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Sukor (OS) Love to eternity

Hi thats the first OS I'm writing. It's quiet different not like I normally write. !!PLEASE TELL ME IF U LIKE THE STORY OR NOT!!

This story is a tale of the Love, fight n freedom of Sukor.

Some students r on a trip with college they r entering Azaadghanj. It was never allowed to enter by strangers as it was ruled by the Rajvanshi clan who made the people to Bandhua = Slaves. One time a young girl could escape her name was Chakor her mom called her Chakoriya. She never wanted to return but the situation in her home village escalated she didn't knew what happened in her absence.

Chakor is now 23 years old she became a famous marathon runner n was living with her mentor Arjun n his wife Bhagya who both loves her a lot n raised her like their own daughter unfortunately they died by an accident she was alone again. Chakor Was the runner 501 who hide her real identity to be save from KN Rajvanshi who tried many times to kill her in the past he killed her grandmother n twin sister now it was time to take revenge her family is still living n slavery she had to do something.

On the other side KN was living as a ruler of Azaadghanj his right hand was his own son Suraj Rajvanshi his left hand was his brothers son Vivaan Rajvanshi (his parents died) n there was a mastermind Ragini who was dreaming to be the next ruler of Azaadghanj. Suraj controls the physical power 👊 💪he scared all to make them Bandhua n Vivaan the mentally 👨‍🎓he was carrying abt the property. Both cousins doesn't like each other n Ragini is an illegitimate child of KN n some1 else.

Suraj was a sport friend n always thought who is the runner 501 whenever he sees her on tv he smiled - there is something in her I don't know what but I'm sure to meet u some day n then u will be my -.

The day come n Chakor 501 was on her way to Azaadghanj on her own n alone she reached the borderline which was guarded by KN's goons who immidiately pointed the gun on Chakor they ordered her to wait or they will shoot. Chakor stopped - oh no what now - The goons called for KN but he was busy n send Suraj to clear this mess.

The goon who is Shikhu Suraj right hand said Chote Malik is coming just wait.

Chakor thought - Chore Malik is he talking ant Suraj or Vivaan whoever I want tell them my true identity -.

Suraj arrived n saw her he smiled - someday I will meet u n today it's the day -.

Chakor looked at him n wasn't sure how to react but she found her voice n said what's this all? R u hidding something?

Suraj got out of his jeep n walked toward her. Hi I'm Suraj Rajvanshi he gave her his hand. Miss 501 it's a pleasure to meet u.

Chakor - oh no he knows who I am? what should I say? - She took his hand n shook it. My name is Preety 501 is my running number.

Suraj thank u for giving me ur name no1 else knows. U r a hidden legend u break all records but u never received a trophy but last time u took it n I saw u he smiled again 😊.

Chakor felt weired n uncomfortable. What's this y I'm not allow to enter the village n y r these go... guess here?

Suraj thought n asked what do u want to do here? I mean in the city u have great possibilities to train y do u want to enter the village.

Chakor gulp she stammer I... I'm here to... 🤔🤗 to promote.

Suraj to promote? what so u want to promote?

Chakor the location she just said.

Suraj doubt it n asked again the village is a location 4 U?

Chakor nodded yes. We have every time the same race way n locations n I want a new challenge n I was looking around for the best location n I think this would be perfect. Just think the media will be here n take interviews the income will increase bcz of the tourist who will come for the marathon n for the future too.

Suraj thought - that true it's a great idea n it will help dad with his election - He smiled again n said please follow me I will show u the Rajvanshi mansion I'm pretty sure u haven't seen something like this ever.

Chakor - Oh I did - she smiled back n followed him she was carrying a bag in her hand Suraj saw it n took it from her.

Chakor it's ok I will carry it.

Suraj no I can't let a guest work 😊.

Chakor - who is this guy that's not the Suraj I know -

Chakor looked around while Suraj drives the car she saw many changes n was more surprised than ever thought. There were well, a school n a ward. - Maybe they changed. No I have to be alert -.

Suraj n Chakor arrived at the Rajvanshi mansion. Suraj messaged his father secretly that the girl on the borderline was no1 else than the marathon runner 501. The Mansion was decorated to welcome her. Chakor was surprised with open mouth she looked at Suraj who just smiled n asked her to come.

Suraj n Chakor enters the Mansion n they were Chakor a garland with flowers. It took 5 min the whole welcome rituals.

