SCIENCE FICTION

Judged by vyomaa_verse

Title- Julie jien 103
Username- blackishfever
Points-
i) Cover:- 7/10
ii) Title:- 7/10
iii) Blurb:-8 /10
iv) Plot:- 9/10
v) Hook and Flow :- 7/10
vi) Character Development:- 11/15
vii) Writing style and Grammar:- 6/10
viii) Has the author followed you?:- Yes 10/10
xi) Overall impression :- 11.5/15
Total- 76.5/100
Review- The plot and setting of the story is really intriguing and unique. The character development builds up with a smooth pace it’s an awesome and an interesting sci fi story. The details and the plot of the story has been described in a very brief and elegant way that builds up the interest in the story further.
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Title- The enemy beside me
Username- AeolianEon
Points-
i) Cover:- 7/10
ii) Title:- 6/10
iii) Blurb:-8 /10
iv) Plot:- 6/10
v) Hook and Flow :- 5.5/10
vi) Character Development:- 14/15
vii) Writing style and Grammar:- 8.5/10
viii) Has the author followed you?:-No 0 /10
xi) Overall impression :-11 /15
Total- 66/100
Review- Blurb was very interesting. The character development relates well with the theme and central idea of the story.
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Title- Looking for Hope
Username- NefertitiFenison
Points-
i) Cover:- 7/10
ii) Title:- 7/10
iii) Blurb:-7/10
iv) Plot:- 8/10
v) Hook and Flow :- 7/10
vi) Character Development:- 9.5/15
vii) Writing style and Grammar:- 8/10
viii) Has the author followed you?:- yes 10/10
xi) Overall impression :-11 /15
Total- 74.5/100
Review- The blurb of story is intriguing and the reader can relate to the characters in a very subtle way that increases the interest of the reader.
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Title- The Project 2577
Username- TheVilliriated936
Points-
i) Cover:- 8/10
ii) Title:- 7/10
iii) Blurb:-7 /10
iv) Plot:- 7.5/10
v) Hook and Flow :- 8/10
vi) Character Development:- 11/15
vii) Writing style and Grammar:- 9/10
viii) Has the author followed you?:-No 0 /10
xi) Overall impression :-13.5 /15
Total- 71/100
Review- The writing style and the main plot of the story are very unique and intriguing.
I enjoyed this story so much and also the blurb is very well written.
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Title- Sated
Username- LynaForge
Points-
i) Cover:- 7/10
ii) Title:- 8/10
iii) Blurb:-5.5/10
iv) Plot:- 7/10
v) Hook and Flow :-7 /10
vi) Character Development:- 11/15
vii) Writing style and Grammar:- 9/10
viii) Has the author followed you?:- No 0/10
xi) Overall impression :- 12/15
Total-66.5 /100
Review- The flow of the story is very sequential and the plot progresses along the story in a very subtle and engaging way.The character development goes well with the main theme.
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Judged by Artistic_Pri

The Choice by OceanKaiaAnderson

Cover-6.5/10
Title-8/10
Blurb-6.5/10
Plot-7/10
Hook & Flow-7/10
Character Development-10/15
Writing Style and Grammar-6.5/10
Has the Author followed you? -10/10
Overall Expression-10.5/15

Total-72/100

Colour scheme of the cover is eye disturbing. Title is apt for the story. Blurb wasn’t informative much and had grammatical errors. Flow of the story is acceptable but not satisfying much. Character development of Annalise isn’t progressing much and I couldn’t connect to the protagonist herself. Try focussing on spelling errors and punctuation norms. Overall, it was trying to power the much-required choice, so that was fine.

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Speculum of Death by firexqueen

Cover-10/10
Title-7/10
Blurb-9/10
Plot-7/10
Hook & Flow-7.5/10
Character Development-12.5/15
Writing Style and Grammar-8/10
Has the Author followed you? -10/10
Overall Expression-12.5/15

Total-83.5/100

Cover is just perfect- according to the plot and the scheme. Speculum can open to different meanings, so the title remains a topic to talk about. Blurb was well enough to describe and initiate the story. At last, the story ended a little abruptly- the end could be better. Character of Nandini was progressing much but was a little common, sometimes. Ah! There are some typos and tense errors. Overall, it was worth reading. Nandini was a treat to know.  

