Result (Short Story)
1st Place-
Participant: @MRArcher_writer
Book: Percy Jackson and the River Star
Judge- @Ablazeisaleo
Title: 9/10
Cover: 9/10
Blurb: 8/10
First Chapter: 8/10
Storyline: 19/20
Plot: 9/10
Enjoyment: 8/10
Last Chapter: 7/10
Review: As someone who's an ardent fan of the Percy Jackson series, the plotline really impressed me. I love the plot twist showing that she wasn't kidnapped but rather ran away from home to get married. I would have loved it more if the chemistry between Percy and Vitoria took it's own pacing as it felt a bit too rapid during that portion but apart from that, you've got a unique plotline out there.
Total: 77/90
2nd Place-
Participant: @chillin_author
Judge- @Ablazeisaleo
Book: The Cosmic Coffee Cup
Title: 6/10
Cover: 8/10
Blurb: 9/10
First Chapter: 6/10
Storyline: 16/20
Plot: 6/10
Enjoyment: 7/10
Last Chapter: 7/10
Review: I love how you have used the prompt given to display a cosmic era within something as simple as a coffee cup. I feel like the plot has a lot of ability to transform itself into a novella if only the pacing was toned down a bit. Everything happened rapidly that it might take time for the readers to process what's happening. I would really advise to show instead of tell where as in your characters speak for themselves rather than you narrating for them. The plot is a compelling one but with the changes mentioned above, it will surely shine.
Total: 65/90
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