We have yet another OC to rate! They are @lynxtail_807's OC! 

Let's see who they are! 

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Name: Renee Elise Seabury

I love her name! It is an amazing name that I haven't heard before! 

Nickname: Re Re, Munchkin (only her husband can call her Munchkin). 

I have a friend that I call a gnome, but only I can call him a gnome. 

Preferred name: Renee

Makes sense. I like being called by my first name as well. 

Reason for Name: Her name comes from an amazing Broadway actor Renee Elise Goldsberry and I thought 'Hey, that's an awesome name!' 

That sounds like a good reason for naming a character. 

Species: Human (I mainly use her for roleplays so sometimes she's not just human, or even not human at all.) 

Oh cool, she is your role play character? 

Gender: Female 

I think I have only gotten one or two male characters for this entire thing. 

Sexuality: A squiggly line. (Bisexual) 

I have a few bisexual friends. 

Appearance: She's pale, got a lot of chub, like a marshmallow? I dunno... Anyways, she also has beautiful shoulder length chocolate brown hair she wears in a ponytail. She also has reddish yellow eyes, like someone lit a fire and it just stayed there, glowing in her eyes, fueled with fire. 

+5 bonus points for the amazing use of the fire metaphor!  That one was really good. 

Causal Clothing: A baggy t-shirt that says 'May your coffee be stronger than your toddler.' 

+3 bonus points for making me chuckle. 

Formal Clothing: A beautiful lilac, dark purple and blue Victorian-style dress. 

That sounds beautiful. 

Sleep Clothing: A t-shirt and some underwear. 

Makes sense. 

Date Night Clothing: If a fancy restaurant, a velvet sweater and a black skirt with white flats and a gold necklace. 

+5 bonus points for adding something extra! That sounds really beautiful. 

Personality: Loud, energetic, outgoing, smart, sometimes sarcastic, she gets depressed often as she has been diagnosed with social anxiety and depression. There's a voice in her head that gets too loud. And when it does she locks herself in her room to engage in activities that involve a pocket knife... and blood... (I think you get the 1picture... do you? I think?) 

That is really sad, poor darling. 

Mother: Elaine was a beautiful woman, in both looks and personality. She was on the heavier side but had long curly hair that was a chestnut brown in colour. Her eyes were a greenish brown, just barely touching on hazel, Her skin was fair with the lightest dab of freckles. Her personality was that she was gentle, loving, motherly, but she wasn't afraid to tell someone what she thought of their opinion. She was easy to get worked up in a fizzy, her personality was almost like Mrs Potts from Beauty and the Beast. 

That description of her being Mrs Potts is something I haven't heard before. 

Father: Dean was a level headed man who firmly believes in punishing his child. He was a no nonsense kind of guy but he never beat his daughter often. Usually just gave her a few smacks on the wrist with a ruler to get his point across when she wouldn't listen. He never was truly angry. But you knew is you had angered him if he suddenly stopped talking to you. He had a body resembling Sebastian Stan but a little shorter. He was only 5'1" and had brown hair. 

Am I allowed to call him a gnome? Or no? 

Cousin: Samuel Seabury is a kind man, sweet and kinda sky, He's supportive of Renee and she's just as supportive right back. 

Cool, coolcoolcool. 

Husband: Roger Mulligan is an... acquired taste... he likes 'weird Korean boy bands' as his brother puts it and is all around a cinnamon roll who shall be protected. He's brown skinned and of Irish decent, he has black curly hair and brown eyes? I think? I can't remember and he's my best friend @Zanasmysenpai101 's character! 

It's cool that you roleplay with your friend. 

Children: Her son and daughter are about one or two years old. Their names are Olivia Mae Mulligan and Matthew Jay Mulligan. I can't give a very descriptive personality given it's not fully fleshed out. Olivia has brown skin and somewhat curly brown hair. Matthew has pale skin like his Momma and has red hair and blue/green eyes. 

They sound adorable. 

Likes: Her kids; chocolate; her cats, Cocoa, Marshmallow and Graham Cracker; her husband. 

I have a cat called Sweet-pea, but she is not sweet. (I made an Instagram for her check it out (Sweetpea_The_Floof)). 

Dislikes: Shopping for groceries alone, going into grocery stores, seeing her kids injured, the thought of death and leaving her kids motherless. 

I feel so sorry for her. 

Fears: Bullets, guns in general. 

The fear of guns is also just common sense. 

Pets: Her cats. Cocoa- An all brown she-cat with darker tabby stripes. Marshmallow- A white tomcat with gold patches. Graham Cracker- An all gold she-cat. 

Aw! They sound adorable! 

Other: Her parents were killed in a shooting in a grocery store when she was four. She was with them and it traumatized her. Mention it and she is dragged into a panic attack. 

I feel so sorry for her! 

 She is from my original world through she is a Hamilton OC. 

I feel like everyone except for me has seen Hamilton. 

She is in the one shot book My Cowboy's Running from Himself. 

I'll check her out!

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So I have decided your amount of points! 93/100! I think that Renee is an amazing character, but just needs a few more tweaks to be perfect! I just wished you added a backstory for her, I really want to see how she got where she is. 

And your points with Bonus Points 106/100! 

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See you all later! 

Dawnshade49. 

Nora Nellson.