Congratulations to the winners!

There will be three placement winners and one honorable mention, so four overall winners. Apologies, I would like to have two honorable mentions, but with the amount of backouts for this contest, it's just not possible. This category and the best grammar category will only have one honorable mention due to frequent backouts, my apologies for that.

If you have any questions or concerns, please let me know, though I am not tolerating disrespect or hate.

Please read your review all the way through before asking questions since I sometimes take a while to explain, so your question may be answered by the time I finish up the review.

Next: I am working on best grammar and best world.

Now that the contest is more than halfway complete, I am no longer allowing backouts.

Like with most of the categories, keep in mind this is more subjective than my other contests. Some placements may boil down to what endings had me more hooked on a personal level rather than an objective level, though everyone will, of course, get objective critiques. Remember that for a best ending contest, I'm looking for something that will really stick with me, so that's why it's more subjective.

This was yet another really hard decision. All of the endings had many strengths, so choosing only four was extremely difficult. Good job, everyone.

Like, seriously. No one got more than two real critiques. Two. Y'all slayed, so all of you should be very proud.

Only six categories left!

3rd Place

First Kiss by LAJoyner

Review:

I love the whole concept of each member getting a "first" story, like Namjoon with first dance, and I'd definitely be interested in seeing more in the series, if you're interested in writing more. I thought this was another solid entry with that core "first" idea, and the ending reflects that well.

You put a lot of emphasis on the kissing without it getting too much, which I thought was a great balance that fit in with the story idea/title. The details added to the kissing were nice, too. I thought they had good word choice and dynamic sentence structure to make them feel more unique from one another while also packing a nice emotional punch. I felt like I was there with the characters while you were describing it. I don't know, it felt... homey? Is that a good word for it? It's like I could feel the warmth coming from the words, if that makes sense.

Another thing I enjoyed was the line "I'm still in love, for what it's worth." I know it may seem silly to point out a single line of dialogue, but I think it's important and really reflects the mood of the narrative along with the feelings going through the main characters at the point of that scene. In general, I liked the tonal consistency here, and you did a good job making the moment feel realistic and engaging from the very first paragraph to the very last one, making for a good ending.

I only have two critiques. First, let's take a look at this:

And he kisses you again, this time tasting your lips with his tongue. You sigh, and his tongue finds yours. He pulls you up against him, deepening the kiss. He whispers next to your ear as he nuzzles his face in your hair, "I was in love with you then. I'm still in love, for what it's worth."

You apologized, telling him, " Koo, I'm so sorry. All these years, I blamed you for things you didn't do."

Like I mentioned earlier, I like that line ("I blamed you for things you didn't do"), so that's not the issue at all. This is a small thing, but I recommend considering making this dialogue connect a bit more. It feels like "Koo, I'm so sorry. All these years, I blamed you for things you didn't do" didn't really connect with the "I was in love with you then. I'm still in love, for what it's worth." Consider adding a transitional line where she acknowledges his previous words, since it kinda felt like she skipped over them and didn't really acknowledge them. Even just an "I know" could do the trick, if that makes sense.

The second thing is how many references there are; be careful with overdoing the references, like I liked the "I blamed you for things you didn't do" and "I'm still in love, for what it's worth" and thought both of them were clever, but then the "Hating you was the only way it didn't hurt" started to feel a bit forced since it was so close to the last references and felt like it wasn't needed. The references back-to-back in close proximity were a little distracting, especially for an emotional chapter, so that's why I suggest considering playing around with the dialogue and finding more unique ways to express this aside from references. Not that there's anything inherently wrong with them, it just felt a little out of place to use that right after having two references in a row, if that makes sense. It doesn't have to be the hate line, either, maybe you can tweak the "I'm still in love, for what it's worth" to something that expresses he'll always love her, depending on how you think Jungkook would talk to her in his speech style. It's just that since there were a bunch of references back-to-back, it made the dialogue feel less original to this story, if that makes any sense. I fear I'm not making sense, but I'm pretty much trying to say be careful with overdoing the references, especially in dialogue since it can easily end up feeling forced and unnatural for people to speak in that manner, so I encourage you to play around with it and find what works for you. I don't have any specific dialogue alternative ideas since I'm not too too familiar with their speech styles, though I encourage you to play around with it wherever you see fit, if you're interested.

