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A Surprise for her

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Continution from previous part

After completion of mehendi function that day night. In raavi's room,raavi's phone vibrated raavi excitedly opened it as she is expecting a goodnight msg from shiva and there is a msg asking her to meet  in garden unknown to anyone. She leaves to garden without saying to anyone

In garden,

Raavi : tum mujhe yaha kyun bulaya vo bhi iss wakt?? ( confused )

The man whose back is facing raavi turned around after lisenting raavi's voice

That man : Raavi vo kaise bataau mujhe samaj mein nhi aa raha hai i.... i.... i love u raavi mai bahut saare ladkiyon se flirt kiya par baat jab teri aati to vo alag hai. Tum ek acchi dost ho mere, mujhe acchi tarah se samajti ho agar asi dost life partner bane to life aur bhi khubsurat hoti hai do you have same feelings about me??

That man said in one go and here raavi is really shocked.who she treated as a good friend is proposing her while she was in love with her boothnath

Raavi : dekho suraj i really respect ur feelings but i don't feel like that as u feel towards me i love u as my friend i don't have any feelings morethan friendship towards u ( trying to make him understand )

Suraj : to bhi no problem raavi agar abhi feelings nhi hai to baad me start hojaayenge lets try raavi

Raavi : suraj samajhne ki koshish karo i have another man in my life mai kisi aur se pyaar karthi hun vo bhi behad pyaar plzz try to understand suraj

( after listening this suraj is shuttered he unable to form words and coming to raavi she is very scared to loose a good friend )

(Note to readers : as i said before suraj is a flirty boy but not a bad boy. He is a good friend to raavi and he will be don't take him as negative )

Suraj : kon hai vo??( in a low voice bearly audible )

Raavi : mai abhi tak usko nhi bataya jaldi hi bataadungi

Suraj : kya vo shiva hai ( in a broken voice )

Raavi : tujhe kaise pata (shocked )

Suraj : tum donon ko dekhe hi lagta hai par kahi na kahi chota hope tha par....... ( taking a pause ) koi baat nhi..... aapki jodi bilkul first class hai ( he is trying to hide his sad expression ) ok i will take a leave bahut raat hogayi hai good night raavi... ( he turns to leave )

Raavi : suraj... ( he turns around) iski vajah se humaari dosti mai kuch nhi badlega na i don't want to loose a good friend like u ( with a hope in her eyes )

Suraj : humari dosti vahi rahega raavi par mujhe thoda time do i will be alright bus thoda waqt ( raavi assures him through eyes by blinking and they leaves to their rooms )

This whole conversation is heard by someone else

Raavi is in her room she is very guilty fir hurting suraj though it is unknowingly.then there is another msg on her phone she opened and that is from shiva good night chipkali ❤mere sapne dekhna 🥰 after seeing his msg a smile formed on her lips and she slept peacefully

And in shiva's room

Shiva places his phone aside after sending msg to raavi and lays on bed beside dev

Dev : to kya socha tune kaise raavi ko impress karega

Shiva : mujhe usse impress karne ki jaroorat nhi hai bas mujhe pareshan karne keliye kar rahi hai

Dev : accha yeh baat tujhe kaise pata

Shiva : bas uske aankhon mein dekhe hi pata chal jaata hai

Dev : par vo tujhe itna pareshan kyun kar rahi hai

Shiva : vo chahti hai ki mai uskeliye kuch special karun isiliye vo mere jawab nhi de rahi hai

Dev : to kya special kar raha hai tu

Shiva : kal pata chal jaayega tujhe

Dev : aisa kya karne waala hai tu

Shiva : dhamaka!! Bas ek help karde kal mai uss chipkali ko puri tarh se ignore karunga agar vo tere paas aakar mere baare mein kuch pucha to tu bhi kuch na kuch keh de thike

Dev : par ignore kyun kar na

Shiva : bas vo chipkali hi mujhe pareshan karegi kya mai bhi kuch kam hai kya mujhe bhi thoda pareshan karne ka hak hai na

Dev : hey bagwaan ye kya lovestory ree 🤦‍♂️ek dusre ko pareshan karne mai hi thuli hua hai ye log... Ek baat bata tu sach mein raavi se pyaar karta hai

Shiva : apni jaan se bhi zyaada tujhe koi shak hai kya

Dev : nhi mujhe koi shak nhi hai tu hi sambhaal teri love story ko chal so jaa kal bahut saare arrangements karni hai sangeet aur bachelor's party ek hi din mein hai chal jaldi so jaa

Then they sleeps. Next day some of the guests are coming to the marriage uss mein jeevika bhi hoti hai as they lives in somnath pandyas also knows them. Aur kuch shiva ki colics bhi hote hai ussmein shreya bhi hoti hai jo shopping maal mein shiva se mili thi na vo. Aapko lagraha hoga shreya ko shiva ne kyun bulaya hai par shreya ko shiva ne nhi bulaya shiva ko shreya mein zara si bhi interest nhi hai vo kya hai na shreya dev ka bhi dost hai so dev ne bulaliya par shreya ka shiva pe crush ke baare mai  dev ko nhi pata agar pata hota to nhi bulata obviously

