🌲Romance Results🌲
Thank you so much to our Judge rsakshir for such quick and unbiased judging.
(Submitted on 10/12/2020).
Thank you to the participants who were very patient and supportive. Remember one thing, it takes a lot of courage to stood up in front of everyone with a book and go for a competition (though virtual) but it takes lot of courage! So you all deserve a good amount of appreciation for that.
Results & Reviews both are in the same chapter, first we will go for results then you all can scroll down for your reviews and check where you went wrong.
R E S U L T S
As promised, it's going to be only 1 book which will be a winner of this genre, and it is :
His Angel, Her Treasure by anupamarrao
Congratulations to you twinnie!!!
Participants don't get disheartened, check your review and see where you went wrong. There's no winning if we don't improve. And yes, don't forget to say thank you to your judge and the winner(s) a congratulations.
R E V I E W S
Here are the reviews :
Book Name: Yeah, my love story, Nevermind!
Author’s username: SavySagittarius
Scorecard:
i. Cover – 10/10
ii. Title – 10/10
iii. Blurb – 8/10
iv. Uniqueness/Cliche free – 6/10
v. Plot & Grammar – 8/10
vi. Character development – 10/15 (Can’t say it’s an ongoing book)
vii. Flow – 7/10
viii. Does the author followed you ? – 10/10
ix. Overall impression - 11/15
x. Total – 80/100
Review: The book is really nice. The description, dialogues and everything are at place. I felt that the story is a little slow, the chapters are not very eventful. I didn’t find any sub-plot in the book till now, which is not a good thing. All the teasing, romantic moments and realization are there but there should be sub-plots too, like any temporary problem and while solving the problem the main character realizes her feelings. It will be more interesting than realizing feeling in her daily life with nothing special. Sub-plots will makes the book interesting and without them the book will become boring.
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Book Name: Insecure In Love
Author’s username: tishy1468
Scorecard:
i. Cover – 4/10
ii. Title – 6/10
iii. Blurb – 3/10
iv. Uniqueness/Cliche free – 7/10
v. Plot & Grammar – 6/10
vi. Character development – 8/15
vii. Flow – 8/10
viii. Does the author followed you? – 10/10
ix. Overall impression – 8/15
x. Total – 60/100
Review: The concept and the plot of the story was good. The cover should be changed, it doesn’t even have the author’s name. The blurb is also very short. One thing that bothered me very much was that there was no description. The book was full of dialogues. If there will be no description, the readers will not be able to feel the emotions and understand the situation. You should describe more, your story will become better.
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Book Name: His Angel, Her Treasure
Author’s username: anupamarrao
Scorecard:
i. Cover – 10/10
ii. Title – 8/10
iii. Blurb – 10/10
iv. Uniqueness/Cliche free – 8/10
v. Plot & Grammar – 8/10
vi. Character development – 10/15
vii. Flow – 8/10
viii. Does the author followed you? – 10/10
ix. Overall impression - 13/15
x. Total – 85/100
Review: The book is excellent. Honestly, I didn’t find any particular mistake in it. Everything in the book is taken care of. The authors’ efforts are clearly seen. The book is worth reading.
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Book Name: Blooming Hearts
Author’s username: Euphoric_18
Scorecard:
i. Cover – 7/10
ii. Title – 8/10
iii. Blurb – 8/10
iv. Uniqueness/Cliche free – 6/10
v. Plot & Grammar – 9/10
vi. Character development – 12/15
vii. Flow – 9/10
viii. Does the author followed you ? – 10/10
ix. Overall impression – 13/15
x. Total – 82/100
Review: This book is amazing. There is no particular mistake in this. The plot, grammar, character development and everything is nice. The cover and title are nice but they are very simple. You added a author’s note in the blurb which was not nice, you can edit it. That’s all. Overall the story is super amazing, the author has done an amazing job.
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Book Name: Bas Kuch Lamhe
Author’s username: khushi_sri
Scorecard:
i. Cover – 7/10
ii. Title – 8/10
iii. Blurb – 6/10
iv. Uniqueness/Cliche free – 8/10
v. Plot & Grammar – 7/10
vi. Character development – 10/15
vii. Flow – 6/10
viii. Does the author followed you ? – 10/10
ix. Overall impression – 10/15
x. Total – 72/100
Review: The story and the plot are nice. There is no particular mistake but yes, you should focus more on grammar and punctuations. There are many mistakes which are noticeable. Also, focus on showing emotions a little more. You describes things nicely but describing emotions in also important.
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