Overall, the ending does a great job bringing the "first" concept full circle and wrapping up the book. I like the "first" idea and would be interested to see more of it, but beyond that, the ending for this book is good and makes the reader feel immersed in the moment with the warm descriptions that do a great job portraying the kisses and emotions. I only had two critiques, and the ending was overall solid.

2nd Place

The Duke's Secrets: Christmas Special 2023 by J_Lunar 

Review:

The ending for this book is very cute, and I liked how they didn't end up having this grand, big kiss, and it was smaller scale and focused on being cute and wholesome. In general, this is a small scale story celebrating life, love, and the holidays, so the ending matched those vibes well and did a good job bringing the story to a close. I loved "Mr." and "Mrs." Santa's final interaction together and thought it was super wholesome. Tooth-rotting fluff, if you will.

The dialogue made sense and flowed well, feeling connected and like it belonged. No moment felt forced, which is another reason why I liked that they didn't have a grand kiss at the end and you instead focused more on the soft side of their relationship. I really, really can't overstate how much I enjoyed that they didn't have this giant kissing moment and instead just appreciated each other's presence, and the Duke gave her a present. It was the best way to possibly take the ending, in my opinion. Taking it in that more down-to-earth, casual route was the best choice for this storyline. All my opinion, of course, though I think anyone who reads it will feel the same way.

But even outside of the choice to keep it more lowkey, it had many nice moments with the character interactions, the teasing, the humor, and the pretty environments that definitely captured the holiday spirit, which was yet another aspect of the ending that I enjoyed.

I don't really have much in the way of critiques since it was well-written and made sense for the book, so I'm not going to say anything in terms of critiques. None of the (very few) grammar/spelling errors were distracting, so I don't have anything to say about that, either.

Overall, the ending wrapped up this cute Christmas special really well and will give readers a wholesome vibe they'll appreciate. It was a cute, tooth-rotting fluffy Christmas special that will have fans of the series excited, but even those who haven't read the original book can find enjoyment since it's entertaining and wholesome with a cute message surrounding love during the holidays. All in all, good job with this ending.

1st Place

Tomatoes by Jahools

Review:

I think what really sold me on the ending was the very last paragraph with Yoongi and Hoseok in the garden, and Yoongi's final lines were extremely impactful. I'd say Yoongi's final lines alone makes the entire book worth it, and that's just one moment in an overall solid story that manages to make the ending tragic yet happy at the same time, pulling at your heartstrings.

The whole ending chapter (looking at chapter nine, not the epilogue) is solid and flows well, though that last moment in particular stood out to me. Considering that's literally the end of the entire story, that makes sense, and that's a very good thing that you're leaving a lasting impact with your final lines.

The epilogue is okay. It isn't nearly as emotionally impactful as chapter nine, but it does what it needs to to wrap up the storyline, so no complaints here about that.

Moving back into the core of the ending, I thought it was great and did a great job wrapping up loose ends, tying Yoongi and Hoseok's emotions together, and making the audience really feel something. The entire storyline being so simple yet emotionally complex made for an even stronger ending that's creative and extremely fresh in the BTS genre. Even if you don't know BTS, I think you could get into this story since it focuses more on the emotions, and with a title like Tomatoes, I'm sure it at least makes you curious, right?

I only have one critique about the emotions, and it's this one moment here:

"Yes," Hoseok said quietly.

"Hi."

Tears began streaming down Hoseok's face as he heard the voice he'd been missing for so long. "Hi, Yoon."

There's nothing bad about this moment or anything like that, though considering this is the big reunion here, consider slowing it down a bit more and giving us more description about what's happening. It goes very quickly from Namjoon talking to Hoseok to Hoseok answering with the "Yes" to now Yoongi's talking, so consider slowing down a bit. Not much, but a bit, just to flesh out this moment and Hoseok's feelings more. While the crying is fine and works for this kind of moment, consider diversifying the feelings here and giving us more insight into what Hoseok's feelings are. Since this is the final chapter, and the chapters are typically long while this one is on the shorter side (which is fine; there's nothing wrong with short or long chapters), I think you could definitely get away with adding more, if you're interested. But that was really the only moment where I thought it could use some more detail, especially since it's such a crucial moment where Hoseok hears Yoongi's voice again.

Overall, the ending is strong and works in context of the book but also just if you read it on its own. Without needing to read the whole book, you can still somehow understand what's happening because the emotions are universal here. You give us enough to work with to understand everything happening in a coherent manner where everything flows well, so I overall think you did a good job with this ending.