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SENTINEL 555: WAR by LynaForge

Cover-7/10
Title-9/10
Blurb-7.5/10
Plot-7/10
Hook & Flow-7/10
Character Development-11.5/15
Writing Style and Grammar-7/10
Has the Author followed you? -10/10
Overall Expression-10.5/15

Total-77.5/100

Cover, for a thought, doesn’t go well with the storyline. Title is appropriate for the story. Blurb was intriguing but could describe more about the future storyline. A little common plot and is little non-understandable. A smooth flow but was disturbing sometimes. Couldn’t connect deeply with the characters and especially the protagonists. Overall, the plot was a little non-understandable, so I got disturbed while reading.
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Through the Wormhole by CroodsGirl

Cover-9/10
Title-8/10
Blurb-8.5/10
Plot-7/10
Hook & Flow-9/10
Character Development-14/15
Writing Style and Grammar-8.5/10
Has the Author followed you? -10/10
Overall Expression-13.5/15

Total-87.5/100

Cover of the story is good but is a little overdone. Title is quite appropriate for the story. Blurb was awesome- detailed start and mid story of the account. Plot was intriguing- connected me throughout but felt you could have more scientific advancements as you are talking about the 180th century. Perfect flow and smooth description. Daniel’s character was progressing and I could connect with him throughout. Minor grammar mistakes. Overall, it hooked me throughout. The interview version is applauded.  

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The Last day on the Earth by DrakeRTodd

Cover-7/10
Title-5/10
Blurb-7.5/10
Plot-7/10
Hook & Flow-7/10
Character Development-11/15
Writing Style and Grammar-7/10
Has the Author followed you? -10/10
Overall Expression-10.5/15

Total-73/100

Cover couldn’t relate to the plot. Title was much more common and had extras. Try changing. Blurb can be cut into two parts and you could give hints towards the future storyline. Much needed flow was there but sometimes disturbance also. Couldn’t connect with Tiffiany, try to express her emotions better. Writing style can be changed, for sure. Overall, it was a curious read. But try enhancing your writing style.

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SHORT STORY

Judged by dusky_dreams

1) Mr.Chashmish & Mrs.Rockstar by Jenisundar
i) Cover - 0.5/10
ii) Title - 3/10
iii) Blurb - 0/10
iv) Plot & grammar -2.5 /15
v) Flow - 3.5 /10
vi) Character development - 4/10
vii) Uniqueness - 3/10
viii) Has the author followed you? (If not, 0, if yes, full 10) -10 /10
ix) Overall impression - 4/15

Total - 30.5 /100

Cover was not at all apt for the book, better you can order a cover from a graphics shop. In the title there was no need to capitalise MR. and MRS. It seriously feels weird reading it. Blurb had no points in it which can gain someone's curiosity while the plot felt rushed. There were many grammatical errors and punctuation mistakes in the book and the flow was rushed again. Characters in your book didn't have stability, which even confused me. There was nothing much unique in the book and the parts which could have been much better explained were left shortened. Also, in books you can just change someone's point of view in seconds. Like in paragraph one it's Abhi and next paragraph you start Pragya's point of view. The book needs a lot of editing, even in places it had emojis which were totally unnecessary. You are writing a story and not a message to a friend that it's a need for emojis. Better keep these points in mind and I hope the review helps.