KN showed up he went to his son n whispered in his ear this is the very first time u did a right choice.

Suraj was angry n hurt - what kind of praising is this he still insulted me -

KN welcome Miss...

Chakor lied again my name is Preety Khanna I'm the runner 501.

KN welcome Miss Khanna come my son told me abt ur plans. That would be great if u need any support then tell me. I will arrange everything.

Chakor thank u but first I would like to see the village to make a feeling of the situation.

KN - there is something in her that reminds me on some1 - Sure my son Suraj will show u the village. But first u will have a dinner with us.

Chakor wanted to refuse but she rethought it would be better to keep the fake identity build up.

After the dinner Chakor wanted asked is there a hotel were I can stay.

Suraj hotel? he asked. No u will stay here I already told them to clean up the guest room it luggage must be there. Do u want to change? it's a village n u r wearing a tight jeans n short shirt the man's of the village might fall 4 U?.

Chakor saw her clothes n decided to changed. Suraj took her to the guest room they saw Vivaan who was on the phone with his fiance Tina. It was Suraj who wanted to marry Tina first but she refused she liked Vivaan more n the as*hole took the advantage to fail Suraj.

Chakor took more than as thought Suraj knocked on the door n entered without the permission.

There she was standing in her undergarments n Suraj immidiately turned his face.

Chakor who dare U?
Suraj I'm sorry but u took so much time n I knocked the door before I enter.
Chakor I hear it but I didn't say come in.
Suraj I'm sorry he said again n left.

After 5 min. some1 knocked on the door this time Chakor went to the door n opened it a lady was standing infront of her she remembers her it was Teju the mother of Suraj she never wanted to be a part of the Bandhua n she never wanted Suraj to be a part of this.

Chakor yes.
Teju I'm sorry for my son's behaviours she looked to the side where Suraj was hiding n seeking her face to see her reaction.
Chakor its ok I forgot it.
Teju here my son thought u might need some tradition clothes.
Chakor saw it it was a rose coloured Shalwaar Khameez. She smiled n took it thank u n to u too. Both laughed n Suraj was embarrassed 😶😳.

Chakor came out wearing the dress she got from Suraj.

Suraj looked at her n was mesmerized - wow in traditional clothes she looks even better -. He opened the door of his jeep like a gentleman.

Chakor thank u n enters the car.

Suraj jumped in it n started to drive but some1 called him. He looked back it was Vivaan.

Suraj what?
Vivaan drive me to the station.
Suraj get ur own car I'm not ur driver
Vivaan right even a driver is better than u.
Suraj got angry Vivaan mind ur language.
Vivaan smirked n left.
Chakor - this is not the Vivaan I know he changed to negative -.
Suraj I'm sorry but... He stopped n started the driving.
Chakor - He is saying sorry -.

Suraj showed her the village which had changed. Chakor was happy to know that the people of village aren't Bandhuas anymore.

Suraj saw the smile n the tears but he didn't said a word. He took her to a old house. Chakor remembers the way she looked at him n he looked at her in anger but was quite. Chakor was breathing fast n uncontrolled. He hit the break n got off the car he waited for Chakor this time he didn't opened the car door. She got off too but twisted her ankle n Suraj caught her an eyelock happen n his anger vanished in concern.

Suraj lifted her up n took her inside the old house which was the childhood house of hers.

Suraj putted her with care on a old bed he goes down n ... he looked at her n asked can I touch u feet to check?
Chakor nodded.

Suraj touched her feet both got a shiver following by goosebumps the wind blows in both looked at each other. There was no need to say anything the moment said it all.

Suraj took a handkerchief n bandage her ankle. He said after u left dad went crazy he killed all of ur family members just to take revenge from u. U run away no1 runs away from Azaadghanj.

Chakor breaks out in a heavy cry. Suraj took her in his arms - y I want to save her? my work is to kill her -. He looked at her he couldn't stopp himself he kissed her forehead n she hugged him tighter.

Chakor faces was resting on Suraj chest. I came back to meet n save my family but there 1 left.
Suraj no there is still some1
Chakor who
Suraj Imli ur sister.
Chakor Suraj where is she how is she
Suraj she is fine n is working with Vivaan.
Chakor what?
Suraj well she was first working with me but Vivaan asked for a guard n chose Imli.
Chakor couldn't u stopped him?
Suraj the risk to die in my work is bigger than in his work.
Chakor can I see her.
Suraj I think he has gone to pick her
Chakor let's go

She stood up but Suraj holded her hand tight n pulled her back she as in his arms another eyelock. Suraj shook his head.