Honorable Mention

That Joseon Rain by IR3NIC

Review:

Before I even get into the ending, I just want to say That Joseon Rain is a cool title, and I really like it. That has nothing to do with my thoughts on the ending, though I wanted to appreciate it for a second since that title caught my eye.

Anywho, moving into the review itself, I appreciate the world, and seeing this has me excited to judge your entry for the best worldbuilding category since the world was strong in Sweet Tears, and it's strong here, too. It may not seem like a big deal for a best ending category, but considering the world is a major part of your genre, it's a pretty big deal that you got the world down and could immerse people in the moment and what's going on, that way they can attach more to the characters as they're going through changes.

Another thing I'll mention is I liked Myrah's send off and how her death was handled. She had a last battle and was able to try her best to get out of there, but to no avail. I liked the final reflection she had about being the villain and thought that was interesting and well-done. I think the send off to her character is the best part of the ending and made it engaging and intriguing to read about.

The last thing I'll get into before talking about my critique is that I liked seeing Myrah and Jin interact one more time before the last battle Myrah has. I thought it was good to give them that closure, even if it wasn't on the best terms, since it gave more depth to the ending and to them as individuals. So I liked the small details you included to make the ending feel more well-rounded.

The only critique I have is I feel this needed another chapter from Jimin's POV or an epilogue just to wrap up what happens after her death. It feels a bit incomplete in that regard. You tell us what happens in the author's note after, but I'd much prefer to be shown it in a more cinematic chapter, even a short one that's just 300-500 words showing Jimin's reaction to her death. Considering he's a major character, it felt a bit incomplete to not get his reaction. The thing that makes character deaths so sad is not necessarily the death itself (though that is, of course, a factor), but rather other characters' reactions to said deaths. I'd say the emotions in a character death are 50% the death itself and 50% the reactions and aftermath. So that's why I suggest considering an epilogue or a final cinematic glimpse into the world after her death showcasing Jimin's reaction. I hope that makes sense!

Overall, the ending was interesting and fit in with the chosen genre, and that when combined with other elements, like the strong world, made for an engaging read with a solid final chapter that will keep readers interested in your writing. I had a critique about potentially including more about Jimin since it felt a little incomplete in that regard, but it did a good job wrapping up Myrah's character, so good job.

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Our Destiny by shukurenai2009

Review:

I think you did a good job ending this story, wrapping it up in a fun way with lots of energy. I could feel the energy oozing from the page, and I enjoyed the uplifting message you left us with. There's nothing wrong with sad endings or even bittersweet endings, but I liked seeing a positive ending for the main cast here, and I think it was well-deserved and felt like the right ending for the chosen narrative and characters. The happy ending made me... well, happy!

What I really liked was the moment at the end with Y/n standing in front of her father's grave and honoring him. I thought that moment was super sweet and was well-placed where it felt like it belonged and not forced in any way just to get a teary reaction from the audience. It felt natural and did a good job giving readers a strong insight into Y/n's final mental state right before the story ends, which is really good and had me smiling on behalf of her since I could tell she was proud of how far she came, and I was proud of her, too.

To summarize, I think this was a great ending for the storyline you chose. It wrapped up loose ends without overstaying its welcome or overdoing it in any way, which was good, and I enjoyed it.

The critiques I have are the same as I've had in the past about script format since it can take away a lot of the emotion, and the same applies to emojis. I suggest not using emojis in dialogue since they can take away from the moment, and it's also hard to imagine them since words can't really have faces like emojis, so it can come off as a bit awkward. It's one thing if they're texting and emojis are used, but for spoken dialogue, I advise against it.

So with some tweaks to the dialogue and the removal of emojis from said dialogue, I think this could be even stronger than it already is, adding more emotion into the text since script format and emojis can take away from otherwise emotional and powerful scenes, so that's why I suggest using book format dialogue and no emojis unless the characters are texting. Like, for example, it could have been interesting to see more actions and descriptions during the grave scene. I still enjoyed Y/n talking to her father and paying tribute to him, though consider fleshing that out even more and giving her more to do during that moment to make it more impactful via her actions, environmental descriptions, and character thought/emotion descriptions. I hope that makes sense.

