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Lol remember Graphic Organizers

So upon my younger days of school and English classes, I was taught to do graphic organizers for fiction works and non fiction works.

I sadly don't have any examples of what I did for school but I found one that I did randomly did for fun.


Characters: Minty (Main), Oliver (dark hearted), Commander Joe, Olivia (Oliver's younger sister), Lily (Minty's best friend) Trainer Tune (totally not ripped off from Warrior Cats: Untold Tales/s) and Wulfric (evil)

Very creative I know /s

The setting was going to take place in New York

I have only one page that was actually written and tell to tell you the truth, it's not very good.

Also table of contents and boy oh boy, titles are weird.

I might have been in 5th grade maybe when I made this? Idk

Ch1: Welcome to New York

Ch2: Public Library

Ch3: Oliver and Olivia (a coisentence) (probably meant to say a coincidence)

Ch4: Eeek, bad guys

Ch5: Joe and Tune to the rescue

Ch6: Hard training and kidnappers

Ch7: He is a Sith (from Star Wars)

Ch8: Fight, Fight and more fight

Ch9: Mexican restaurant blues (why specifically a Mexican restaurant idk)

Ch10: We are coming Oliver.

There is only one page written. Only one and I think it's pretty bad.

"Have you ever vomited on a car ride or rollercoaster?" Lily's little, annoying, 8 year old brother asked me. (Whoa adjectives)

"None," I grumbled. My name is Minty and I'm 11 years old (yeah I was probably that age or so when I wrote this. I tend to write characters around my age which is not true anymore like for example, one of my characters is in his 20's which I am not yet)

I'll be in 6th grade soon after summer ends. Until them, I'm stuck here in this car with my best friend, Lily, and her family. (Even though this is the first page, I don't fully remember why I decided to put Minty on a road trip with her best friend and her family)

Anyway John, the 8 year old, always asked me dumb questions from [*insert state here*] to [*insert state here*]

"John, please stop asking Minty questions," Lily sighed.

I looked at her. She has been quiet for a long time.

I remember the horrible incident that happened after [*insert school event because idk if other schools did this*], in the classroom, the epic party.

Her ex-boyfriend cheated on her by snogging(kissing essentially. I was reading a lot of Harry Potter at the time) the second popular girl in 5th grade, Aisa (ok backtrack. HOW ARE YOU ALL DATING?! YOU'RE 11! And I think it should say "her now ex-boyfriend cheated on her")

Lily and I accidentally walked on them (in on them I think is what I meant)

Lily was yelling at them for a long time that I nearly deaf (went deaf. God I didn't go back and proofread and I still don't do that :/)

I told her that she can always find another one (again, 11 year olds written by an 11 year old or so. Around that age range)

She can always say that she doesn't care about her ex-boyfriend. She agreed but that doesn't stop her from moaning about it. (Not in that way. I was still innocent at the time.)

I told her that she might find someone else. (Again, you are 11. Focus on your studies and play on the playground with your friends before you start thinking of relationships.)

And that was the terrible first and only page of 'Dark-Hearted Warrior.'

Yeah edgy name I know. You can make fun of younger me for it. There's even a cover!


Cringe 😬

Glad my art style changed ^^

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