Okay, so today we will be doing @SarcasticSpaceBeing 's OC, Daen Fortuna. Let's start!

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Name: Daen Fortuna 

Really awesome sounding name! 

Reason for Name: That's just what his parent decided to call him. 

Yeah, I think that's the reason for most peoples names. 

Nickname: None, although Tequia calls him by just his last name, Fortuna, which he finds annoying but doesn't care enough to tell her to stop. 

Admit it Daen you like it when Tequia calls you Fortuna. 

Age: 200 years. His species ages slowly, so about 20 years in terms of ageing.

He is an old boi, but if he was my friend I will still mother him. I do that to all my friends. 

Gender: Male. 

I think he is only the second male I've gotten so far. 

Sexuality: As straight as an A-to-B interstellar hop (Very straight). 

+5 bonus points for the cute joke. 

Species: Preternove C Humanoid (Random fictional planet in the Andromeda Galaxy). 

Awesome sounding species name! 

Job: Culls interplanetary epidemics for the Galactic Preservation Committee using genetically engineered viruses. 

Amazing sounding job! I want to learn more about it. 

Looks: Tall (around 6 feet/2 metres), wavy blond hair (jawline length), animated and sharp hand movements when talking but more graceful when operating a spaceship, lean build, very pale because his planet is so far from the sun, red irises, a friendly and jauntily manic grin that looks like he's about to go for your neck- although he isn't, usually. 

I talk with my hands a lot as well. 

Personality: Relaxed in the worst situations, casual, full of quips, savvy, thrill seeker, opportunist, fun to be around (by degrees depending on your idea of fun), full of energy and largely immune to alcohol and most diseases. 

He sounds like he would be fun to be around. In my mind, I've already headcannoned him as sassy, sarcastic and passive-aggressive. 

Clothing: Purplish lilac jacket, green pants and boots, a random scarf that he wears loosely wrapped at all time, shades to blend in on planets where the predominant life form doesn't have red eyes. 

Amazing sounding outfit! 

Family: Parents who don't keep in touch with him; when they do talk they tend to say that they don't like his attitude. 

There is always a sad bit in the OC's life. 

Friends: Lots and lots of randomers he has met in spaceports and bars. Also Tequia Raydr, but she is more of an ally and a business partner who does missions with him. 

Tequia and Daen sound like they would be close friends. 

Enemies: None he can name, he tries not to make them and usually doesn't. 

Well, that's good. 

Fighting Style: Very good shot with a laser, tends to just stand back and shoot or insults the person until they back off. 

I'm guessing it's a laser gun? 

Home Location: His ship (Lime green and black). 

So he's almost always on the move? 

Transportation: Also his ship. An economy-sized Starcruiser 4000 E-Series. (I have no idea why I'm these details XD) 

The more details, the better! 

Extra Details: He carries a black satchel with spaceship tools and virus test tubes in it. And his catchphrases are "Ah," and "Hi".

Thanks for the extra details! 

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So after thinking about your score, I have come to a solution! Your score is: 

85/100 WITHOUT your bonus points. 

And 92/100 WITH your bonus points. Five from the joke and two from the interesting alien species and job. 

To get the 100/100 you need to just fill out a few more details, make your character more 3D. Other than that Daen sounds amazing. 

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See ya! 

Dawnshade49