , gets sad when she doesn't come . He waits for her till night but he goes inside when he gets his mother's call .
Mahir : Hello mom , I reached safely here and am going to sleep . But waha toh morning ho rahi hogi naa abhi . So aapko good morning .
Sumi : mahir , we are coming to India .
Mahir : Wow ! When ? How ?
Sumi : for your brother's marriage .
Mahir : cool , come soon mom . I'm super excited for bro marriage .
Sumi smiles , both chit - chatted for sometime and then Sumi cuts the call .
At morning ,
Vish comes to meet bela but bela was in the washroom , so she stands on the window . Mahir, who was passing from his balcony , sees the window open . He goes to the balcony and sees that there is some other girl standing . He thinks to talk to her , to know about Bela . He threw a paper aeroplane towards vish , which hit vish . Vish gazes falls on mahir and she sees mahir is calling her to meet him . Vish thinks that he is flirting with her . So , she thinks to flirt back . She waves at him . He signals her to come to his house . Vish after thinking a little decides to go . She reaches his flat . Mahir welcomed her and asked her to sit .
Mahir : hi , I'm mahir .
Vish : I'm vish .
Mahir : Actually I want to know something from you . Yesterday evening , I saw an angel at the same window , where you were standing a few minutes ago . So , i want to know about her .
Vish : she is my cousin as well as best friend . I can't tell you much about her .
Mahir : but why ? Even her window seems to be locked for all time . I have not seen her coming out of her house .
Vish : She is locked in her house , her room is a cage , a prison . Her parents did not allow her to go outside because she is beautiful .
Mahir : what the hell ? What's her mistake in this , if she is beautiful ?
Vish : I don't know but she had been kept away from this world .
Mahir : Everyone has the right to live freely and happily . Why don't you complain to the police about this abnormal behaviour of her parents?
Vish - Bela is the daughter of yashkant malhotra , Her father is collector . So tell me , on which police station , I can file a complaint , even if Bela is so innocent , she can't see her father in problem , she will never do this . You know she has so many dreams , dreams to fly , dream to see this beautiful world , dream of becoming a doctor.
Mahir shocks by vish statement
Mahir : Then , let's complete her dreams. Is she mobile or something ? By which we can help her or can contact her easily . Will you help me in freeing her out of the cage , made up of her own beauty .
Vish : But why do you want to do this ? Why do you want to free her ? You are a stranger , how can I believe you ? What if you are plotting something against us ? What if you want to use bela and take advantage of her ?
Mahir : You are also like other women , you women can do anything but can't forget your that shitty spying habit . Did you really think I am plotting something against her ? If I'm a bad person then I was not talking to you , I can also take advantage of you . But i haven't . I'm a CBI officer or more of the thing , I'm not like Indians , who use women for their own . I'm from the U.S. .
Vish : But why do you want to help bela ?
Mahir ; because I love her , you wouldn't believe , but I have fallen in love with her when I saw her for the first time . I'm not attracted to her beauty . You all know about her outer beauty but I know about her inner beauty , she has a heart of gold , who always wants to help others but can't because of her cage . She wants to fly high , to achieve her dreams , just to make her parents feel proud . She is someone who hates her beauty , while the others love to be beautiful . She is so different from you all . I know , she dreamt to be a doctor , so that she can help others , so that she can give life to someone but unfortunately , such an angel has been kept away from this world .
Vish : you just saw her one time and got to know so much about her . Which even I don't know . Impressive ! Ahhaan ( smirks )
Mahir : I guess this is what we call love , it has some mysterious powers .
Vish : Okay then , now I can believe you are a trustful person . This is her number but if possible then call her at late night because she can't use her mobile infront of her parents . I provide it to her secretly . She will surely get happy to see you . Nice to meet you . All the best ! I guess I should take a leave now.
Vish leaves . Mahir jumps in happiness .
At night , around 1 am , Mahir calls on bela's number .
Bela picks up the call .
Bela : hello
Mahir : hello !
Bela finds his voice soulful : aap kon ?
Mahir : bas itna samaj lijiye , aapko aapke khubsurti ke pinjare se aazaad karane wala .
Bela : matlab ? Aap hain koun ? How do you know me ?
Mahir : I'm the one , who will help you to come out of your cage and live your life freely . You want to explore the world , see the most beautiful things of this world , right ?
Bela : ummmm yes , but who are you ? And how did you get my number ?
Mahir : Well ! For now , just imagine me as your friend . And I got your number through vish and you trust her right then trust me as well . Just do what I say , I will help you in chasing your dreams . Now wear a burka and come to your room window , okay !
Bela nodes . She is so confused but excited as well . As she is going to see the outside world .
She wears a burqa and comes to her window . She finds a wooden stair there and a man of mid 20's standing holding it but his face is covered with a mask and she found all the guards in a deep slumber . He signs her to come down from stairs . Bela starts coming slowly without doing any sound , as she reaches at the last second stair , she loses her balance and results in falling directly in the man's arms . Both see each other's eyes and get lost in it , forgetting their position and place both . But a notification buzzs in mahir's mobile , making him come to his senses . He makes Bela stand and hide the stairs . He holds her hand and comes out of the bungalow secretly .
Bela : tum mujhe kaha le jaa rahe ho ?
Mahir : just believe me for once and don't ask any questions . Just come with me .
