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BATCH 2

JUDGE: _Ash_es

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KAYLA ROSE by Abigailk8

Originality: 3/5

Creativity: 7/10

Hook: 10/15

Catchiness: 6/10

Mystery meter: 3/5

Relativity to the novel: 4/5

Total: 33/50

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CATARACT OF DELUSION by new_erasktaylor

Originality: 4/5

Creativity: 7/10

Hook: 12/15

Catchiness: 7/10

Mystery meter: 4/5

Relatively to the novel: 5/5

Total: 39/50

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FATES CONVERGED: a witch's vow by EnigmaEpic

Originality: 4/5

Creativity: 6/10

Hook: 11/15

Catchiness: 7/10

Mystery meter: 4/5

Relatively to the novel: 5/5

Total: 37/50

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THE GATHERING DARK by Aravis-Brightspell

Originality: 4/5

Creativity: 8/10

Hook: 13/15

Catchiness: 8/10

Mystery meter: 5/5

Relatively to the novel: 5/5

Total: 43/50

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DATING THE ICE PRINCE by IkomaSensei

Originality: 4/5

Creativity 7/10

Hook: 10/15

Catchiness: 7/10

Mystery meter: 3/5

Relativity to the book: 4/5

Total: 35/50

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BATCH 1

Judge: @ssears90

As Real as You and Me by @Kmytho

Originality 5/5

Creativity 10/10

Hook 15/15

Catchiness 9/10

Mystery Meter 4/5

Relativity to the Novel/Book 5/5

Total 48/50

Review: This is a cute blurb. I love how you described what love is. There are a few grammatical errors such as using two ellipses (..) when it should be three (...) I was also a tad bit confused in the last paragraph. I was not sure who 'Kwan' is because they had not been previously mentioned. Also, the very last sentence- I think you can take out the word "that" so it reads "the last thing Taeyeon knew, she was on her knees proposing to Baekyun."

Yadavi: The Name Of Yearning by @dwarkaratna

Originality 5/5

Creativity 10/10

Hook 12/15

Catchiness 8/10

Mystery Meter 5/5

Relativity to the Novel/Book 5/5

Total 45/50

Review: The blurb was very descriptive with a lot of background information, only presenting a small question at the end. I think the blurb could be shorted and focus on raising more questions rather than giving away too much detail. 

The following participants never completed payments and never responded to me so I did not judge their stories:

Stunned by @Itim_na_pluma 

Mr. Weirdo by @avniy1312 

Trapped by @Violetrose3127