Suraj u can't meet her n say hi I'm ur sis.
Chakor but she needs to know.
Suraj what u r alive n had a great life while she was scared that KN would shoot her anytime. I took her responsibility I couldn't see a child been shoot. Never!.

Chakor thank u. U saved her n me.
Suraj u shouldn't have comeback.
Chakor I had too
Suraj what now. Ur family is death here is nothing left 4 u.
Chakor help me.
Suraj what how n y?
Chakor bcz I need ur help. I want to talk to her I need to I won't tell her who I am n I will leave asap. U r right here is nothing left for me the village changed it's water well everywhere, a school for the children n a medical ward.
Suraj it's all fake he shouted. I asked him for a medical ward but he refused he said let them die I will find new. But the children r dieing not the adults. Ragini is running a gun factory n the kids r workers the school it's just a name in reality it the damn gun factory. I told dad it's not necessary to let the children work as gun makers but the money is making him blind. He owns every1 on Azaadghanj. The Bandhua is still there he showed out of the house the whole village is his Bandhua.

Chakor went to Suraj n hold his hand. Suraj I thought u r devil but hearing n seeing the change in u made me understand/ realised u have become a gud person. Just hide my true identity I will call the media n I will expose his true infront of the world.
Suraj I will.

A big sound some1 opens the door of the old house.
KN enters so knew it's u Chakor.
Both were shocked - what will happen now -.
KN looked at Suraj u r my son n u were ready to help her u traitor. U said the whole village is my Bandhua no he shook with his index finger U want become my Bandhua yet. KN ordered his man's to arrest Suraj he will become the new Bandhua of Azaadghanj.

Chakor KN u can't do this
KN who will stop me U?
Chakor Haan I will stop u.
Suraj n I will help her he pushed the goons away I will help her to free the villagers.
KN laughed get him n her.

Both were captured n it didn't took long KN stamps Suraj with the Bandhua Tattoo. The villagers were silently watching.

KN this is the famous marathon runner 501 a.k.a Chakor.

They all smiled n cheers her name but KN gave her a slap. All stopped to praise her they were shocked.

It we Suraj who escaped from the goons n hold Chakor he looked at his father spit on him.

Suraj u hit a women n calls urself a man. U r a coward u made me ur son to a slave but this slave will fight n will win he shout.

KN let me see how u win who will support u. He took a gun n shoot in the air. Listen villagers these both will stay here but no1 will support them no food no water n no sympathy if i get to know one of ur helped them I will the whole family remember I did it with the Laal's.

Chakor u can keep me here I'm a celebrity they will look 4 me.

KN I asked a friend Mumbai they might look 4 u but u didn't tell any1where u gone n I decided to announce ur retirement.

Chakor what.

KN yes u won't run anymore. I cut ur wings.

Chakor fall on knees n KN returned to haveli with his goons. Ragini took Suraj place as the right hand. Teju was shattered her son become a Bandhua she suffered from a heart attack n died. The worst part they didn't inform Suraj n did all rituals. But Suraj found out he went tgere n did the last rituals he warned every1 who try to stop him.

Chakor n Suraj were living together it's been weeks now somehow they manage to get food n water.
Both shared a friendship which was love both didn't confess scared that the opposite might reject.

Chakor cleaned the house it was looking like a home somehow. Suraj was looking for jobs he could do but KN goons were everywhere there was 1 supporter they had it was Imli. She own's Suraj her life. They could only survive so long bcz of her but this ended too Vivaan found out n informed KN who killed Imli infront if everyone now Chakor was all alone no1 of her family was alive.

Suraj I'm sorry I couldn't do anything
Chakor cried it's not ur fault.
Suraj I told her to stop helping us.
Chakor some1 had found it out n.. She cried mire.

Suraj took her in his arms. We can't just sit, wait n cry.
Chakor u r right we have to fight back.
Suraj yeah but how?
Chakor what is tgeir weakness?
Suraj they don't trust each other
Chakor Suraj u...
Suraj what
Chakor u haven't eat anything since yesterday n since the death of ur mom u... u didn't cry. Suraj it's better to let it flow it makes a bit better.