Overall, I thought the ending fit in well with the storyline, and I enjoyed how positive/uplifting it was, but also how there were bittersweet/deeper feelings connected to it through Y/n's father and how she honored him. I had a few critiques to help bring out more emotion from it, though I still think this ending works for the narrative and concludes the book well.

Just as a side note and not something that factors into your placement or even the review, but I strongly suggest marking this story as complete since it still shows up as ongoing for me. I'm not allowed to give the inner-workings of Wattpad away, but I can talk about some things, and Wattpad Ambassadors like myself can only recommend your books to the Ambassador profile reading lists if they're either an active ongoing story (meaning you've updated at least once for three consecutive months, like for September recs, you would have to update for August, July, and June) or marked as complete. So if you mark it as complete, any Ambassadors who stumble upon your story can now potentially recommend it to the Ambassador profile reading lists. Beyond that, it's also good for the algorithm if you mark it as complete. Wattpad pushes completed stories more than ongoing ones, in my experience. So yeah, that has nothing to do with the review, I just wanted to let you know that!

Two Negatives Make A Positive by midnight_breezee

Review:

Sad endings are something I honestly don't see too often in my reviewing and reading phases. I myself don't write sad endings that often, contrary to popular belief, and it's a rare thing that maybe happens in 10% of my books. So to see a sad ending here was interesting, and also fit in with what the theme of the story was. Sometimes sad endings can feel forced for sake of making the reader sad, but this story didn't have that problem and instead felt natural.

Another thing I liked was the whole eye thing and what the eyes represented, and also how Taehyung treats his eyes. It was a very touching idea, and I think it was executed well, too. It was a creative idea that made sense in context of the story and for the characters/the character traits we knew about throughout the narrative.

The last thing I'll mention before moving into critiques is I liked the last moment with Sri and Taehyung, where she faded away and he watched through her eyes (literally). It was a nice ending scene that was a good send off to Sri as a character, and it gave Taehyung a moment of closure. I didn't mind it being mystical and heavenly, and I thought that added to the moment. It was a good note to end on. Well, a sad one, but I think you get what I mean.

I only have two critiques. One is there were quite a few sentences that felt a bit unnatural (talking about the ending chapter). Here are some examples: "She felt a thousand of nails hammered on her head." "Only thing she wanted was to be with her beloved." "She had just begun to live the happiness." "This, was unfair!" These sentences were a bit unnatural, and grammar doesn't matter too much for this category, though since this is an emotional, sad ending, I'd suggest smoothening these sentences to help keep the flow up. Consider: "She felt a thousand nails hammering on her head." "The only thing she wanted was to be with her beloved." "She had just begun to feel happiness" or "She had just begun a happy life" (the "live the happiness" part is what's awkward about that sentence). "This was unfair!" (the comma was placed incorrectly and led to an unnatural pause). So those are a few alternatives, but English is an extremely complex language with more alternatives and ways to write than I can count, so I encourage you to play around with it and see what works for you!

The second thing is the author's note in the middle of the chapter about Eros. I like Greek mythology too, so I'm glad you have that passion for it, and I think that's great, it's just that I always very strongly recommend almost never having a/ns in the middle of chapters unless it's for like a comedy, since maybe then it can work, but in the middle of a really sad scene where the female lead is seeing Taehyung for the last time and is about to die, it just felt really tonally inconsistent. It felt like something that could have been saved for the end note, or not put in at all.

Overall, the ending works well for the book, and I thought the sad tone was good and made sense for the characters. The whole theme surrounding eyes and how they end up working with Taehyung was very interesting and touching, and I enjoyed that aspect a lot. I had a few critiques but otherwise enjoyed the ending.

Entangled Emotions by sugararmy07

Review:

I'm glad this story broke the typical stereotypes associated with the "bet dating" genre. I was worried it would follow the typical path these stories take beat-by-beat, but I'm pleased to report that the ending does not include Jungkook and Hana ending up together, which was a breath of fresh air, and I'm glad you decided to take a cliche topic and spin it into your own thing with your own message that not everyone always needs to end up together, it can be more open to interpretation, and there are other options and people who could be the one for you. I like that message since I personally was on the receiving end of hate for not having two main characters end up together in one of my books (despite it literally being a toxic, ab/sive relationship...), and it frustrated me, to be honest. Not every single book needs to have the two main characters end up together, so I'm glad you took a risk and went that direction since not only does it break the stereotypes, but it is risky as I know many will be upset with that decision, so I appreciate that you took the risk and encourage you to continue taking creative risks like that.

