Hi

Another OS SuKor...

Story is very different from Udaan. Suraj is a slave n Chakor a teacher...

It is the moment Suraj punished himself. RV was laughing devilish. "Haha look u stupid villagers look! He is doing this on my commando! He will do it with any of u too! Just one wrong move n I will let him attack u! Does any of U has the guts to mess with me every again!". He was trying to tyrannise the villagers with full success.

Suraj is his most loyal slave n does everything for his Malik {owner}. He is getting punished for a crime which wasn't a crime but a gud decision. [will be revealed soon]

All villagers were looking at the man who is the most strongest man of the village. He has a kind heart but no self esteem. His life is based on the orders of his owner.

RV was having fun. He is the son of KN who is the ruler of Azaadghanj. "See that is my slave! 😆". He was laughing like mad n clapping in his hands. "Carry on Suraj this is ur punishment. For fooling me!". He was enjoying the 'show' of Suraj but there was one who couldn't bear it.

"Suraj!!". All turns to her...

Chakor a normal village woman who has come to Azaadghanj to teach the kids couldn't believe her eyes. "Stop this! Y r u doing this? Will u kill urself for a man like him?". She points on RV but Suraj didn't listen to her.

She again was shouting n trying to free Suraj but he was like in a trance he couldn't stop as long as his owner wouldn't say him to stop.

RV come n hold her hairs. "U r just a teacher we allowed to stay here to teach the kids. But we never allowed u to speak!". He pushes her on the ground.

"Aahh!". She had hurt herself n looked on Suraj, who couldn't stop punishing himself. This idiot will kill himself for what an order he got! Doesn't he has an own mind?.

She stood up n walks to him. "Stop it Suraj!".

RV was laughing. "Do u think he will stop? Never as long as I won't tell him to stop he won't! He my Slave! Suraj keep it up! U r giving me a gud entertainment!". He again was laughing n Suraj was hurting himself.

Suraj continuously hurt himself but the one who was lying on the floor couldn't take it. She stood up n covers him, but got hurt.

He stopped. What is she doing? Y she is ready to get hurt? Y is she saving me?.

🎼Jab tak hum kisi ke humdard nahi bante na,
Tab tak hum dard se aur dard hum se juda nahi hota

Unless we share someone's pain,
We don't get separated from our [own] pain and pain doesn't get separated from us.🎼

Chakor was crying as RV had told him not to stop or his punishment will increase. Suraj again swung the whip n hurt her n himself.
"Go!". He shouts at her. "Our it will hurt more!". Chakor shook her head. "No Suraj, I can't let u beat the pain alone! Please! Let me help u!".

RV saw them talking it made him angry. "Oh Get her away from him it's his punishment how can we let her take it!". His goons come n pulls her away from Suraj.

Chakor was struggling to free herself but nothing worked the goons were holding tight. "Y don't u help him?". The whole village was like frozen. "He is one of u! U r all cowards!". She was shouting at them but they all turned their face away n lowered their gazes in shame. Soon it become night n Suraj punishment was over. All had left him alone the have sent Chakor to her home too.

Chakor was crying thinking of him. It made her angry n furious how the villagers didn't come to help him. A cold hand went through her back applying the Ayurvedic paste.

Chakor turns n saw the aunt who come to her since the first day Kasturi. "Aunty what is this? U were watching me getting hurt n him punishing himself. Then u didn't come but now when Allie over u r here to put balm on my wounds!". She was crying turning her face again. 

Kasturi knows that it was wrong but she couldn't do anything. "Girl, this is a village were monsters rules. His father made as to slaves. He is using Suraj to forbid us to move on! We r helpless, even if we would help how long will it take RV n KN to kill us?". She was still applying the paste but Chakor didn't bother her thoughts were with him...

🎼 Yahin doobe din mere
Yahin hote hain savere
Yaheen marna aur jeena
Yaheen mandir aur madeena..

Here only my days end.
Here alone the mornings begin.
Here I have to live and die.
Here are all my pilgrimages🎼

Suraj was alone again no one come to his! Wrong one come!