Suraj I'm not hungry n I don't want to feel better. I deserve this pain all those years my mom warns me not to work with him but I wanted his love n respect n what I got? he made me his own son a Bandhua n didn't informed me abt my mother's death if Imli hasn't told it me I don't know what I would have done.

This was the first time he talked abt the death of his mother n yeah he cried.

The next day started Sukor creating a plan.
Suraj i know who will help us
Chakor who?
Suraj I have friends.
Chakor really, who?
Suraj y r u jealouse
Chakor laugh me n jealouse y
Suraj bcz I have secret friends n u r dying to know who they r.
Chakor got red no that's no true.
Suraj smiled.

Both were doing their part of Job. Chakor called a few villagers for help n Suraj meet his friends.

Suraj will u help
friends where is our chocolate?
Suraj u see me my situation is worse than urs.
friends but we want chocolate
Suraj Uff when this all ends u will get alot of chocolate.
friends promise.
Suraj Paakhi u now I don't lie.
Paakhi okay we will help
Suraj but be careful no1 should know abt this.
Paakhi okay.

Suraj was back n again he didn't eat but this time Chakor to eat with him otherwise she won't eat.
Suraj but Chakor we don't have much food it's better if u eat n I don't ur brain works better than my.
Chakor turned look u talked to it friends n j talked to My.
Suraj was surprise a full meal for each.
Chakor don't worry no1 saw it.
Suraj but... She puts her index finger on his lips n said come n eat with me.

Both eat n had a full stomach.

Suraj was sleeping on the ground while Chakor was sleeping on the bed. She didn't liked it but Suraj said he won't sleep on the bed it's old n dirty. But Chakor knows better he wanted to comfort her.

Chakor Suraj r u awake...
Suraj yeah
Chakor smiled gud tell me abt ur friends?
Suraj turned to her he shows with his nose he smells something Chakor u smell this?
Chakor smells nothing. No what?
Suraj something is burning
Chakor what get up n looked at kitchen corner
Suraj ops I meant u.
Chakor what 😤. She turned I don't want to know anything abt ur friends.
Suraj -shit-. He got up n blow air on her shoulder. Chakor she got a shiver n turned to him her smile made his life. The first time on tv n then on the borderline. The incident in her room n then the truth abt her it didn't changed his feeling he had for her.

Suraj my friends r all 8 - 11 years old.
Chakor 😶 u mean children
Suraj nodded.
Chakor hide her face behind her hands.
Suraj removed the hands don't hide this beautiful face ever again. He kissed her forehead n got back to his place on the ground. Both slept well.

In the morning the kids who made the guns took some n gave it to Suraj the consignment is abt 200 pieces but if they miss 50 pieces then it would creat a war. N it did Vivaan n Ragini attacked each other both blamed the other one. No1 suspected the villagers or kids n Coz Vivaan is not a goon it was Ragini who shot on him. After his death it was only Ragini n KN.

KN u shouldn't have killed him what abt the money he earned for us.

Ragini don't worry papa. I will find a way.

KN u better hope so. Otherwise u r the next.

Ragini left the place in anger.

Chakor I never wanted Vivaan to die.
Suraj he is the reason that Imli died.
He got what he deserved don't pity on him.
Chakor what abt those guns?
Suraj I think we should give 1 to each villagers so they can protect their families before the real war starts.
Chakor I don't want more death bodies.
Suraj what then. Do want them to stay Slaves the rest of their life n the next generation too n so on...
Chakor no.
Suraj they have to fight back he gave her a gun.
Chakor I won't kill any1 never.
Suraj then don't.

The money tgey earned with help of Vivaan was decreasing day by day Ragini couldn't find a solution but she had a new idea. Papa we could sell the kids or better we can sell the organs of them a kidney will bring us 500.000 - 1.000.000 or more.
KN haha that's gud do this.

Ragini went to villagers n kidnapped a child. The villagers were standing there doing nothing. But Suraj couldn't tolerate he fight with the goons n warned Ragini to harm a child ever again.

Ragini came back without a kid.

KN what happen?

Ragini Suraj the new saviour of the villagers.

KN Tomorrow we will finish this chapter.

Suraj n Chakor gave every villagers a gun for protection.