The final chapter does an overall good job giving us closure for both Jungkook and Hana, and I'm sure readers will be pleased with how Hana's storyline ends up, and even Jungkook's, despite the mistakes he made in the past. It was a unique ending that had a lot of emotion and heart in it, which I appreciated. I liked that we really saw it from Jungkook's perspective, and he had to listen to the woman of his dreams being away from him and happy with someone else. Okay, maybe that makes me sound cruel, but I think you understand what I mean. I obviously don't enjoy seeing people suffer, it was just a good writing decision, haha.

Okay, I should stop before I make myself sound more like a psychopath.

I only have two critiques. One is to consider slowing down that part where Jungkook sees Hana again for the first time in two years. There was all this exposition about how much he loved her, so when he sees her again, his reaction is a bit underwhelming compared to how much his love for her was hyped up in the exposition, if that makes sense. He sees her, he rubs his eyes, and he seems relieved, though consider slowing down that moment. Considering the ending scene revolves around him contemplating suic/de because Hana isn't his anymore, I feel you can get away with doing more description there, maybe even going a little over-the-top with it, if you'd like. It just felt a little anti-climatic compared to how hyped up his emotions were beforehand.

The second thing is I'm not sure how to feel about ending it by directly saying "Maybe Min Ara would be his cure," especially since she already said "Maybe fate has already found someone better for you." I go back and forth on how to feel about this since on one hand, I understand why you ended it like this, though on the other, I feel like it wasn't needed, and you could have kept it more open to interpretation since it was already obvious what you were trying to say with Ara's appearance. I didn't feel you needed to directly come out and tell us Jungkook was going to probably get with Ara. So I have mixed feelings about it, though I felt it took away a little from the overall message to directly tell us that essentially Ara and Jungkook would end up together, if that makes sense. Readers will figure it out on their own, and I figured it out before even learning her name, so that's why I encourage you to trust your audience in that regard since we will understand the subtly and subtext you have there.

Overall, I really enjoyed the decision to stray away from the cliche path and give this genre a new twist where the main characters don't end up together. I think the final chapter was overall well-written and portrayed the emotions you wanted to portray in an engaging way. I had a few critiques but all in all thought the ending was effective.

The Council of Gods by Dark_Ghostie

Review:

To begin, I enjoyed the final line of the final official chapter (chapter 15), which is "They were both gods with their own responsibilities but in that moment, they were just Aries and Gemini." It was a cute final line that summarized their relationship perfectly and ended the chapter on an interesting note. I liked the choice to make that the final line considering the story's journey and what they've been through, and it felt very tonally consistent with the rest of the vibe of the chapter.

Once again, you submitted a strong entry I enjoyed. I thought the ending wrapped up the storyline well and was a proper send off to the zodiac characters. Nothing felt rushed and it felt like it wrapped up in a way that makes sense for the book. Nothing really felt out of place. Considering there's a bonus chapter for the wedding, it could have been trimmed a bit to get to that ending line faster, though that's more of a nitpick and nothing too serious since it's overall a good ending.

As for the epilogue, it's short but sets up the next part of the plot well. It didn't need to be long, so I think you gave it a proper length there. The length also makes it so it doesn't stick around long enough for us to be too confused, rather curious, so I think that's good. I don't have much to say about the bonus chapter since that's just a bonus and not really an official ending, but I don't think there was anything wrong with it, by any means. Fans of the book will love it, in my opinion. It's wholesome and gives them sweet content.

Moving into critiques, I notice you use "As if" quite a few times, particularly in the beginning when you used it three times almost back-to-back, using it in the same way (to say "As if" in response to something, and also using it to start sentences). I'd just recommend using it a little less since repetitive sentence structure can take away from the emotional moments and also make the characters not feel as individual if they're all using "As if" in the same way, and it's especially important for a zodiac story to have individuality in the characters due to how many characters there are. It's not a big deal, but in a short chapter, it's definitely noticeable, and the same applies to commas. Grammar doesn't really matter to this category much, so this too is not a big deal, though some of the comma errors got distracting since they were very frequent, and I'd suggest reading out loud and/or plugging the text through a grammar editor if you're ever unsure of where the commas go.

