GENERAL FICTION

Judge: @rovenanatasha

My life: How's it going by Harm18Rma
Cover: 6
Title: 4.5
Blurb: 5
Plot: 5
Flow: 4.5
Character Development: 9.5
A follow: 10
Writing style and grammar: 4
Overall impression: 7.5
Total: 56
Review: Your title isn't good because your English is wrong and I cannot give you more marks because of that. The cover is well chosen but then again you have included too many badges from awards that it takes away the beauty of the cover. The blurb has too much gore for a Blurb, it has no warning of the triggers that it will not help if someone is emotionally unstable. I honestly cannot write about your plot because it is about real life events and it lies in temporary stagnation. The flow is problematic due to your incorrect use of grammar. You need to be careful as to how you use your subject and predicate. Your style of writing once again disturbs the flow of the story and it creates dull moments in between. My honest thought about your book is that if this is similar to a diary as it is reality you shouldn't enter it into an awards as it is a period of your life and you cannot expect anyone to score your book. Think about it.
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Definitions of Love by dusky_dreams
Cover: 9
Title: 9
Blurb: 9
Plot: 7
Flow: 7
Character Development: 12
A follow: 10
Writing style and grammar: 7.5
Overall impression: 13

Total: 83.5
Review: the cover is well done. I like these types of covers than the ones you get ready and set from Pinterest. The blurb was engaging except for the minor grammatical errors it was well written. The plot is not far fetched. It's a common sight and you could have enhanced on the plot a little bit according to my knowledge. The flow of your story can be a bit disturbed as you seem to jump from one to another without tying the ends and this is not a good sight. Your characters are well developed but there were a few loopholes that could be changed be careful of how you present your characters. Writing style is not that great since you have no good way of flowing your words. You need to look out since there is a huge flaw in that writing of yours.
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Messaliance by writer_vidhya
Cover: 4
Title: 10
Blurb: 7.5
Plot: 8
Flow: 8
Character Development: 13
A follow: 10
Writing style and grammar: 9.5
Overall impression: 13
Total: 83
Review: your cover really needs work. Your aesthetics inside were so much better so you need to
change the cover ASAP. The title though on the other hand is so beautiful. It's a really nice one you have used and I really love it. A job well done. The blurb can be improvised. A little bit more information would have done better. Your plot is interesting but I have een far oo many arranged marriage themed stories of India that the idea is getting a bit old. But the way it gets pivotal in the way you write it, it's beautiful. The cahar tears are real and relatable. I loved this fact about them. Your grammar and writing style is amazing but then again I thought you used too many exuberant words that it took out the essence but it was authentic and that was the real deal, good job. The story flows well and it is done meticulously. I'm impressed by your story.
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Judge: Victory_in_Winters13

Hope and faith by PlayerInTheRain

1.​Title- 10

2.​cover.- 10

3.​Blurb. -10

4.Plot-9

5)Flow-10

6)Character development-15

7)Follow-0

8)Writing style-10

9)Overall impression-14

Total - 88/100

Short review:I must say that I liked your book and the characters with the story.Also I loved the fact that you portrayed one with emotions and other a tomboy which is unusual but I like it.You could have easily reached above 90 but lack of reading the criteria resulted to lose a chunk of marks.
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Tales of common people by weasley20

1.​Title- 10

2.​cover.- 9

3.​Blurb. -10

4.Plot-8

5)Flow-8

6)Character development-12

7)Follow-10

8)Writing style-7

9)Overall impression-12

Total - 86/100

Short review:Overall,I must say it was a good depiction of characters and a pleasant story line but I still would like to know what happened exactly in the past.Also,there seemed to be some spelling errors and also I found that some pieces of the story were a bit irrelevant.To add to it,I felt that Nidhi must have more spunk in herself as well.
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Life is a black hole by SakshiDwivedi384

1.​Title- 10

2.​cover.- 7

3.​Blurb. -8

4.Plot-9

5)Flow-7

6)Character development-11

7)Follow-10

8)Writing style-7

9)Overall impression-11

Total - 80/100

Short review:I did like the story but the genre seemed like I am reading an autobiography than general fiction.Also,there were some abrupt changes too.Good luck with writing!!!
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Judge: firexqueen

The process of healing by MM_SJ_Writes

Chapters read (4/4)

Cover (6/10)

Title (5/10)

