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Result (Short Story)

1st Place-

Participant: @MRArcher_writer

Book: Percy Jackson and the River Star

Judge- @Ablazeisaleo

Title: 9/10

Cover: 9/10

Blurb: 8/10

First Chapter: 8/10

Storyline: 19/20

Plot: 9/10

Enjoyment: 8/10

Last Chapter: 7/10

Review: As someone who's an ardent fan of the Percy Jackson series, the plotline really impressed me. I love the plot twist showing that she wasn't kidnapped but rather ran away from home to get married. I would have loved it more if the chemistry between Percy and Vitoria took it's own pacing as it felt a bit too rapid during that portion but apart from that, you've got a unique plotline out there.

Total: 77/90


2nd Place-

Participant: @chillin_author

Judge- @Ablazeisaleo 

Book: The Cosmic Coffee Cup

Title: 6/10

Cover: 8/10

Blurb: 9/10

First Chapter: 6/10

Storyline: 16/20

Plot: 6/10

Enjoyment: 7/10

Last Chapter: 7/10

Review: I love how you have used the prompt given to display a cosmic era within something as simple as a coffee cup. I feel like the plot has a lot of ability to transform itself into a novella if only the pacing was toned down a bit. Everything happened rapidly that it might take time for the readers to process what's happening. I would really advise to show instead of tell where as in your characters speak for themselves rather than you narrating for them. The plot is a compelling one but with the changes mentioned above, it will surely shine.

Total: 65/90


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