FANFICTION
Judge: __wandering__

BOOK NAME:- Fallen: For the heart or guise? By Psr1403

COVER: 10 /10

TITLE: 9.5/10

BLURB: 9.5/10

CHARACTERISATION: 14/15

FLOW: 9.5/10

PLOT: 9.5/10

WRITING STYLE & GRAMMER: 9.5/10

AUTHOR FOLLOW: 10/10

OVERALL IMPRESSION: 14.5/15

TOTAL: 96/100

SHORT REVIEW: Starting with the cover which is mindblowing and very attractive. The cover is efficient in itself to attract a good amount of readers. The title suits the storyline and I guess there couldn't have been any better title. The blurb was nice and interesting. Even though in the introduction part there wasn't any description about the characters but in the first chapter itself and short dialogue of Samaina could give an idea about their traits. The story proceeded smoothly which is really appreciable as generally the writer who writes a story which is new and unique, they rush the story and the content becomes very haphazard. No grammatical errors were found. Overall I really like the idea though it isn't that new, but still the content drew me.

Good job! And all the best for future works.
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BOOK NAME:- You stole a heart by arhana12

COVER: 7.5 /10

TITLE: 9/10

BLURB: 8/10

CHARACTERISATION: 14/15

FLOW: 9.5/10

PLOT: 10/10

WRITING STYLE & GRAMMER: 9.5/10

AUTHOR FOLLOW: 10 /10

OVERALL IMPRESSION: 14.5/15

TOTAL: 92/100

SHORT REVIEW: Starting with the cover, it is good but could have been better! Not that attractive which would draw readers towards itself. If in case the writer isn't able to produce a better cover using graphics and all, then she can consult any graphic designer for that. The title goes with the story well but it is common too for which I have reduced the marks. The blurb was ok but could be more interesting....Talking about the plot, it is indeed very unique and interesting. A film star getting emotional attached with a fan isn't something we see in real life and neither have we seen something written on it. Great choice of plot *thumbs up* Now, when you keep a separate part dedicated to characters, you need to keep it short and clear. Moodboards aren't comprehensible to all, so along with moodboards you need to keep a short description about the personalities of the different characters. But as the content gave a fair idea about the characters in the initial chapters, I didn't deduct a lot of points. The story went on smoothly which is really appreciative as not many writers can maintain the smoothness while writing something new. There were no such grammatical errors and I like the story.

Good job and good luck for the future work.
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BOOK NAME:- Dhi by SohiniModak8

COVER:8.5/10

TITLE:9/10

BLURB:9/10

CHARACTERISATION: 14 /15

FLOW: 8.5/10

PLOT: 10 /10

WRITING STYLE & GRAMMER: 8 /10

AUTHOR FOLLOW: 10 /10

OVERALL IMPRESSION: 14 /15

TOTAL: 91/100

SHORT REVIEW: The cover could have been more attractive. If in case the writer isn't able to produce a better cover using graphics and all, then she can consult any graphic designer for that. Dhi means understanding and imagination, and here the writer has utilised the phrase nicely, but the meaning of Dhi isn't known to all. So a more easy to comprehend title could have been better. Now, the blurb was interesting but to understand it properly one has to read twice or thrice, use simpler words or sentences so that readers won't skip your story. Even though the characters are taken up from Mahabharata, you need to give a small introduction of each character. Putting the pictures would help in imagining the face, and not what sort of demeanour they have. Plus Mahabharat is known only to Indian readers whereas Wattpad is open for everyone, and most global readers wouldn't be knowing the story of Mahabharata. About the flow, I didn't see the smoothness. Places where a new scene is started abruptly and it confuses the readers. The change in scene should have been a little more soft and smooth. Grammatical errors weren't present. I like the concept of mixing two different yugas and bringing up an interesting story.

Good job!

Good luck for your future work !
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BOOK NAME:- A unique psychological love by Artistic_Pri

COVER: 10/10

TITLE: 9/10

BLURB: 10/10

CHARACTERISATION:13.5/15

FLOW: 8/10

PLOT: 8.5/10

WRITING STYLE & GRAMMER: 9 /10

AUTHOR FOLLOW: 10 /10

OVERALL IMPRESSION: 14 /15

TOTAL: 92/100

SHORT REVIEW: The cover is amazing, it's attractive and appealing too! The title goes with the story but too common to use too. Something interesting and innovative could have worked. Coming to the plot, it isn't that unique as we have come across many stories revolving around the concept of separation of childhood sweethearts, falling in love with another person, they meet again and love rekindles, but there is uniqueness on ground of story proceeding. The blurb is well written and induces keen interest inside a reader to open the book and read it. I'm not that impressed with the flow of the story as I felt it was rushed and many places needed detailed writing. And when we decide to write a character sketch in the beginning, we need to give a brief description. By brief description I don't mean long paragraphs, No! Write 3-5 lines but those 3-5 lines should give a fair idea about the character and should make the readers clear with what personality each character is holding. There were no such grammatical errors, but there were typos.* I would suggest the writer take some time to think and produce a little more elaborative content, as there were many places where we need to read thrice or twice to understand what happened. * This is based on my personal experience, and might be differing from the regular reader's POV.
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Judged by Muskanganguli22