Blurb (6/10)

Plot (7/10)

Flow (3/10)

Character Development (7/15)

Writing style & Grammar (6/10)

Did the author follow? (10/10)

Overall impression (8/15)

Starting from your title, it's base is quite common. The phrase "the process of..." is often to be seen. The healing afterwards gives your title a small mystery but even that is pretty common. Your cover shows a girl, relating the story to a gender but the fonts on it along with their colour can be changed. Your blurb says what the story is about but I am missing that bit that is supposed to hook me to the story. Probably some questions could help at this place. You chose an amazing topic to write about. However, at places, there weren't enough pieces of information about your story. You're totally at the beginning and you showed 1 day in 4 chapters. You described the friendship very well but for that, it was pretty boring since your focus should be more on the girl. You haven't many important characters but their connections can't be properly seen. What's up Ashton? The 2-3 aesthetics per person, in the beginning, were pretty confusing and irritating. In some sentences, it wasn't well visible what you meant at that place. It wasn't to be figured out whether some sentence constructions were abruptly this way or they were grammatical mistakes. Overall I would advise you to re-read your chapter before publishing upon sentence construction. Pick the pace up and bring your story to the main point of the story.

Total (58/100)
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The bygone empress by DrKanu

Chapters read (9/9)

Cover (2/10)

Title (8.5/10)

Blurb (6/10)

Plot (7/10)

Flow (4/10)

Character Development (5/15)

Writing style & Grammar (7.5/10)

Did the author follow? (10/10)

Overall impression (8/15)

Your title is quite attractive since it reveals a tint about the story and keeps the mystery open. Your cover on the other hand should be changed. It's too dark and nothing is visible of the character. The font is randomly put on the cover, the size doesn't fit and something weird is visible on the bottom right. You lack to awaken the interest at the beginning of your blurb which is a throwback for the whole story. Everything else than that seems acceptable. To your plot, I am not a mythological fan but according to some sources, I find that you have chosen a creative plot. You showed something from another vision. The flow was fine but at times it felt like you were dragging the story. The pictures in between were not necessary since the description was enough. Mostly the story was about Mandodari and in the 8 chapters, I felt as if she's going through a negative development. You wanted to portray her as a strong developed woman but she rather seemed too weak. Ravan had no development at all. Your grammar is quite good but at some places, you had typing mistakes and some chapters should be completely edited. I didn't understand the connection of how Parvati and Lakshmi came in between when you were telling about Mandodari. It's a good book but quite some things lack in it.

Total (58/100)
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The heart of music by BlazePR5

Chapters read (8.5/9)

Cover (4/10)

Title (5/10)

Blurb (3/10)

Plot (5/10)

Flow (8/10)

Character Development (9/15)

Writing style & Grammar (6/10)

Did the author follow? (10/10)

Overall impression (6/15)

Your title is unique but I don't find any idea of what it figures or what I could think out of this story. Your cover fits the title but it's very blurry. The sticker on the top right isn't even visible. Your blurb catches things from here and there, making it to one glimpse. But this glimpse isn't properly understandable. Ara's past mystery has no definition or explanation. Other pieces of information lack too. Your plot is unique however while writing you leave out many details at the beginning which makes me uninterested in the story. The beginning of the story could have been written in a better way to give a grip on the further story. Your pace was pretty fine. However, Ara and Jack's first meeting wasn't that understandable. You had a quite good grip on your grammar but here too there were mistakes in the beginning. The story revolved around two important characters mostly. They were shaped quite nicely. The side characters could need a bit more details. The sibling's story was not at all understandable. Overall I would like to add that after reading the story I felt that your cover and your title don't suit your story at all.

Total (61/100)
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A Christmas chance by birdeyze

Chapters read (9/11)

Cover (3/10)

Title (4/10)

Blurb (3/10)

Plot (7/10)

Flow (8/10)

Character Development (6/15)

Writing style & Grammar (4/10)

Did the author follow? (10/10)

Overall impression (6/15)

Your cover is totally blurry including the title. The title does not seem appealing at all and the "." shouldn't be present there. The blurb tells a random story where you can't even figure out the proper traits or near information about the characters. The blurb starts somewhere and ends at another place. You have been creative with your plot but you could have worked a bit more on it. Almost 60% were a common story plot. The angels part was the most interesting point in it. The pace was pretty good even if at times it felt dragged. However, you really need to work on your characters as well as on your grammar. You get way too many characters and it was confusing to understand who is related in what way to her. In grammar, you often misplaced punctuation. Even other grammatical mistakes were to be seen. Your story needs to get edited.

