Lil by DragonIcicleCrystal
I want to know what you think of Lil's character.
Name: Lil
Age: 14
Gender: female
Appearance: A lily pad with a light blue bow. She has arms and legs. Only has a right eye. Her split personality is darker and has a red bow.
I see nothing wrong so far. Just wondering how arms fit on a lily pad and where.
Personality: Happy and cheerful. Her split personality is sassy, mean, and will probably try to kill someone. Interesting.
Strengths: Mostly immune to fire and can breathe underwater longer. Her split personality has fire powers. I suppose the fire powers help the fire immunity make sense. Very odd powers to see with a plant.
Weaknesses: Poison will instantly kill her Even slow acting poison? and if you give her too much sugar she will die. She doesn't know that much about the world, math, reading, and basically everything. I feel like this helps balance out her powers.
Likes: Sweets/candy, bakery goods, cute things, tea, fun things, and magic.
Dislikes: When people are mean to her, her pills Why does she take pills?, and rules.
Fears: Her split personality, darkness, poison, and taint(don't ask what that is).
Relationships: She's not in love with anyone(yet). Her best friends are Byte and Mini. She is mostly friends with everyone. Seems impossible, but I'll take your word for it.
Backstory:She lived a fairly normal life in Oc town. Till she burned down her school and then her house when she was 5. Her family and police decided to put her in a metal box forever. Shame on them. Terrible choice of containment for someone with fire powers. Mostly 8 years pasted *passed and Artbook Who's this? found her. How did a metal box manage to contain her alive for that long? Either she runs out of air at some point or she should be able to melt her way out. Byte then decided to be her babysitter.
Other: She is an object Oc, not to be confused with a object head Oc. In the Objectshow fandom(I don't know if you don't know Objectshows) I don't.. She needs pills to make sure she doesn't turn into her split personality. My question has been answered. She is Pansexual.
Overall it's an alright OC. Good physical design, strengths and weaknesses seems fairly balanced. Most of the problems are with the backstory, which has a lot of holes and seems rushed.
6/12
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