🙍🏼‍♂️👦🏼 Mistress_Mitsukai

Hi this is a quick review if you want revisions or if you notice a mistake i made, correct me and I will read the character bio again for corrections. Hope you enjoy and learn from my review that's what my reviews are all about!😁😁😁

Description of character: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 10/10
Wow! Fabulous and imaginative. There's so many details! Good job!

Name: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 6/10

it's a great name with meaning,  honestly it's not exactly appealing to most people at first glance because it will sound strange at first. But for me its great, different, and imaginative.

Personality: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 8/10

Like I said I love characters that are meant to be jerks because my own character Ocean Oceana in King Ocean is a absolute jerk! So I love it because it's something that's not normally explored in fiction. On the downside he should really take care of himself more, having a character who doesn't take care of themselves is unique and different but can hurt the first impression of character for some people.

Interactions with other characters: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 9/10

On the inside I can tell that Gilbert is a caring person, willing to risk it for the people he cares about most. My only small issue is that he has serious problems when it comes to himself internally and how he portrays himself to others he cares about. In all honesty I think he should take care of himself especially around others he actually loves. But other than he's complex when it comes to relationships with other characters.

Did I enjoy the character: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 9/10

I loved how complex his personality is. he's going through alot and he still continues on with life (even if he doesn't care about himself) it seems like not assuming your character has low self esteem issues, but it really seems like that I hope the character grows out of these internal issues which brings me to my next point.

Growth throughout story: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 5/10

I give it a five because Gilbert was improving by the middle of the story by showing that he had good quality's as a person. But then makes a whole turnaround and kills someone! What in the world! Does it end there? That's some destructive downhill character development and even if the story were to continue on after that happens there's almost no way for Gilbert to redeem himself even if his character is meant to be a jerk. It's like one minute he's a good person and next minute he's a bad person making horrible decisions and destroying his own life and wellbeing.  If a character is a complete jerk and is made to be that way keep his mean and rude tendencies consistent instead of switching back and forth important information for when you write your book always keep the main personality of your character consistent unless your character has positive character development.

You have so much potential as a writer. You will do great things! Keep up the great work and stay positive 😁👌