Total (51/100)
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Twisted lines by unheard_tales

Chapters read (5/5)

Cover (6/10)

Title (5/10)

Blurb (5/10)

Plot (9/10)

Flow (9/10)

Character Development (11/15)

Writing style & Grammar (6/10)

Did the author follow? (10/10)

Overall impression (13/15)

The title doesn't seem really attractive to me and on the cover, your sticker overshadows the rest of it. Your fonts are simple and the background too makes it a bit boring. The cover could have been more attractive if you would feature the kids in it. Your blurb tells the main situation but it's pretty short and the hooking questions are missing to it. Now, to the inside of your story. I can just say amazing. You took a real issue that is rarely talked about and shaped it with Uniqueness. The pace was amazing since you didn't drag it. Amir and Raj's character were clear. And the end was able to carry the reader along with the emotions. However, the ending was too abrupt. I suggest you put a small epilogue on how Raj's father reacts to the death and how Amir develops hate for his own country's people. The pace got carried at that moment and I missed their fathers throughout. You could have shown more about the father-son boundings after their respective mother's death. On the point of grammar, you need to work a bit upon sentence formation. At times it was difficult to understand what you meant.

Total (74/100)

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HISTORICAL FICTION

Judge: YouGotLokied

Book : Awakened
Author : DrKanu

Chapters judged : 46

i) Cover - 5/10

ii) Title - 9/10

iii) Blurb - 7/10

iv) Writing style & grammar - 9/10

v) Hook & Flow - 8/10

vi) Plot - 9/10

vii) Character development - 12/15

viii) Has the author followed you? (If not, 0, if yes, full 10) - 10/10

ix) Overall impression - 14/15

Total - 83/100

Starting with cover, with what I believe, the white colour or light theme does not goes with theme of the book. Also, I would say it's quite simple, and font does not looks good. The Author's name is also not visible. The title, it suits the book perfectly. Coming to the grammar, it's beautiful. There are a few errors here and there, to which I recommend a light editing. The time travel, I believe the blurb should have more of actual story rather than the first few chapters. I'm not much knowledgeable about Mahabharat, correct me if I'm wrong- Ashwatthama, was a part of Shiv or Rudra, similar to Shivansh? And Vagmi/Aahana is undoubtedly Shivanshi. Even if he didn't knew about her being the daughter of Shiv, there must be some sort of connection? Like, shouldn't he have a sisterly feeling from her? How can he have different thoughts for her? They both have same origin afterall?? Other than that, I would say your book is good. Your book has a great future ahead, all the best.
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Book : Raghili

Author : mythooolover

Chapters judged : 16

i) Cover - 9/10

ii) Title - 8/10

iii) Blurb - 7/10

iv) Writing style & grammar - 6/10

v) Hook & Flow - 7/10

vi) Plot - 8/10

vii) Character development - 11/15

viii) Has the author followed you? (If not, 0, if yes, full 10) - 10/10

ix) Overall impression - 12/15

Total - 78/100

The cover is just gorgeous. The title, I would say is wonderful. Coming to writing, there were a grammatical errors. A mild editing is strongly sugessted. The bond between the brothers was perfectly expressed in words. I have noticed the use of A/N in between the chapter, I would suggest not to mix things like this. Note in between breaks the continuity of the flow of chapter. Your book has a great future ahead, all the best.
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Book : Pursuit of the Inevitable

Author : mythooolover

Chapters judged : 7

i) Cover - 5/10

ii) Title - 9/10

iii) Blurb - 6/10

iv) Writing style & grammar - 8/10

v) Hook & Flow - 9/10

vi) Plot - 9/10

vii) Character development - 13/15

viii) Has the author followed you? (If not, 0, if yes, full 10) - 10/10

ix) Overall impression - 13/15

Total - 82/100

The cover and blurb, both aren't attractive for a reader to jump in. The cover is dull and monotonous. The Blurb has sentences formed unsatisfactorily, the story is beautiful, a twist and spice would do wonders. The concept of the book is different and brilliant. You way of portrayal is applaudable. There's some mystery in Ijay's character, which creates a sense of desire to read further. The way you show tits and bits about him, and not leaving anyone hanging on a cliff is great. Looking forward from this book, good luck.
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Book : Kanha's Priya