Chakor I hurt u! Y u come to my help? U have had to stay away y didn't u? RV saw how I reduced the power for u! Yet it still hurt u! Chakor!.

There is something calling me... Since I saw u I know u were the one yet I was scared to lose u. I took a step to save u... but it caused u only pain...

Suraj was walking the streets...

🎼Teri galliyan.. galiyan teri galiyan..
Mujh ko bhaavein galiyaan teri galliyaan
Teri galiyan.. galiyan teri, galiyan..
Yoon hi tadpaavein, galliyan teri, Galliyaan..

Your streets. Streets, your streets
Your streets suit me, your streets.
Your streets. Streets, your streets
They agonize me, your streets🎼

Chakor felt a cold breeze she was looking for him.

Suraj I can feel u... u r somewhere near me. Please come back!.

Kasturi has left the paste. She was back at her home n then a shadow appeared in front of Chakor. She looked to him. "Suraj!".

She rushed out to him just to get scold!. "Y u come? I told u to stay out of it! How many times should I repeat myself! I'm a worker a slave I can't stop me to follow my owners words!". He shouting at her.

Chakor didn't cared. "Suraj have u seen urself in a mirror? Ur body is full of scratches u r bleeding! Let me...?". She took his hand n made him sit. She was the one who could calm the monster inside him. He too doesn't want to do it but he has no other option. He is uneducated n an orphan. The only thing he learnt was to follow the orders of KN n RV. What he has done over 25 years. Just one order he didn't followed.

Chakor was talking to him in a broken voice. "Suraj... is it still hurting?". She applies the paste carefully on his wounds. She blows air on it to let him feel her presence. Her heart was paining seeing him in this condition knowing that she is the reason.

Suraj stood up after getting the first aid but Chakor didn't let him go. "Suraj I won't let u go tonight!" She hold his hand tight, that even he understood that there is no chance to change her mind. He follows her..

"Suraj this all happens bcz of... me!". She was crying on the cold floor. Suraj shook his head. "No Chakor I made the crime by not following the order! It's my punishment I had to take it! U r not at fault!". He tries to console her n picks her up.

Chakor was still crying not believing his words. "I used to hate u! U know that when u did this?". Suraj nods. "Haan I know but..., I had no other options if I wouldn't have done it that moment then...".

FB

"RV there is a new teacher for the kids. Treat her well!". KN gave that order as he is leaving the village for his new ministry position.

RV smirks. "Suraj go get some information abt her!". He orders Suraj with his weirdest attire.

Suraj knows RV very well but it's his job to follow the order. "Ji Malik I will get the informations!". He left saying it.

He entered the village n saw the kids who were interestingly listening to the teacher, the one who was showing them how to read n write as well as to count. He was staring her only.

What is this...? Y do my heartbeat races like this? Who is she?

He come closer n heard a girl calling her. "Chakor Ma'am!". She turns n her face was shown.

"Haan Paakhi?". Paakhi smiles but then she turns showing on Suraj. "This is a goon he always tyrannies us! He never let us learn!". Suraj pouts. "Oye liar! Who wants to play with me... catch me if u can?". Paakhi bites on her tongue. "Suraj Bhaiya come n learn with us she is our new teacher!".

Suraj smiles. He sat next to Paakhi who has written her name on her blackboard. Then she wrote Suraj name on it. "What u wrote?". Paakhi hits him. "Uff Bhaiya ur name Suraj! U will learn with us!". He smiles n nods.

Chakor smiles too she didn't know but he was very calm with the kids n he didn't misbehaved with her.

Suraj was happy she was nice n behaves friendly with him knowing he has nothing she still spends some of her time with him alone to teach him.