Shiva is in reception receiving all the guests then there is sound from the entrance door "hi shiva " and she comes and hugs shiva. Shiva immediately breaks the hug and says

Shiva : hi shreya kaise ho tum

Shreya : mai bilkul thik hun tum bataao tum kaise ho ( by putting her hands arounds his shoulder bilkul chimpku types hai yaar )

Shiva : mai bhi thik hun ( feelings uncomfortable he removes his hand from her grip )

Sherya : shiva hum iss shaadi mai bahut masti karenge thike

Shiva : haan pehle fresh ho jaao uss taraf hai tera room

Shreya : ok shiva ( leaves from there and our shiva breathes in relief )

This whole scene was seen by raavi,rishitha qnd jeevika

Rishitha : dekha tune... Tere impress ke khel mein vo ladki shiva ko patha na le

Raavi leaves to her room in anger and here jeevika asks rishitha about what happened and rishitha tells her everything

Jeevika : bilkul dobi hai yaar ye raavi 🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️

Rishitha : koi baat nhi ab vo khud hi kehdegi uss shreya ki wajah se ( they both laughs and leaves to their rooms

Prafulla calls raavi to her room saying that there is something important to talk to her

In prafulla's room

Prafulla : ye kya kiya tune raavi suraj ka proposal kyun accept nhi kiya?

Raavi : ye aapko kaise pata hai (shocked )

Prafulla : kal raat mai aap dono ke baat sun liya

Raavi : to ye bhi sunliya hoga na kyun mana kiya

Prafulla : haan par koi aur ladka keliye itna accha rishta chod dega tu itna bada bussiness man aur accha parivaar hai ek aur baar sochle raavi

Raavi : mai isiliye usko reject kiya kyunki mai kisi aur se pyaar karta hun aur vo ladka aapko bhi pata hai bas mujh par vishwas rakho maasi maa mujhe well settled bussiness man nhi chahiye mai jisse pyaar karti hun bas vo chahiye mujhe bas mujh par bharosa rakho plzz

Prafulla first afraid of her daughter's future she thought if her daughter spoil her life in anyother man fake love but at the time when raavi said about her love prafulla saw sincereity in raavi's eyes so she can't deny her daughter's request

Prafulla : thike par agar kuch ulta seedha hogaya to dil chota mat karna beta thike ( says by keeping her hand on raavi's head )

Rwavi : thankyou maasi maa ( happily hugs her ) aap bilkul tension mat lo vo bhi mujhse bahut pyaar karta hai ( prafulla is happy to see her daughter happy and she sent silent prayers for raavi's wishes and happiness )

Their whole conversation is heard by someone else. In the whole day shiva is  successful in ignoring raavi whenever she comes to talk to him he leaves like he had not noticed her he smiles when he sees a cute angry pout on her face

And the scene changes to direct bachelor's party after sangeet. Everyone performed and enjoyed very well in sangeet all the elders left after sangeet leaving younsters to enjoy the bachelor's party

In party all are swaying to music on dancefloor even on the dance floor also shiva is ignoring raavi being irritated by his behaviour she goes and sits in a sofa seeing her rishitha and jeevika also follows her and sits with her they observes others dancing. And on the dance floor shreya is always touching shiva intentionally and trying to come close but shiva is feeling very uncomfortable due to her touchings and finally he drags her to backside and here our raavi's expression changed into ' o ' expression seeing her expression rishitha and jeevika decided to tease her

Rishitha : aur khel impress impress ka khel

Jeevika : waise maana padega shreya bahut hot hai na rishitha

Rishitha : ab kya kare raavi lagta hai ladka haath se nikal gaya

Enough of their talks raavi goes where shiva took shreya after raavi leaves rishitha and jeevika burst out laughing

At backside

Shiva : shreya ye tum kya kar rahi ho dance floor pe ( trying control his anger )

Shreya : kya  kar rahi hun matlab dance kar rahi hun shiva ( trying to put her hands around his next but shiva quickly slightly pushes her hands )

Shiva : stay away shreya ek baar mein baat samaj mein nhi aata kya

Shreya : what is ur problem shiva? Ladko marte hai mere peeche aur mai tujh mein interested hun to tujhe kya problem hai

Shiva : because i am uncomfortable with u and i love someone else damn it ( shouting )

Shreya : don't be foolish shiva tujhe mere jaise hot ladki kabhi nhi milegi ( trying to come close )

