User: Tangerbree-sunrise

Name: Monique

Nice name, never seen it used before! Nothing wrong here.

- 9.4/10

Personality: pretty serious and protective yet had a very kind and motherly side especially with her daughter

Ooh, nice and straight forward. Oddly enough, I think that's all I needed to hear.

- 8.5/10

 Backstory: born to Vibri/Bree nightbeam the hedgehog and Jackson the hedgehog she lived a very nice and quiet life well not when eggman isn't attacking. Eventually at around the age of four she got a little brother named cinder. The two are extremely close and she kept an eye on her little brother when her parents are out of town. As she grew older she learned she had time and gravity powers and used them for good and decided to become a time traveling detective by using her abilities to open holes through time to see what happened like an oracle in a way. Eventually she found the love of her life and had a kid but the father somehow died before the kid was born leaving her to raise her daughter as a single parent with help from her family as well....

Hmm, okay, okay. 

I have a few questions about this: How exactly did she discover her powers? How was she able to train them all by herself? How'd she meet the Love of her Life? How did she feel after her love died?

Quite a few un-answered plot points, but aside from that it's quite good! I'm glad you didn't go down the cliche of "She met Sonic and they went on adventures and fell in love-," so that's a big plus!

- 8.7/10

Appearance:

I LOVE her colouration! The different greens plus blue eyes go really well together! 

Also, AAAH IT'S NOT A PURPLE HEDGEHOG IN A DRESS YASS- And the outfit works really well with the detective motif! 

- 9.1/10

TOTAL SCORE

Name - 9.4/10

Personality - 8.5/10

Backstory - 8.7/10

Appearance - 9.1/10

DECIDED SCORE

90.1/10

Final Sentence:

Detective girls are cool af