He made her sit in his car and took her to a place , he took bela's out , bela got surprised seeing the place . As it is just wow . It is a complete view . It is surrounded by mountains , a river with small waves , a sky is full of stars and a moon shining brightly . Fireflies are fulfilling the need for lights . And Small cold winds are touching her body , making her shiver a little , some rabbits are playing around and birds are singing in their melodious voice , trees leaves are waving like they are dancing . She gets astonished by seeing the beauty of nature . She goes and sits near the river and starts playing with river water , she goes and starts playing with rabbits , starts singing with birds and dancing with tree branches . She holds a firefly , making its light fall on her face , making her face more beautiful .
Bela is the happiest person in this world right now . She is doing everything she wants without any interruption . For the first time , she feels that she is living her life , just because of a man standing behind her .
Mahir is standing , seeing bela's innocence , her sparkling eyes , her prettiest smiles , her melodious voice , her childish acts , making him feel goosebumps in his body .
Bela sees his smile and shining eyes from his mask . She can feel that he is truly an angel , who is sent by the god to help her in chasing her dreams .
At the time of returning , there was no silence .
Bela : who are you ? Why are you helping me in getting freedom ? Are you doing this in order to get something in return?
Mahir : well , yes I'm doing this to get your friendship in return . Will I get it ? And my name is mahir .
Bela smiles and says : you have already got it .
Bela : But why are you wearing this mask ?
Mahir : hamari mohabbat ki kashti ko paar laga dijiye ,
Aashiq hai hum aapke , apna humnava banana lijiye .
Bela blushes and says : So , you are my admirer , impressive . So , let me see the face of my admirer .
Mahir : Wait , don't call me your admirer because I don't love your beauty and am not attracted to it . But I'm in love with your heart , where it is love only . I have not seen a person like you till now , I mean your parents have been caged you from 8 years but you have no hatred , no anger for them . It's really impressive , I mean how can someone be so good .
Bela : I have no hatred , no anger for them , because they have kept me in a cage to save me from the evil eyes of evil persons .
Mahir : But Bela , despite keeping you in a cage , they should've taught you how to fight from evil souls . Keeping someone in a cage is not right because everyone has the right to live , that too from their own ways .
Bela : Maybe , But I can't do anything with this , because this is my fate .
Mahir comes closer to her , that his nose his touched her neck , he says in her ears slowly : let's change the fate then , and you will get to see my face only when you fall in love with me . ( he smirks )
He backs off making Bela smile , she feels goosebumps and butterflies in her stomach , she feels some sensations in her body which she never felt .
Soon , they reach their destination , mahir drops bela at her home .
Mahir starts dancing as he got success in his first task . He wins trust and makes her meet nature .
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Next day ,
Bela's mother seems to be tensed , she goes in flashback ;
Flashback starts
Bela father : after a week , yuvraaj is coming to take bela with him . He wants to marry for his family as they will question him . So ... start the preparations and be remembered , no one should get to know about him buying bela , I said noone , even his family . Okay !
Flashback ends .
Bela mother : how can i let my bela marry a person who is 14 years older than her . The person who has purchased her , will surely use her as a thing , my bela will never be happy with him .
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A boy is seen in a room , caressing a big picture on the wall .
Person : bela , bela , bela .
Oh ! My darling , I'm coming. I have already waited for 8 long years but now I can't . Eight years ago , I came to India for some business deals. At that time , I saw you eating panipuri , your expressions have my heart , I got obsessed with you . I want to make you mine at any cost . I decided to know about you , I got to know your father after money , I purchased you from him and gave him 50 crores in return , even i made him collector . I want to take you with me that time only but you were 16 years old that time , what would I say to my family if I took you with me? So I ask your father to take care of you and your beauty for 8 years . So that I can marry you easily . I'm the one who doesn't want anyone to see your incredible beauty . So , After that day , I caged you between the four walls of your room . And now , I'm coming to make you mine .
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6 days passed , bela used to go with mahir daily . And these days , she got to know more about him . Today , she did something which shocks Mahir .
Mahir has taken her near the beach area . Bela held mahir hand and took him near the sea . Small cold waves are touching their feet . Bela holds his both hands .
bela : mahir , i just know your name , i have never seen you but i have seen your innocent heart , how you play with orphan kids , make them eat food , you did the first aid of strays . And being a stranger you did many things for me . How can anyone stop themselves in falling in love with you? You are perfect in every way . You are the one who loves my heart not my beauty and these all things make me fall for you . It's sarcastic to say that I have fallen in love with you in just 6 days but 6 seconds are enough for falling in love with someone . For 6 days , I was just thinking about you and today I realized that this is love only . When I saw you falling from my window , my breath got hitched , I was just praying for your well being . I just want to jump in to save you . And god saved you otherwise , i would have died , i never got to know when you became my life , my everything . Will you be my soulmate ?
Mahir : I was waiting for this day only Bela , I want you to love me back . I want to be your soulmate , your lover boy .
By saying this , he takes her into a tight hug .
Both hug each other and feel each other's heart beating faster after coming close .
To be Continued. .......
PROMO : BEHIR romance , yashkant to shot mahir .
Questions : what you think this love story is going to be a love triangle ? What will yashkant and yuvraaj do knowing this ? Is mahir and yuvraaj are brothers ? Will mahir sacrifice his love for his brother or something is hidden ?
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