A lady from the village thank u u saved my girl.

Suraj it's ok.
Chakor please take care.
The lady wait
Both stopped
The lady we all want u to...
Suraj what?
Chakor say.
The lady couldn't but the kid was Paakhi n she said u should marry.
Sukor were speechless.
Paakhi u both live together n u r not married it's not gud.
Chakor we r friends
Suraj Haan.

- just friends or more? -.

Suraj n Chakor were back at home they didn't talk their thoughts were going through them the friendship was not a usual one both care for the other more them they care for themself.

Suraj - I love her does she love me too?-

Chakor - I love him does he love me? -

Both - I will ask tomorrow -.

The next day came n both were trying to say something but couldn't.

A big noise came from the village. KN, Ragini n some goons come to kill Suraj n Chakor.

Suraj wait here let me check but she didn't listen she followed him n saw how many goons KN had bought with him.

Chakor oh no what now?
Suraj we will fight.
Chakor Suraj look they r too many we can't win.
Suraj we can if the villagers starts to fight back.
Chakor they r scared I don't believe they will fight.
Suraj it doesn't matter I won't die without fighting.
Chakor me too.

Both came out n holded a hand of the other one.

KN look who is coming.

Suraj we r not scared of u or ur goons.

KN oh really

Chakor yes we will fight n win

Ragini u stupid u will die

Suraj first u n it father.

KN it will be written in books of Azaadghanj his I killed u both.

Sukor no. It will written how we defended u.

KN - they r talking too much -
U forget I owe them n u both r also my slaves I can do whatever I want.
Shikhu take her.

Suraj holded her hand tightly n warned Shikhu.

Shikhu comes n got badly beaten till dearh by Suraj by touching Chakor.

Suraj KN don't u dare to play dirty.

Ragini give me the gun she pointed on Suraj n shoot.

Chakor scream n shouted Suraj!

But nothing happened to him he could save himself.

Chakor got very angry how dare u she had the gun in her back she took it and aimed on Ragini she shoot n hit her. Ragini fall her body wasn't moving her pulse stopped like her breathing.

KN what u have done i will kill u. He took the gun n shoot on Chakor but Suraj came in time n got hit by the bullet.

Chakor Suraj what have u done.
Suraj I saved my love.
Chakor I love u too. KN I will kill u

The villagers woke up of their silence they all had a gun n pointed on the goons.

KN what the hell. U... U all betrayed me. U steal the guns u made us a big loss n now u r supporting them.
If I die ni1 will give u food or water. No1 will care for.

Suraj I'm not death yet he was back in his feets. Chakor was helping him.
Suraj I will care for them we don't need u.
Chakor n I help too I came back to take revenge for my granny n did but u destroyed everything how dare to take away my love.
Suraj was very happy.

KN got more scared he looked to car he runner back but Suraj took the gun Chakor had n he shoot. But on his leg. so he couldn't run anymore.

Suraj u tried to cut the wings of Chakor I shoot u on ur left let's see how far u can run. He took the key.s from KN.

KN kill or I will kill u both he warned them.

Chakor u can try n even if u kill us u won't survive.

Suraj she is right.

KN turned n tries to run he was pretending to fall but he was now holding a gun which was lying on the back of the jeep n he shoot n this time he hit Chakor that's for my daughter.

Suraj Chakor he screamed

Chakor maybe we should had married.

Suraj we can still marry he cried don't say much spare ur energy.

Chakor Suraj I won't survive

KN laugh I told u kill me or i will kill u

Suraj turned with a fire in his eyes n both shoot at the same time n both get hit. KN fall the bullet hit his head.

Chakor Suraj... she couldn't speak
Suraj Ch...Chakor Im sorry.
Chakor na..hi / no
Suraj he took his hand with the last sense they both had he took his blood n filled her peak with his blood both smiled he fall over her....

A student asked did they survived?
The teacher no unfortunately both died.

The guide who showed them all places of the village said. They might died but for us they r still alive there was a Statue of both it was a symbol /
emblem of them.

The students took pictures
Wow what a love story it goes beyond all. Right wish to find some1 like them. U r soo right some1 who loves n kill for u. No some1 who took a bullet for u.

The guide there is no1 like them. They r unique u won't find a person like them. Only they bcz they r made for each other in every life for eternity.

The student how do u know so much?

The guide bcz in his friend.


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