💔Our break up💔 💞love story 💞-11

After 5 years .......

On stage .... In London ......

Its an auditorium .....

Its evening time ....

We can see a huge crowd cheering loudly ...jumping in happiness waiting for the favourite rockstar .....

The lights get dim ....

A guy walks in slowly from the darkness , he is followed by four people .....two girls and two boys ....

The guy in the middle starting strumming his instrument .....

The light focused on them to reveal them as fabulous 5 popularly called as fab 5....

In the past five years they have become famous all over the world for their music concerts and singing in movies and albums ....

They are mukti , navya ,  cabir , abhi , Manik ..... they are the best of friends as well . Always found together . Everyone from the media knew mukti and abhi are a couple as well as cabir and navya , they always pestered Manik about his love life. .....

Manik starts singing ......

Jab tak hum kisi ke humdard nahi bante na )
( Tab tak hum dard se aur dard hum se juda nahi hota ) he could hear these words said by his jaanu , his nandu .....

O.. Yahin doobe din mere
Yahin hote hain savere
Yahin marna aur jeena
Yahin Mandir aur Madeena… x2

Teri galiyan… galliyan teri, galliyan..
Mujhko bhaavein galiyan, teri galliyan
Teri galiyan…galiyaan teri, galliyan..
Yuhin tadpavein, galliyan teri, Galliyan…

Tu meri neendo me sota hai
Tu mere ashqo mein rota hai
Sargoshi si hai khayalon mein
Tu na ho, phir bhi tu hota hai
Hai sila.. tu mere dard ka

Mere dil ki duaayein hain..
Teri galiyan… galliyan teri, galliyan..
Mujhko bhaavein galiyan, teri galiyan
Teri galiyan…galiyaan teri, galliyan..
Yuhin tadpaavein, galliyan teri, galliyan..

Kaisa hai rishta tera-mera
Be-chehra phir bhi kitna gehra
Ye lamhe, lamhe ye resham se
Kho jaayein.. kho na jaayein humse
Kaafila.. waqt ka.. rok le..
Abr se juda na ho

Teri galliyan… galliyan teri galliyan..
Mujhko bhaave galiyan teri galiyan
Teri galiyan…galiyaan teri galliyan..
Yuhin tadpaave galliyan teri galliyan..

Galliyan…
Teri galliyan..
Tadpaavein…

The song ended with a huge roar of happiness from the crowd ....Manik just gave a small smile hugging his friends and just left the stage from back side ....

As soon as he reached the back stage he is hugged by three guys and two cute  girls . .....

Bhai ....you are amazing on stage ....said the cute girl ....

Manik : thank u bacha , said Manik kissing her head ....

Sachme bhai , i hope I could sing one percent like you atleast , i could have a girl friend by now , he said making cute faces making everyone laugh ....Manik just ruffled his hairs like he is a kid , he just pushed away the girl and hugged manik .....

Bhai , chalo let's go home . She said dragging away everyone with her ..... Fab 5 and those three guys along with that two  cute girls reached a big mansion in two big cars .....

They got down and moved inside to be stopped by a lady with arthi thaal ....

Manik : badi maa , why this ?? I'm not coming home after marrying right ....he asked not liking the arthi session which happens everytime he return back from concert .....

Badi maa : all the eyes are on my son , no evil should reach my son , i want you to stay always happy . She said keeping a tilak on his forehead .....

Manik in mind .... I can't say about evil eyes but my happiness is far away from me , i don't know where she is . I tried searching her everywhere but didn't get a look of her ..... He thought moving inside ....

He is about to leave to his room but got stopped by the voice he hated the most these days ......

" Mr Manik Malhotra , your back from concert. Its time for our deal " , he said with a similar smirk like manik . He looked old but may be an older version of Manik Malhotra ....

Manik : Mr Raghuvansh Malhotra , i don't make deals which I can't fullfil , so u better remember you can't rule me . Its your bad luck i didn't find my girl , if not you and your deals will be left long back . He said with a more dangerous smirk ....

All the people are looking at it with boring looks bcoz this happens daily whenever these come in front of each other ....

Raghu : mind your words Manik , you are talking to your bade papa  , it's not my mistake that girl didn't trust you just like her dad , he said more seriously ....

Manik : I know about my jaanu and i don't need your opinion on her . She might be far from me but will always be in my heart forever and I'm not marrying the girl you decided bcoz who knows she might a gold digger just like you. He said in aloud tone making everyone shiver ....no one disturbs him when he is angry ...as he is uncontrollable .....

" Manikkkk , wait"  . He heard the voice of his mom neonika Malhotra. .... He turned to look at her ....

Manik : mom , I'm tired , saying he left to his  room . His conversations with neonika became very limited , it's like he always avoided her ....

Neonika just sat there on the couch holding her head , she just craves for her son ...

The cute bubbly girl is immediately beside her ....

Cute girl : badi maa  , he is just angry . Bhai will surely come back after his anger cools down  , she said holding her hand ....

