So I sent my agent Gang Related (chapters of 1 – 29) of Pigeons & Planes and while he liked the premise he wasn't wowed by the overall story and believes it needs work. This means I am at a point of needing to rewrite and configure the story and rearrange. His notes he gave me made sense and I'm not sure if I'll update the version on here again, this will take time. For now I don't know, I think I will just write the remaining two parts I have left and put the story back together and go from there. More soon on this.