Dil Musafir Hai Tere Ishq main season 2 by Behir_shrahir_love_

Cover -8/10

Title-8/10

Blurb-8/10

Character development-10/15

Flow 8/10

Plot 7.5/10

Writing style and grammar 8/10

Has the author followed me? 10/10

Overall impression 12/15

Total-79.5/100

Cover is nice but it could have been better if you would have tried some more fonts, graphics and more pics of the couple ...it doesn't give any clue about the story.The title is given as season 2 it means you have already wrote it's season 1. The title is good but it is not giving any clue about the story you should have to choose the better title for the story.You have Given the dialogues in the your description... it is giving the little clue about the plot of the story... but the description is not looking something new...there are many stories with description like this.I was not able to know about the characters as you have not given any character sketch. You have not clearly mentioned that who Rj is and kuhu is pregnent... and about Bela's pursuing MBA in delhi..what about it?. And you didn't wrote anything about vish's family . You could have given the character sketch about them so that we could have understand their nature well.The flow of the story is going well... but it would have been better if you would have given some small flashbacks of Mahir with Bani when he got to know that she died... and you didn't mentioned how Manik reached at the beach where some goons tried to misbehave with Bela...The plot was not looking something unique there are many stories like this where marriage was going to happen with someone and happened with someone else... This was good that you choose another reason that Bani died... as there are many stories where bride Ran away...I like to your writing style... punctuations are there... but some where tense is not correct as it should be is but you have written was... some typos are also there. As you have written almost all the dialogues in Hindi... there is not much scope of grammar mistakes.

I liked the story .... that's why read all the chapters available. But the point is that I have read many stories like this...
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Wapas to aaja yaar by Jenisundar

Cover-7/10

Title-8.5/10

Blurb-0/10

Character development -10.5/15

Flow-7/10

Plot-9/10

Writing style and grammar-8/10.

Has the Author followed me?-0/10

Overall impression-11/15

Total-61/100

Cover is simple with story name and writers name.. it would have better if you have tried some fonts and graphics... I will suggest you to try some graphic shops...they can make exact cover for your book.The title is looking like according to story... I think here abhi is asking pragya to come or pragya is asking his son's to come back...what ever it is but it is suitable for your story.You have not given any description... the description attracts the readers to read the story... you have wrote in the description that this is three short story... if you have changed your mind to convert this into a long story you should have changed the description according to the story...

I know that you have continued story taking a particular track from the serial... but I was not able to understand particular things... as why as why abhi is considering Shahana is his daughter... I like this thing that you took sarala as negative..but I was not able to understand her character well . You could have given the character sketch about the nature of the character in your story..The flows was fine but sometimes I was feeling little bored.. there were many things you could have tried in this story ... you could have given some flashbacks in mind of sarala.. according to the serial the reason of Bulbul's Death was alia.. I think alia could have confessed as she is changed in your story..The plot was very good and unique from all other stories of abhigya.. the Twist of Pragya 's other sons was little unexpected... and the negative sarala was also a good thought of yours.Your writing style is good and grammar is also good ..there are some typos but it happens .. some where you have used emojis it is rare but you have used it.. and you have used many suniye in Pragya dialogues... we know that Pragya don't take abhi's name but you have used many times where there was not necessity of it.The plot was very different and unique... but to some time I was feeling little bore. There were some loopholes in your story also..
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Lovable life by JagyasheniRoy

Cover-8.5/10

Title- 9/10

Blurb-4/10

Character development- 12/15

Flow-7.5/-10

Plot -6/10

Writing style and grammar-7.5/10

Overall impression-10/15

Has the author followed me?10/10

Total-74.5/100

The cover is nice it is giving the glimpse of abhigya's life in this story. .. But.. could be much better in the terms of colour scheme ,fonts and graphics.

The title is fully suitable for your story...

You have given a very short blurb... I know it is a short story but you could have given some dialogues...