Author : jimmyprotested29

Chapters judged, till "Two Wars"

i) Cover - 8/10

ii) Title - 7/10

iii) Blurb - 8/10

iv) Writing style & grammar - 8/10

v) Hook & Flow - 9/10

vi) Plot - 9/10

vii) Character development - 14/15

viii) Has the author followed you? (If not, 0, if yes, full 10) - 0/10

ix) Overall impression - 11/15

Total - 74/100

The cover is pretty. Blurb is eye catching. The word play is pretty good. Dhriti is a strong character, and her portrayal is done beautifully. Her bond with her brother, i.e. Pandavas is fascinating. I really like the way you wrote the battle part. Looking forward from this book, good luck.
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Judge: Slytherinchick25

Book #1 Roaring twenties Plus Other Historical Events by PriscillaYiadom4

i) Cover - 0.5/10

ii) Title - 1/10

iii) Blurb - 0.5/10

iv) Writing style & grammar - 1/10

v) Hook & Flow - 0/10

vi) Plot - 0/10

vii) Character development - 0/15

viii) Has the author followed you? (If not, 0, if yes, full 10) - 10/10

ix) Overall impression - 0.5/15

Total - 13.5/100

Review : The cover was extremely boring and it did not connect to the story at all, and the fonts were extremely unpleasant too. The blurb was just a line. Writing style? There was nothing for me to comment on, this is just a facts book. You should really learn what is historical fiction before writing one. Historical fiction usually recounts a famed event of the past or a memorable, recognizable period time period as experienced by fictional characters, but may also describe a historical figure that must deal with a variety of imagined situations. It is not writing a few facts here and there. Hence I could not give you any marks for Hook/Flow, Writing Style, Plot/Character development. Please note this from the next time.
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Book #2 Don't Hold Your Breath, Roar by athena-spawn

i) Cover - 8/10

ii) Title - 8/10

iii) Blurb - 8/10

iv) Writing style & grammar - 8/10

v) Hook & Flow - 7/10

vi) Plot - 10/10

vii) Character development - 10/15

viii) Has the author followed you? (If not, 0, if yes, full 10) - 10/10

ix) Overall impression - 13/15

Total - 82/100

Review : The cover was really beautiful. The title was pretty inspiring and had a deep meaning. The blurb could have been longer and could also have a few quotes or dialogues from the story to just get a peek inside. The writing style was amazing! But I would also like to say, most Wattpaders are not fond of very long chapters. You could divide it into a few more chapters nonetheless. The flow was pretty amazing and what I loved the most about the book would be the plot. It was wonderful! The character development of Melissa was also good. I loved her feminist stand, how she questions the society. I really liked the story very much!
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Book #3 Promises Are Meant To Be Broken by Avi_Amour

i) Cover - 2/10

ii) Title - 7/10

iii) Blurb - 7/10

iv) Writing style & grammar - 7/10

v) Hook & Flow - 8/10

vi) Plot - 8/10

vii) Character development - 9/15

viii) Has the author followed you? (If not, 0, if yes, full 10) - 10/10

ix) Overall impression - 12/15

Total - 70/100

Review : The cover was very boring according to me. The manipulation was not that good nor was the texture very beautiful. According to me, you could get much better covers from other shops. The blurb could have something other than the poem, which would actually tell something about the story, a summarized version so that it could be looked into. The writing style was good, but mixing sanskrit-hindi with english was kind of weird for me. The plot was pretty good, but I have read too many books like this. The character development was very good. I liked the book a lot! This twist in Mahabharata is a pretty good read!

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Book #4 The Viragous Regnant by _justloveharry_33

i) Cover - 2.5/10

ii) Title - 6.5/10

iii) Blurb - 8/10

iv) Writing style & grammar - 5/10

v) Hook & Flow - 7/10

vi) Plot - 9/10

vii) Character development - 9/15

viii) Has the author followed you? (If not, 0, if yes, full 10) - 10/10

ix) Overall impression - 12/15

Total - 69/100

Review : The cover could have been better, yet it connects to the story well. The title was good, the meaning behind it was pretty amazing. The blurb was really good. It was a beautiful one, but I would say it could have more quotes from the book, so as to give a peek. There were a lot of grammatical errors in the story, it could be edited. The hook and flow was pretty good. And what I liked was the plot. I have read stories of Krishna's sister, but I have never ever read a story of Nakula's wife. That was a great change! The character development could be better. I really liked the book and it was a fresh idea which could be written better.