In general, the ending does a solid job wrapping up the book, I just recommend tweaking it a little to help it flow more in terms of its comma placement, the as if thing I mentioned, actions as tags, etc. I hope that makes sense!

Overall, the ending is good and is a proper send off to the characters readers grew to know and care for. It's a fun ending that's meant to be lighthearted, and it has an epilogue that hints at more to come without overstaying its welcome. I had some critiques for how the ending chapter flowed, but I overall enjoyed it.

Lemon Like Love by Ipsitalali

Review:

I believe I've mentioned this to you in the past, but I love Lemon Like Love as a title. It feels good to return to this story and see it again since I enjoyed reading it my first time, so it's almost a bit nostalgic for me, haha.

Moving into the core of the review, I think the ending chapter does a good job finishing up the story we grew to know and love. I think it really needed a happy ending here, and we got just that. You didn't drag it out or make people wait a million years for the ending and instead got right to the point, showing readers exactly what they wanted to see without beating around the bush, which is good and led to good pacing throughout the ending part. The characters remain in-character but happier in the ending scene, which I liked to see, of course.

Noah was very cute throughout the chapter, and that provided a strong sense of comfort and warmth throughout. He was my favorite part of the ending, and I thought the tree scene was rather cute, and I'm also glad that, like I mentioned in the previous paragraph, you didn't let it overstay its welcome by dragging it out. It was a short scene to establish where our characters are now while also giving us some humor, which was nice to see.

The last thing I'll mention before I move into critiques is the overall vibe you capture and how you're able to make it feel warm. I love how this is a straight happy ending with a cute family enjoying their lives. It's really heartwarming and uplifting, especially when you consider what I said in the previous paragraph about Noah being super duper cute.

This is a really big nitpick, and I normally wouldn't point it out, but since it's the very last line of the story, I thought I'd just let you know that the last line is "Shut up", though you need end punctuation there, so "Shut up." I'm only pointing this out because it's the very last line in the book, so it's more noticeable as a result. It's still a nitpick and nothing I want to dwell on, but I just wanted to mention it real fast. Another nitpick is I'd suggest not using semicolons in dialogue. I'm only bringing this up because you have this: "From Dada; he uses it whenever...". That line is spoken by an eight-year-old, and it's already a little weird for semicolons to be in dialogue since we as humans don't speak in a way that really warrants them, but for a child to have a semicolon in dialogue, it felt a bit awkward, in my opinion. But again, those are two little nitpicks and not core critiques, so let's not focus on them too much.

Anywho, moving into my actual critiques instead of nitpicks, the only main critique I have is about emotions and how there are a bunch of dialogue tags, so I'd recommend cutting down on them. I know in my past review of this book, I mentioned dialogue tags before, but to expand on that, I felt there were too many tags in this final chapter, especially since one time it got confusing with this: "Yes, buddy, it's me," Matteo replied, his voice cracking with emotion. "I miss you so much, Daddy," Noah whispered, his voice filled with a mix of sadness and relief.

Two things about that. One, I'd suggest separating it so Noah's line is its own paragraph, that way it doesn't get confusing. Two, do you see how all the emotion is being put on the dialogue tag part of those sentences? Consider downsizing on the tags, and also making some tweaks to what's attached to the tags. For example, instead of "his voice cracking with emotion," consider shortening it to just "his voice cracking." That way you're not explicitly telling us "with emotion" to avoid unnecessary telling over showing, and you're also giving readers more room for interpretation about the emotions within the scene. We like to imagine things and come to our own conclusions, so that's why the golden "rule" (though "rules" are relative in creative writing) is "show, don't tell." That's why I recommend downsizing on tags since they're inherently telling over showing, and while there's nothing wrong with doing telling over showing (sometimes you even need it), what I'm recommending is downsizing on unnecessary telling over showing, which often comes in the form of dialogue tags. Consider the 50-30 advice of tags, which states that of your dialogue, 50% or less should be tagged, and of that 50%, 30% or more should be said/asked. This advice doesn't work for everyone, though it could be helpful for practicing downsizing. I hope that makes sense!

Overall, the ending is solid and does a good job giving closure to the characters in a way that's fun, humorous, and makes sense for the plot and characters. I had minor critiques/nitpicks, but otherwise thought this was well-done. It was a tough call choosing placements, and this was very close to placing. I'm already following you on my second account, though I would like to follow you from this one as well to show my appreciation for your hard work and solid ending.