You have given the character sketch about all the characters... It was good.

As it is a short story.. you have taken many things fastly...but it was nice.

The plot was nothing new... it is a simple story of two persons met and fell in love ...there are many stories like this ..you could have tried something new in the story to make it little spicy.

Your writing style is good.. but you have used full stop Between the dialogues of the characters... and there were some grammatical mistakes also like you have written you didn't let me to sleep but it should be you didn't let me sleep.This was a cute little love story with no villain in it but there was nothing new in this story.the author has followed me.

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Abhigya's life by JagyasheniRoy

Cover-6.5/10

Title-8.5/10

Blurb-1/10

Character development-12/15

Flow-7.5/10

Plot-8/10

Writing style and grammar 7/10

Has the author followed me? 10/10

Overall impression 11/15

Total -71.5/100

Cover is looking very nice and as it is a collection of OS... The cover was looking suitable for it but it is that you have written only the stories name you have not written your name as in writers name you should have written your name.The title is also looking very beautiful according to the collection of your OS ....as you have mentioned different lives of abhigya in different OS written in the story...You have not given any description for the story.. you have only written that this book has many collection of os.The character development was very good but sometime it was not evident on your characters.You have written many small OS in your book and the flow of the story was going good.You have taken some simple plots in your book... and some were continued from the serial... they were nicely executed.Your writing style is nice but there were many grammatical mistakes... and also you have used full stop between the dialogues of the characters.Author has followed me.some OS were the one simple... there were nothing new in it .... but I was impressed with the continued one from the serial .

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Judge: addiction_01

Note to participants: These books are judged by Addiction_01, because trisitajuneja0912 couldn't submit the reviews on time.

You are my favorite mistake by accidentalgenius77

Title 4/10

Cover 3.5/10

Blurb 4/10

Plot 5.5/10

Character development 4/15

Flow 3.5/10

Writing style & Grammar 6.5/10

Has the author followed? 10/10

Overall impression 6.5/15

Total 47.5/100

The title of your story is relevant to the concept, however, I would prefer a short one for your story for it to be eye-catching. Also, the correct form of the title should be 'You Are My Favourite Mistake'. The cover looks fine, but it doesn't give any idea about your story. The blurb mainly has the description of Abhi which shows as if he's the main lead instead of it being an 'Abhigya' Fanfiction. The plot is common. There are many stories where the guys misunderstand the female and time later he realizes the truth and does everything for them to end up together, so there's nothing exceptional about your plot. I have to say, you've done your best to show that Abhi is everything in the story because in the first chapter itself you've given so many details about him that it was hard to grasp those and on the contrary, it was way less with Pragya. In the beginning, your story seems very slow-paced which turns off the interest of readers. Your writing style is different yet good however, there are many places where you need to work on your grammar and especially punctuations. You cannot start somebody's name without a capital letter! In all, your story seems common and gives an impression only about a single character which doesn't justify the fanfiction.

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Reason For My Life by accidentalgenius77

Title 4/10

Cover 3/10

Blurb 3/10

Plot 4.5/10

Character development 7/15

Flow 5/10

Writing style & Grammar 2/10

Has the author followed? 10/10

Overall impression 4/15

Total 42.5/100

The cover of your story is not apt and I would suggest you to choose a better one since it doesn't convey anything about your story except it's an 'Abhigya' Fanfiction. The title could've been better because it just looks incomplete to me. The blurb doesn't convey anything about the story or the reason why readers should be reading your story. It's nothing eye catchy for a reader. The plot is good although it requires a better execution. The characters are described well by breaking in different chapters which enable readers to have a good idea about the characters. You have to improve your writing style a lot since your story requires a lot of editing because of grammatical errors and especially punctuations. The things that should be highlighted aren't and the story just keeps on going and going without any resistance. The concept is good and if you work well on this story, then there's a chance for it to be improved.

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Hazel Meets Chocolate- An Arshi Fanfiction by springoceania

Title 5/10

Cover 3/10

Blurb 7/10

Plot 7/10

Character development 11/15

Flow 7/10

Writing style & Grammar 7.5/10

Has the author followed? 10/10

Overall impression 11.5/15

Total 69/100

The title is good although there is nothing unique in it. The cover is too plain or simply, it just doesn't look apt for your story. The characters shown there aren't that visible because of the size so, a new cover would be a great step. The blurb is very intriguing and gives a proper idea about the story. The plot is interesting and looks unknowingly mysterious to me which is a plus point. The character development and details are done nicely. The story seems to have a good pace and I would call it an almost perfect way you've started and ended the chapters, mostly the endings. Your writing style is also very different and amazing, also your grammar is almost okay. A little bit of editing would definitely be preferable. In all, it seems a good Fanfiction to read because of the concept and idea and the way you're portraying the characters.