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My Weekend Boyfriend~ SS by Behir_shrahir_love_
i) Cover - 4/10
ii) Title - 8/10
iii) Blurb - 2/10
iv) Plot & grammar - 6/15
v) Flow - 2/10
vi) Character development - 2.5/10
vii) Uniqueness - 3.5 /10
viii) Has the author followed you? (If not, 0, if yes, full 10) - 10/10
ix) Overall impression - 6 /15
Total - 44 /100

Cover was good but it could have been better if the text could be changed. The title and author's name wasn't visible in the cover nicely. Title was captivating and interesting, I liked it. The blurb needs a lot of changes. It has dialogues with wrong punctuations and the one thing you blurb has is dialogues. Blurb should be short and crisp and should give a small idea about the story but here the blurb felt more as a dark romance which it isn't. The plot was very cliché and wasn't well made, while the book needs a lot of editing on the basis of grammatical errors and punctuations. Flow of the book is too fast. I accept it is a short story but then increasing the number of words per chapter can also help rather than moving so fast. At one point Bela was angry over Mahir and the next time she was telling him her past. It didn't work well and made any sense. Character development wasn't visible at all. One time Mahir was a college guy all girls drool over and he maintains a respect over them while the next time he wants to eat Pani Puri or is afraid of spread breakers. These things will obviously make him a normal guy. While Bela sometimes behaves as a nerd and then she suddenly becomes arrogant or tomboy-ish. It feels weird reading so many changes in characters in chapter one itself. They are fictional characters not chameleons. One point they are this and the next time they change themself. The book felt unique in start but as the story continued it seriously lost all his essence and made no sense. Also Bela's past is too cliche and common which wasn't well described at all. I hope this review helps.

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Getting Her Back by Tanvitango
i) Cover - 5/10
ii) Title - 7.5 /10
iii) Blurb - 4.5 /10
iv) Plot & grammar - 12.5/15
v) Flow - 6.5/10
vi) Character development - 7 /10
vii) Uniqueness - 6.5/10
viii) Has the author followed you? (If not, 0, if yes, full 10) - 10/10
ix) Overall impression - 10/15

Total - 69.5/100

Cover was good but I don't think It matched the theme of the story while the title gave an idea about the book. The blurb was too long according to the story, blurb is always supposed to be short and now as yours is a short story, it tells too much about the book than it should. The grammar was good and the plot too. Flow was okay but at some points it felt stretched. The character development was good but a little bit rushed which felt weird. The plot wasn't that unique but the way you presented the characters made it special. Overall, change the blurb and check the book again to get a control over the stretched points.
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4)Retrouvaille by _starflies_
i) Cover - 5.5/10
ii) Title - 9/10
iii) Blurb - 7.5/10
iv) Plot & grammar - 12 /15
v) Flow -8.5 /10
vi) Character development - 6 /10
vii) Uniqueness - 8/10
viii) Has the author followed you? (If not, 0, if yes, full 10) -10 /10
ix) Overall impression - 13.5/15

Total - 80 /100

The cover felt very simple while the title was eye catching. The blurb you have written felt a bit longer than it was needed. Coming to the plot and grammar, I totally loved the whole idea of the story and how all points are connected to one another. Just a suggestion, don't put dialogues in bold, it kind of disturbs while reading. There were some grammatical errors and miss punctuation in some places and other than this, everything seemed perfect. There were too many characters in the story which caused confusion sometimes and erupted the flow of the story. The plot was indeed something new, with mysteries all around which certainly impress me. I hope this review helps.

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We Found Love by soulful_scribbler
i) Cover - 3.5 /10
ii) Title - 2 /10
iii) Blurb - 3/10
iv) Plot & grammar - 5/15
v) Flow - 4.5 /10
vi) Character development - 5 /10
vii) Uniqueness - 4 /10
viii) Has the author followed you? (If not, 0, if yes, full 10) - 10 /10
ix) Overall impression - 5.5/15

Total - 42.5/100

The cover felt more like an edit than a cover while the title was too common and cliché. Blurb is supposed to be short and crisp, it should have interesting vibes with it but the book lacked the vibes. Even the blurb was too short. There are many grammatical errors in error while the plot did feel new. Also, avoid adding emoticons in books, it is a book not a text message which should be filled with emojis. The flow of the book was a bit slow as compared to what it should be while the characters felt unrealistic at some points. The book is unique with the idea it has but I don't feel you are properly able to express it. I hope my review was helpful.