Neonika smiled looking at her bcoz she is the only girl child in the third generation of Malhotra's . Manik may be angry on anyone but he never scolds her . He is good to everyone in this family except his bade papa .....

Neo : I know shalu , but his ignorance hurts.  She said wiping her tears ....

Shalu : u always said he is naughty , does pranks and all . But all I see is a heart broken rockstar and rude , arrogant business man . I don't know past but all I want is to see my brother being the same ....she said with a small smile....

Neo : this can be done by only nandu bcoz he only listens to her from childhood . I was so busy in my life after loosing Raj  , she was there with him full filling all the void in him by taking care of him . She filled all the relations of his life . They both are like inseparable.  But i don't know why he left her ?? what happened ?? He didn't share anything . Its been five years . I tried to find her for my son but couldn't bcoz she just disappeared like she never existed. I pray to god to give her back in my son's life ....

" Chill mom, everything will be fine" , Said the guy who hugged manik .....

Neo : ok bachon chalo i made dinner , saying she dragged fab 4 and the other five  to dinning table but Manik didn't come out of his room .....she sent food and juice to his room with butler and felt happy that he accepted dinner even though he didn't come out .....

In manik's room ,

His room is full of pictures of his and nandu from childhood , every stage of happiness there is a pic in his room . He just sat there holding a can of juice not alcohol .....

Manik : it's just juice  okay , I'm not drinking bcoz i can't bare your beating with broom if at all you get to know I drank.  I still remember jaanu the way you hit me in school farewell just bcoz i sipped champagne. So no , I'm not touching alcohol . He said with a small smile . Yes he only smiles in his room .....

He is busy starring at her pics , he gets a call on his mobile ...

He picks up the call ....the screen shows a cute boy who is making his mom run around with him ....

Manik : hey champ , he shouts loudly ....

The boy in the screen stops and looks at the screen with his beautiful smile just like his bua .....

Champ : hey mamu , I miss u. ...the boy said and his mom caught him immediately ....

Manik : hello di , how r u ?  He asked Radha .

Yes it's Rana who called Manik , they are blessed with baby boy ...they named him
" Randheer  " .....he is close to Manik.  Even these people miss nandu bcoz , where nandu lives is only known to her dad , he never told anyone including his wife and Chandu .

Nandu always spoke on calls with cabir , navya , mukti , abhi , Chandu , her mom , Rana , Radha and Randheer ....

She even sent gifts to these people on special occasions . They are delivered to Chandu , she used to send them to the person she gifted . They never got to see her in past five years. 

Manik spoke with Radha and family for an hour , teasing Randheer for getting beating from his mumma and cut the call ....

He saw water jug is empty in his room , so he made way to the kitchen holding the empty dishes of dinner . He dumped the dishes in sink and filled his jug with water ., He is walking on the stairs there he saw a huge portrait of Malhotra family which he doesn't knew they exist till five years back .

His dadi , bade maa , bade papa , chote papa , chote maa , his mom as he lost his dad in childhood. Yes he got know his dad is second son in family .All three Malhotra brothers have one sister that is manik's bua  .  The third generation his siblings .... Bade papa and  his dad has only one son but chote papa has twins a girl and boy ....  Manik is the elder one of all bcoz his bade papa married last . He took the responsibility of his family after his dad . His dad got married first to the love of his life and left the house bcoz no one accepted his love . His bua has two kids they are a boy and girl  , even they live here with them .... In short it's a joint family .....

Cast analysis of new characters :

Raghuvansh Malhotra , the best business man of MM industries which is famous all over the world .... He married Ragini , it's an arranged marriage but he love her more than anything but don't tell her that . They have a son "  Rajveer " , even though they have a son they still treat all kids same . Manik is so special to Raghuvansh bcoz he resembles manik's dad " Raj " his second brother . His small  brother is
"Raman", He has a sister as well "Akshara ".
Rajveer is doing internship under Manik in MM industries... Rajveer has done his MBA , he admires Manik a lot . He knew manik's pain and always supports him not his dad .

Raj and neonika Malhotra , the second couple of Malhotra . Raj is no more but the whole family loves him a lot . He has a close relationship with his elder brother and bhabi . They have only one son Manik Malhotra .

Raman and ishitha , the third couple of the Malhotra family . They have twins " Shalini and shekhar " named after their parents . Yes shekar is the name of raman's dad and Shalini is the name of ishitha's mom , both are not in this world.  They are brother and  sister . So they are named after them .
Raman is also a business man along with  his brother . Ishitha is a lawyer.  Shalini and shekar are still studying 12 class .

Akshara and naitik singhania , the only daughter of Malhotra's second generation . Manik's bua and phupha ji , They have two kids mishthi and Anand . Misthi is an event manager working in her boy friends company .... Naitik is the CEO of singhania group of industries . Anand is studying 12 along with Shalini and shekar .....

How's the new characters ??

Are these the reason Manik left nandu ??

Where is nandu ???

How will manan meet ???

Will nandu forgive Manik and be with him ??