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The Billionaire's Surrogate by BunnysDoll

Title 3/10

Cover 1.5/10

Blurb 1.5/10

Plot 2/10

Character development 4/15

Flow 3/10

Writing style & Grammar 0.5/10

Has the author followed? 10/10

Overall impression 1/15

Total 25.5/100

The title of your story is very common. I have seen many books with the exact same title, so nothing new with it. The cover is not that eye-catchy or something that would peak the interest of readers. The blurb is very short and doesn't convey much of an idea about the story. The plot is very common and it seems you haven't justified what you were actually meaning to write. There's no flow in the story. One moment, there's one scene about Neil thinking about something or the very next moment it'll be something about Avni, without any prior information or anything. You need to improve a LOT with your writing style and grammar. You can't just write Lil instead of little or phn instead of phone! Who the hell would be interested to read in such a way!? I definitely wouldn't try your story at all with what you've written or presented because there's just no concept or proper execution.

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FANTASY

Judge: firexqueen

Elements|| The lost medallion by Anastaciawolf

Chapters read(14/17)

Title 5/10

Cover 10/10

Blurb 2/10

Plot 5/10

Flow & Hook 5/15

Character Development 5/10

Writing style & Grammar 8/10

Did the author follow? 10/10

Overall impression 6.5/15

I have nothing to say about your cover since it's perfect but I am not that sure about your title. It leaves a huge space of interpretation open and doesn't say anything at all about your story. Moreover, it's not that unique in its parts. Your blurb is very short and unattractive because of that reason. I found your plot was quite normal for fantasy and very common as well. You had introduced too many characters in the beginning and only the main character remained to be hooked. For me, your story was quite dragged and in 14 chapters I found fewer things connected to fantasy. Your story also needs slight editing on grammar and typing mistakes.

Total 56.5/100

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The possessive daddy's little girl by BunnysDoll

Chapters read(6/9)

Title 0.25/10

Cover 2/10

Blurb 0/10

Plot 0?25/10

Flow & Hook 0.25/15

Character Development 1/10

Writing style & Grammar 1.5/10

Did the author follow? 10/10

Overall impression 0.5/15

Such a title for a fantasy story, nice. But not at all suitable or unique or attractive or interesting. The fancy fonts don't help as well. Your cover could also have been a lot better. Such a long text, with so many fonts and colours, doesn't look nice at all. You told it's a DDLG story based on Avneil in the blurb (which already has been mentioned in your title), that's all. You could have told a bit more and tried to make it unique rather than something totally casual. Moreover, your insta id is good for your profile description, not book description. Now coming to the actual plot inside. Could you please beforehand tell me why this book landed in the fantasy genre? Because I found nothing as such. There's a basic, very casual and not at all creative plot. The characters stay as they are. They have no proper traits. Within 2 hours they get into a DDLG relationship. Something as consent doesn't exist in your story. I have nothing against DDLG stories or smut but baseless smut is useless.

Total 15.75/100

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Fated Souls by omlata18

Chapters read(11/11)

Title 2/10

Cover 5/10

Blurb 8/10

Plot 7.5/10

Flow & Hook 8/15

Character Development 5/10

Writing style & Grammar 8/10

Did the author follow? 10/10

Overall impression 9/15

Your title is too common and presents a typical cliché story. Your cover looks more like a horror cover. It suits your story but something is missing in it. You should let a redo be done. You have given a proper situation in the blurb but questions of the future or a mysterious scene from the further story can help you to make it unique. Your plot is amazing but another point to start and playing with the present and future could make it even more amazing. I felt the pace was awesome but sometimes it wasn't clear what it's supposed to mean at that place. The hook stayed while at some points I felt like leaving the story. You didn't have too many characters and they were mostly clear in their appearance. However, at times I felt like they were escaping what their traits mean and often I couldn't figure out how to connect with your characters and their emotions. You have a very good grammar but there were some little things to be edited.

Total 62.5/100

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Covert scars by Nefili123

Chapters read(20/29)

Title 6/10

Cover 4/10

Blurb 8.5/10

Plot 8.5/10

Flow & Hook 12/15

Character Development 7.5/10

Writing style & Grammar 9/10

Did the author follow? 10/10

Overall impression 12.5/15

Your title gives me no idea about the story or the story's relevance to the genre. Your cover is simple and it's blurry along with the "love, hate, war, peace" as a highly unattractive factor in it. The foreground and background don't have a match at all. Your blurb is magnificent, just I was missing some more questions to hook the reader. I loved your plot except for some times when it wasn't clear of what happened at which point. But that got clear through the context. Your main characters were portrayed very well. Some characters such as Axton and "the elder" did raise questions. Your writing style is very good but in some places, you could have been more expressive in the style of writing and portraying the emotions of characters. Some minor punctuation mistakes were there.