🎼Tu meri neendon mein sota hai
Tu mere ashqon mein rota hai
Sargoshi si hai khayaalon mein
Tu na ho, phir bhi tu hota hai
Hai silaa tu mere dard ka
Mere dil ki duaayein hain.. Teri galliyan

You sleep in my sleep,
You cry in my tears.
There is your whisper in my thoughts,
Even when you're not there, you are there.
You're the result of my pain..
They're the wishes of my heart, your steets🎼

Weeks passed n RV wanted answers. "What u found out abt her? I have seen her she is very beautiful...!". His dirty mind was working n Suraj couldn't do much. He gave him all the informations he had collected abt her.

One night RV come to the village to see her. He was ready to attack her at any cost. But before that could happen someone had abducted her.

"Leave me u Idiot! how dare u to even touch me? I will not leave U! Stop it!".

"Suraj Bhaiya y r u doing this? Y do u want us to make her ready?".

Yes Suraj abducted her. "Woh RV...?!". That was enough for the villagers to understand him. They helped him but Chakor was struggling to free herself. "Leave me! I come to help n teach u all n that is ur way to thank me? U r helping him to commit a crime!". Paakhi shook her head. "Chakor Ma'am we r not helping him but u... RV is a monster! With Suraj u will be save!".

Kasturi come there. "Chakor he is the slave of RV but has a big heart too. He won't harm U! He will keep u save that RV won't even think of touching u!".

Chakor was shocked. "What u mean by touching me? What does he do?". Kasturi looked at small kids. She sent them out. "He is real monster he used many women of Azaadghanj for his lust. But Suraj... he saw ur kindness... he is different when he is near the kids. We knew it but now he is also showing a changed behaviour toward u... he respects u!".

Chakor was lost in her thoughts.

🎼Kaisa hai rishta tera-mera
Be-chehra phir bhi kitna gehra
Ye lamhe, lamhe ye resham se
Kho jaayein.. kho naa jaayein hum se
Kaafilaa, waqt ka rok le..
Ab dil se judaa na hon..

How's this relationship of your and mine,
It doesn't have a face and yet it's so deep.
These moments, these moments like silk..
We shouldn't lose them.
The caravan of time, let's stop it.
Now they (your streets) shouldn't get separated from the heart..🎼

They helped her getting ready even he was ready... She saw him n wanted to talk to him but he refused. "We don't have much time!".

She was admiring him n his determined decision but then the villagers left them alone... she was scared at first but then she saw the goons who appeared from nowhere.

RV looked at them. "Suraj! What u have done?". Suraj looked at him but soon he lowered his gaze. "Malik I marry her!". RV fumes in anger. "That I can see u idiot. I will kill u for that!".

"Stop it!". KN was there. "RV u know I'm having a new position then how can u even think of it. I told u to treat her gud not to hurt her or her husband!".

RV scares. "What r u doing here papa? I mean u were to come tomorrow!". RV was trying to change the topic. "RV if bcz of u I will lose my seat then...!". He warns him n left.

RV glares at SuKor. "Suraj u will pay for it!". He left from there n Suraj was abt to go too.

"Suraj?". He turns n saw her. "Haan?". Chakor shook her head. "Where r u going? U can't leave me alone... u married me!". Suraj shook his head. "I did this to save ur dignity! I'm not ur husband!". He was abt to leave when she shouts. "Aaah!". He saw her she twisted her ankle n couldn't move. He lifts her in his embrace. He carries her the whole way...

She starts to trust him more....

Today too he was there but not looking at her. "Suraj... U r my husband! U can stay here u don't need to sleep at the garbage... Suraj please!".

Suraj turns to her. "I still have nothing! I can't give more than safety! Someday u will leave u should stay pure! Don't worry no one will ever come n touch u!".

Chakor shook her head. "Do u think this marriage was a joke for me? U have married me to save me! I agree! But u can't tell me that u don't love me...!". She cups his face. "Suraj I can see it through ur eyes! Don't leave me!".

🎼 Teri Galiyaan, galiyaan teri galiyaan..
Yoonhi tadpaaven, galiyan teri.. galiyaan

Your streets. Streets, your streets
They agonize me, your streets🎼

The next morning raised...

Both woke up after sharing their love....

____
So have to think abt the next part...
Please comment and vote