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Judged by firexqueen

Shaadi by Uditasree
Chapters read (3/3)
Title 0.5/10
Cover 1/10
Blurb 7.5/10
Plot & Grammar 7/15
Flow 2.5/10
Character development 5/10
Uniqueness 3/10
Did the author follow? 10/10
Overall impression 4/15
Your title is too simple and common since many marriage plots exist. Your cover is highly unattractive in its form. Your blurb is perfect for the first insight into the story but some mistakes could have been avoided. Your initial plot idea was great but then it all turned off. The plot got mixed up in the happening. The pace was too fast and the grammar mistakes can't be left unnoticed. The characters were clear but their emotions could have been worked upon. The plot was initially unique but after the first chapter, I found it a casual romance story.
Total 40.5/100
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Amore Tales-Meant to be by addiction_01
Chapters read (6/6)
Title 5.5/10
Cover 6.5/10
Blurb 0.5/10
Plot & Grammar 8/15
Flow 7.5/10
Character development 5/10
Uniqueness 1/10
Did the author follow? 10/10
Overall impression 3.5/15
Your title of the book is amazing but the story title is just lost. Your cover looks pretty but the amore looks a bit weird. You have no story blurb and the blurb of the collection is not at all nice. Your grammar was amazing with slight mistakes in it. The plot, however, was very common and not interesting through that. The end seemed to be rushed. I was more likely waiting to read what happens with her aunt and cousin which you totally skipped. In a short story, you should try to have very few characters which wasn't the case here. The introduction of too many characters, in the beginning, made me lose interest in the start. However, you caught it up during the story.
Total 47.5/100
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Charitraheen by _yesha_jain_
Chapters read (11/23)
Title 4/10
Cover 7.5/10
Blurb 0.5/10
Plot & Grammar 7.5/15
Flow 4/10
Character development 3/10
Uniqueness 2/10
Did the author follow? 10/10
Overall impression 5/15
Your cover is amazing except for two-three small things but your title is too long. Your blurb just says the thing which your title said already. Coming to everything inside of the story. You start with Sameer and his friends. You say everything from his perspective. I was expecting that you would rather write about her pain from her point of view. Then the characters were very much messed up. Sameer on the one hand believes in being a one-woman man after commitment and on the other hand, you show him cheating on his fiance. Rather than showing Naina's story of pain, you show their love story. You wanted to be near to the reality with your story but you miserably failed at that with Sameer's father in laws act and showing the love story. I guess you know that 99% of the prostitutes don't get out of that life. In general, your story pace was too fast. You showed his confusion and after some paragraphs, you showed his love. Overall, this story didn't manage to keep up my expectations for the story. Writing on such a sensitive matter, try to get away from the fandom and ship. A female based story would be much better at this place. Also, try to edit your story when you get time. Two things to your genre. Short stories generally focus on one important topic and they are short, mostly of a maximum of 20 chapters, as the name says. Kindly do consider it the next time.
Total 43.5/100
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Zindagi Aasan Nahi by _yesha_jain_
Chapters read (/5)
Title 1/10
Cover 7/10
Blurb 0/10
Plot & Grammar 3/15
Flow 0.25/10
Character development 0.75/10
Uniqueness 0.25/10
Did the author follow? 10/10
Overall impression /0.515
Your title isn't very attractive because it depicts a common plot. The winning book after the title should rather be removed. Your cover looks nice but could be better. The pictures aren't clear in their meaning and the way you've set them. Leave the intriguing part aside, you didn't even mention what the story is all about. Try to put a better blurb at that place. As per your plot, you chose a common plot and executed all the main happenings in seconds. You exaggerated your character’s traits and there was nothing to make the reader hooked. A lot is lacking in your story, including the proper usage of grammar.
Total 22.75/100
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