name || Copperflower
past names || Copper, Copperpaw
the name copperflower's really lovely! i love 'copper' especially, since it's a really unique suffix! however, i do have a question: why was she named copper?

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gender || Female 
okay!

clan || AirClan (mountain and pine forest territory)
airclan sounds like a really lovely fanclan!

rank || Warrior
previous ranks || Kittypet, Apprentice, Queen
interesting; she used to be a kittypet! i'm quite intrigued as to what her backstory is!

appearance || Bright, deep gingery-brown Somali she-cat. Brownish to russet-orange ombre thick, short fur. Black striped tail. Pale, dull green eyes. (Basically an ordinary red Somali cat)
she sounds very beautiful!

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personality || (As a kittypet) Outroverted, loud, clumsy and annoying, positive(As a Clan cat) Ambiverted, kind, helpful, occasionally clumsy and annoying, supportive, naïvei do like how she sort of had development from kittypet to clan cat! and it seems to have a good balance of flaws!

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family || Mother: Jessie - Red Somali she-cat with pale green eyes.

Kittypet)Father: Troy - Pale fawn tom with amber eyes.(Kittypet)Siblings: Sage - Fawn tom with amber eyes. (Older brother)
Francis - Red Somali tom with bright green eyes. (Younger brother)
Rudolph - Red Somali tom with pale green eyes. (Younger brother)
Lucinda - Fawn tabby she-cat with yellow eyes. (Younger sister, different litter)
April - Pale fawn she-cat with pale amber eyes. (Younger sister, different litter)
Hugh - Red Somali tom with hazel eyes. (Younger brother, different litter)
everything looks good here! copperflower seems genetically possible!

Mate: Beanclaw - Fawn tabby tom with hawk-like, yellow eyes.
(Former kittypet) Kits: Nutfoot - Fluffy, fawn-and-white tom with amber eyes. Hazelwhisker - Fawn tabby she-cat with bright yellow eyes. Lotso - Small, red Somali tom with pale green eyes. (Died at birth)poor lotso :(

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backstory || Copperflower was born as a kittypet in the Twolegplace, to Jessie and Troy. Her Twolegs sent away all of her siblings away to different households (she has about three other litters of siblings). Because of this, she was always lonely. She had a fairly happy life other than that, a bit boring, but easy. Then, Jessie fell sick. One day, her Twolegs took Jessie to the vet and she never came back (she got put to permanent sleep, I can't remember what it's called). Copper ran away and met Bean, a loner from pure-bred heritage.
pretty good backstory so far! i'm curious, did copper run away because she knew her mom was put into permanent sleep, or was it just because her mom was sick and hadn't returned? and if it was the permanent sleep one, how did she know?

They became good friends as Bean led Copper out of the Twolegplace. They ended up in Clan territory and were sadly chased from every place they settled in. Then, a group of cats called AirClan welcomed them in. Copperpaw and Beanpaw became great fighters, as if they had always practiced the techniques of the Clans.
did they have any struggles at all, or was everything flawless? i'd suggest adding a couple of parts were they struggled, like cats not accepting them because they're kittypets, somethings like that!

They got their Warrior names, Copperflower and Beanclaw, and soon had three kits. When one of them died, Copperflower wanted to name him after her lost mother. So she gave him a kittypet name and mourned him greatly. A good few seasons later, Copperflower died of greencough.
i actually quite like how copperflower died! i find it to be very unique! most ocs died from battles or just peacefully in their sleep. although, it must've been painful to die from greencough.

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final rating || 8.5/10 [no bonus]

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thank you for letting me rate copperflower! she's a very lovely oc! i think the main point i'd touch up on is the backstory; it's very good already, but i think with just a couple of tweaks you can make it more flawless!

thanks again!