Total 78/100

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Allied with dragons by Duncana1003

Chapters read(17/44)

Title 10/10

Cover 3/10

Blurb 6/10

Plot 8/10

Flow & Hook 9.5/15

Character Development 6/10

Writing style & Grammar 8.5/10

Did the author follow? 10/10

Overall impression 9/15

Your title is very intriguing and well-chosen. Your cover lacks all of the important criteria. Even the font blends with the background. Your blurb gives an important insight into the story but it could be a bit more intriguing. There were some small typing and formulation mistakes. The plot was original and amazing. However, your characters were at times not properly clear. You dragged the story at unnecessary parts and rushed it at important parts but the hook remained till the end. The main thing mentioned in the blurb and Prologue couldn't be witnessed. You should also try to be clear on whose POV it is.

Total 70/100
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Pacific reflections by Evergreen_Ebony

Title 9/10

Cover 7/10

Blurb 5/10

Plot 8/10

Flow & Hook 7.5/15

Character Development 6.5/10

Writing style & Grammar 8/10

Did the author follow? 10/10

Overall impression 10/15

Your title and cover connect with each other. Your title is attractive but doesn't show a 100% connection with the genre. Your cover is beautiful but I feel like certain things, which should have been highlighted, are blending with the background. The blurb does its work of first insight into the story but it lacks the work of keeping the reader also hooked in the future. Your plot is simply amazing. However, coming to the main point of the story took too long. There are irrelevant things in the story, in my opinion. I don't know whether they will find relevance soon. The main characters are clear but side characters could have given a proper introduction on their appearance. Also, try to edit your story. There were punctuation and typing mistakes which made it difficult to read the story.

Total 71/100
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Judge: UditaJaiswal3

Title- Unconnected From My World
Username- shamaru12
Points-
i) Cover:- 8/10
ii) Title:- 9/10
iii) Blurb:- 9.5/10
iv) Flow & Hook:- 13.5/15
v) Writing style & Grammar:- 8/10
vi) Has author followed you:- 10/10
vii) Overall impression:- 13.5/15
Total- 71.5/100
Review- nice story! Blurb was very interesting. Though there are grammatical mistakes but
overall I really like reading your story
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Title- Clocks and Stars
Username- LenteInApril
Points-
i) Cover:- 8.5/10
ii) Title:- 9/10
iii) Blurb:- 8.5/10
iv) Flow & Hook:- 14/15
v) Writing style & Grammar:- 8/10
vi) Has author followed you:- 10/10
vii) Overall impression:- 14/15
Total- 72/100
Review- Quiet interesting! I really like the plot of the story. The opening chapter was very good I
enjoyed a lot reading your story
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Title- Will we unite?
Username- Solely_Pranbir
i) Cover:- 9/10
ii) Title:- 8/10
iii) Blurb:- 8/10
iv) Flow & Hook:- 13/15
v) Writing style & Grammar:- 7.5/10
vi) Has author followed you:- 10/10
vii) Overall impression:- 13/15
Total- 68.5/100
Review- Overall concept was nice! I had a great time reading your story though your writing skill
need to improve otherwise story was nice
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Title- Illusion: The Mural of King Arthur
Username- CroodsGirl
Points-
i) Cover:- 9/10
ii) Title:- 9/10
iii) Blurb:- 9/10
iv) Flow & Hook:- 14/15
v) Writing style & Grammar:- 8.5/10
vi) Has author followed you:- 10/10
vii) Overall impression:- 14.5/15
Total- 74/100
Review- Very nice cover! The story has good flow. The title is also very appropriate. Overall it
was very nice story with very good imagination that you have shown
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Title- The Black Diamond
Username- Sergio_the_Saint
Points-
i) Cover:- 9/10
ii) Title:-9/10
iii) Blurb:- 8/10
iv) Flow & Hook:- 13.5/15
v) Writing style & Grammar:- 8.5/10
vi) Has author followed you:- 10/10
vii) Overall impression:- 13.5/15
Total- 71.5/100
Review- It was a nice story. I really like the cover of the story the way it was described. Though
there are grammar mistakes too. Somewhere your description was also needed to be improved
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