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Book #5 The Broken Prince by Vaikarthana06

i) Cover - 2/10

ii) Title - 6/10

iii) Blurb - 8/10

iv) Writing style & grammar - 6/10

v) Hook & Flow - 7/10

vi) Plot - 8/10

vii) Character development - 8/15

viii) Has the author followed you? (If not, 0, if yes, full 10) - 10/10

ix) Overall impression - 11/15

Total - 66/100

Review : The cover was too bland, you could ask for a better one from shops. The title was apt after I started reading the story. I liked the blurb but it had a few grammatical errors, other than that it could also have dialogues from the story. I liked your writing style, but there were too many grammatical errors in the story. The hook and flow were fine too. The plot was great, the untold story of Lakshmana. And I really liked the story too!
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Judge: -confusedkri-

1) Two Warriors- Aegis Of Eternal Lovers by n-i-t-h-y-a

i) Cover - 0.5/10

ii) Title - 5/10

iii) Blurb - 0.5/10

iv) Writing style & grammar - 0.10/10

v) Hook & Flow - 0.25/10

vi) Plot - 2/10

vii) Character development - 1.75/15

viii) Does the author follow you? (If not, 0, if yes, full 10) - 10/10

ix) Overall impression - 0.25/15

Total - 20.35/100

The cover was very bland. Go for a cover shop. I liked the title, just one change to be done, instead of "-" use ":". The blurb was poorly written. Consider rewriting it. There were no quotations at all. I couldn't understand who's speaking, who's doing what. There were many grammatical mistakes, and spelling errors. It would be "caressing", not "carsing". Silly mistakes were throughout the book. Also, it would be "peeping", not "peeing". Your spelling mistakes can change the whole meaning of the book. In short, your book needs to be re-written. The flow of the story was very slow in the beginning, and hook constantly gets broken by spelling mistakes and poor execution in writing.
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2) Dharmasangini by Sanjanasen67

i) Cover - 7.5/10

ii) Title - 4.5/10

iii) Blurb - 4/10

iv) Writing style & grammar - 1/10

v) Hook & Flow - 3/10

vi) Plot - 6/10

vii) Character development - 6/15

viii) Does the author follow you? (If not, 0, if yes, full 10) - 10/10

ix) Overall impression - 10/15

Total - 52/100

The cover is extremely beautiful! Though your title is justified, it's your own created word. Using "||" on both sides is not required. Consider removing them. Using fancy fonts in the blurb looked unprofessional, try changing it to a normal font. Sentence formations were off in the blurb. Usage of pictures was unprofessional. Reduce the usage of pictures. There were no descriptions about what's happening in the story, there are only dialogues.

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3) Transformed by @brett_harper

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4) Royals & Ruins by jojobean1298

i) Cover - 2/10

ii) Title - 5/10

iii) Blurb - 4/10

iv) Writing style & grammar - 6/10

v) Hook & Flow - 3/10

vi) Plot - 4/10

vii) Character development - 9/15

viii) Does the author follow you? (If not, 0, if yes, full 10) - 10/10

ix) Overall impression - 10/15

Total - 53/100

The cover looks very bland, with just one picture and a text on it. Try manipulating it, a little. Though the title sounds just like a Historical Fiction book, it does have a room for improvement. Blurb was too long, giving away almost every information. Some paragraphs look unnecessarily longer than required, try to cut them off when you edit the book.
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5) Rebel Love by BreanneLHeureux

i) Cover - 1/10

ii) Title - 3/10

iii) Blurb - 4/10

iv) Writing style & grammar - 6/10

v) Hook & Flow - 4/10

vi) Plot - 6/10

vii) Character development - 7/15

viii) Does the author follow you? (If not, 0, if yes, full 10) - 10/10

ix) Overall impression - 8/15

Total - 49/100

Blending in cover could be better. Ask your Graphic Designer to do a redo. You made the title unnecessarily longer by adding "(Male James Kidd x Oc Love story)" to it. You can add it at the end of your blurb. The paragraphs were too long at many places. Some lines were repetitive.
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