Im doin this to see how bad little me was at making OCs

Lol don't we all love our past selves? 

Name: Cliffbane

Very interesting name. 

Reason: Cliffbane is from a fanclan I've made called CavernClan. Every cat in there has a rock/cave related prefix. Suffix? I can't remember. My apologies. 

Fair enough!

Past names: Cliffkit, Cliffpaw

Yup. 

Age: 9 moons

Don't you think that's a little bit young to have gone through two different apprenticeships and been made a warrior? 

Gender: female

Ok. 

Sexuality: Demisexual

Yes underused!

Clan: CavernClan

Yup. 

Appearance: her fur was long. Mainly snow white with the exception of her stomach and tail tip, which are a light grey. Her eyes are icy blue. Her nose is pink and her paw pads are black

That's an interesting appearance! I've never seen an OC with an underbelly that's darker than their normal fur colour. Also I love the black paw pads because tiny polar bears. Also, scars? Body type? 

Personality: oof I can barely remember. Uh, I think she was kind and loving to most people. A bit naïve? Flirty. She hates swearing. Loves her family and Clan. 

Fair enough. I'd say that this is fairly overused, other than the flirty part. 

Backstory: I never made one. I'm gonna (bleep) one right now. She was born at a very young age- Her first goal was to be a medicine cat, but then she saw how much you had to memorize and said "adios." 

Great ten second backstory we have here. 

Family: Graypetal (sister), Boulderface (brother)

I love these names but descriptions? Ages? Ranks? Mother? Father? Other family? 

Rank: warrior

Like I said before, I think she's a bit too young to be a warrior just yet, because you have to be an apprentice for at least six moons to about a year to become a warrior, and she was a medicine cat apprentice before that too. 

Past ranks: kit, medicine cat apprentice, apprentice

Yup. 

Time period: before Firestar died. That's all I know I haven't read the books in like a year

That's OK! At least I can get a fairly good idea of the events that've already happened by then. Just another question, is this FanClan in the same universe as the canon Clans, or not? 

Residence: I don't quite know what that means? Sorry- 

I think I already told you in a comment, but the residence is where they live. I'm going to assume for the sake of this that she lives in the CavernClan territory?

Originality: 4/5

Creativity: 5/5

Well Thought-out: 3/5

Realistic: 2/5

Detail: 1/5

Development: 1/5

Fits in the Universe: 4/5

Makes Sense Overall: 4/5

Overall Score: 24/40

Feedback:

This is pretty good considering she's an old OC! There's not much to add really, just maybe a bit more detail? 

Other than that, thank you for letting me rate your OC (even if she is old XD), @CloudedComet !