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01| Making it perfect

I suddenly got that Avneil feels and hopefully I will complete this one. Enjoy loves <333

Here is the story line I have created for perfect.

So, Avni and Manik are twins. But, Dayawanti Mehta never really knew about him as he was seperated from the family and Ashish had took care of him, so he was not in the fiascos that took over until Avni was shot. But after Neela took Avni abroad for her further medical assistance, she informed Ashish. Ashish reached London with Manik.

There, they lived as a family and in the process, Neela and Ashish had already begun to start a family of their own. I felt like Neela ma should have got her own story for her pure love, so this.

They had a little babygirl named Hansika.

Avni and Neela came back to India for the revenge and for Aman, whilst Ashish and the others stayed at London as Avni and Neela ma insisted.

Actually, Manik and Neil and Ali knew each other through college days, but they lost contact as the three happened to be busy with their post college life afterwards-- while, Neil's younger sister, Nandini Khanna had fallen in love with her brother's bestfriend. Their secret relationship continued until Manik reached India, (After Shweta accepted her mistakes and accepted Av, as her daughter) and he was shocked with the revelations. Soon after they were married, and then did happen the Juhi fiasco in this story.

After Avni was arrested, Ashish with Hansika came back.

(Avneet Kaur as Hansika Mehta)

But after all the Jail situation, everything was alright, and as Avni came back she got to know that Nandini was pregnant.

And Avni and Neil decided to start afresh.

Hope you're all cleared from confusions, and will enjoy.

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Avni and Neil, two different personalities bound to fall in love with the play of the cupid, fate. Avni was hot as fire, cold as storm, and hard as rock, but behind the iron shield masked self namely Ananya, there was a soft like petal, smooth like river, calm like sea, Avni was long dead. The pain, the revenge, the vengeance, the love, everything made her kill the Avni, and build Ananya.

And Neil? He was as sweet as chocolate, as handsome as sunset, and as cool as breeze. Anyone would fall for him, for his charms and his amazing personality. He was the apple of his parent's eyes, and annoying yet protective brother to his sisters. He was well mannered, and a perfectionist. And he was completely opposite of her.

Well they both got along. His love made her come back. Their story bloomed, but ofcourse, with a lot of difficulties and situations.

They opened up to each other.

He became her home. Something she could call as hers.

Avni watched as Neil, went through different outfits for her. He was being extra cautious, or maybe possessive in someway. She couldn't help but chuckle. His brows furrowed, lips almost in a pout, narrowly eyes. He was perfect.

"What's to laugh about Avni?" He asked.

"Because you look cute," She snatched an outfit from her hands, "We are fixing this,"

"Avi, we didn't even decide," Neil pointed.

"Yes we did. This,"She pointed to the outfit,"We are fixing this."

"What? - you didn't even wear it."

"For God's sake Neil, it's been almost an hour an a half since we're here,"

Avni was never a shopaholic person. Infact, she hated shopping. She tried her best to avoid, but Neil insisted.

"Fine," He pouted as he walked behind her like a lost puppy, "Ajeeb ladki,"

They had to be at home at 6:30 pm, and it's almost like, 3:00. The family planned a trip for to relax after all the fiascos.

"Av, Where you at?" Manik cussed through the phone.

"Mall,"

"Still?"

"Ask your bestie yourself. He's been choosing an outfit for me for like hours," Avni rolled her eyes.

"Yaar, come fast. Maa is gonna explode!"

"Yep, I'm coming!"She quickly checked the bill, grabbed his hand and walked outside.

"We could have went for more options, you know?" Neil still complained, taking the cover from her and placing it on the backseat.

"We went for almost half of that shop, Neil. Stop being dramatic about it," She rolled her eyes and got inside. "Did you planned to spend this day on shopping? Because I don't."

"We have time yet." He chided as he started the engine, turning the steering while having an eye on the rear view mirror.

"No, we don't. It's three. And we have to leave at 6:30." Avni replied calmly, as she shamelessly ogled over how his right hand turned the steering and his left hand changed the gear and all those muscles flexed.

"Oh, it's three already?" He raised his eyebrows, furrowing at how time passed. "Can't even have a grip on time when I'm with you," He grinned cheekily after that.

Avni turned sideways, "Well, was that supposed to be sweet or flirty?"

"I don't know, both maybe?" He wriggled his eyebrows, smiling afterwards as she laughed whole heartily.

Further more seconds, Neil noticed something and he abruptly pulled the break over. "What's wrong?" Avni asked, turning playfully only to stop herself as he leaned over her suddenly. Her breath was caught in her throat and eyes were intensifying to a round doe.

Neil's hazel brown eyes never left hers as he pulled the seat belt and tucked it on the lock. He stopped the grin on his lips watching her getting shocked and flushed and left a peck on her rosy cheeks before he sat on his place.

"You're so careless, baby." He muttered and continued driving, and Avni smacked his arm recovering that she had been just teased.

"Oww, why'd you always slap me? hanikarak wifey," He muttered the last line under his breath and rubbed the spot where she slapped. Avni, as in reply, just rolled her eyes.

"Where are we going?" Avni asked.

"Where do you want to go?" He asked with a sweet smile, rubbing her fingers intertwined with his.

"Beach?"

"Okay." Neil replied and turned the car to left.

***

Avni and Neil got down from the car, and it was almost near sunset --- the sky above wore orange hue, like the sun had soared herself through the sky painting it's own little ministrations, and the sea reflecting it, while also kissing the sand occasionally.

Perfect. Avni had always been a fan of beautiful sunsets. She didn't know how, but sunsets always cleared her hectic mind. And she had always wanted to watch sunsets with Neil, it was one of wishlists she had wanted to spend with him, that he does not know.

She ran to the sand, and Neil watched, mesmerized, at how her beautiful figure was contrasted by the orange hue. Her long shall flew in a rhythm with her hair. The churidar that she had wore was perfect for her.

He walked behind her, watching and adoring at how that playfulness came out as she played with the waves.

As Avni walked backwards from the waves she crashed onto Neil's back. Neil smiled and held her closer wrapping his arm around her waist. Avni smiled, whilst having that deepest shade of scarlet adoring her cheeks and leaned back into his warmth.

Avni and Neil walked forward together and ran back when the waves crawled through the sand for them, laughing stupidly.

Avni pushed him and ran across the sand, laughing, her beautiful laughs reaching his ear as melodies of love as he ran behind her, and caught her by her waist, turning her towards him.

Avni smiled, as he lovingly put her hair behind her ear. "Promise me that this is forever," She whispered staring deeply into that brown chocolate orbs.

Neil drowned in the galaxy that she had held in her beautiful eyes, cupping her cheeks and kissing her forehead, lingering his lips there longer. "I promise," He whispered as he touched her forehead with hers, while the sun bathed in the sea.

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