Shiva : don't try to come close shreya agar tere paas koi ladka tere acceptance ke bina tere paas aaye to tu kya karegi jorse thapad maregi na par mere family ne mujhe tameez sikhaye hai isiliye mai auraton pe haath nhi utata hun matlab samjh rahi ho na tum aur ek aur baat baar baar mere paas mat aayaa kar agar mein jisse pyaar karta hun vo ladki dekhi to usse bahut hurt hogi jo mai bilkul bhi nhi chahta hun ye baat mai tujhe sabke samne bhi kehsakti hun par sabke samne tere izzat uchaaldena mujhe pasand nhi hai samjhi

Shreya realises her mistake and feels guilty

Shreya : sorry shiva mujhe laga tere life main koi nhi hai isiliye mai..... Anyways agar tu chahe to tu jis ladki se pyaar karti ho usse bhi mai maafi mang lungi

Shiva : koi baath nhi aur usse maafi mangne ki jaroorat nhi hai vo mujhe galat nhi samjhegi

Shreya : ok as ur wish ( and turns to leave but turns back again ) shiva ab hum friends to rahenge na

Shiva smiles and forwards his hand : friends

(shreya and shiva shakes hands and shiva and shreya leaves from there )

Raavi listened their whole conversation from behind the wall and had tears in her eyes and felt proud of shiva and feels lucky to be loved by shiva

Raavi came back to her sit rishitha and jeevika are talking to eachother but raavi is lost in shiva's words "agar jisse mai pyaar karta hun vo ladki dekhi to vo hurt hogi jo mai bilkul bhi nhi chahta hun"

Shiva also observes raavi's behaviour he thought she would be sad because he ignored her whole day but to opposite from his thought she is very happy she is smiling like never before what happened to her?

After completion of party all the members goes to their rooms and raavi phone vibrates she opens and sees that it is from shiva "meet me down at 10:00 pm  and don't tell to anyone " then raavi becomes more happy and gets ready to meet shiva

In shiva's room he is getting ready to go

Dev : kaha jaa raha hai tu

Shiva : raavi ko bike ride par lekar jaa raha hun usse bike rides bahut pasand hai na

Dev : hmm impressive ( patting his shoulder )

Shiva : abhi picture baaki hai mere dost

Dev : kya hai mujhe bhi bata na

Shiva : baad me batata hun bye bye mujhe late ho raha hai ( saying this he runs out of his room)

At down he is waiting for raavi on bike and then raavi comes tiptoeing seeing her surroundings that no one is seeing her soon she reaches his bike

Raavi : kya hai iss waqt kyun bulaya

Shiva : pehle bike pe baith aur chal mere saath

Raavi : par kaha

Shiva : bharosa hai na mujhpe?

Then they had a eye lock.shiva found his answer in her eyes without words shiva broke the eye lock

Shiva : chal jaldi baith

Raavi sits and shiva drove off the bike after some time they reached a hill and shiva hold raavi's hand started climb the hill.

Raavi : shiva hum yaha hyun aaye hai? Yaha kitna andhera hai chalna wapas chalte hai

Shiva : are chup chap mere saath kitna bolti hai tu ( raavi pouted at him)

Soon they reached the top. Raavi is just mesmerized by the view

Raavi : woowww ye kitna sundar hai shiva ( very excited)

Shiva : aur bhi baaki hai meri chipkali ( wishpered in her ears from behind she is stunned due to his sudden warmth near her ear )

He wistles then crackers come from down and bursts in air and from a beautiful view

Raavi is just lost in the view in front of her eyes she is unable to form words tears are coming her eyes unknowingly after few minutes shiva turns her towards himself and raised his eyebrows as asking to say something she is about to say something but interrepted by a phone call it is rishitha she picked it up

Rishitha : raavi kaha hai tu teri maasi puch rahi thi tere bare mein jaldi aa

Raavi : thike aa rahi hun

She cuts the call and sees at shiva

Raavi : shiva jaana hai maasi dundh rahi hai mujhe

Shiva nods and they goes towards their bike.  the ride is silent

Raavi's pov starts

Wowww shiva kitna accha surprise diya tha aaj mujhe usse pyaar tho kabka ho chuka hai par aaj uspar respect bhi bad gaya mujhe impress karne mein uska efforts, shreya ko samjhane ka tarika,mere liye usska pyaar. Rishitha aur jeevika sahi keh rahe hai sach mein mai dobi hun yeh impress impress ki khel mein kitna time waste kardiya maine.Jab vo hill par vo crackers aaya na man kar raha hai usse jor se gale lagaake chillake kahu ki I LOVE U SHIVA mai kehne wali thi par rishitha ki phone aagaya tho hum waapas jaarahe hai sach kahu tho mere liye vo itna kuch kiya mai ek simple i love u kahu nhi chalega na mai bhi uske liye mast surprise plan karungi fir propose karungi haa ye sahi rahegi

Raavi's pov ends

Soon they reached hotel when raavi get down from the bike shiva hold her hand

Shiva : tho ab batade tere jawab kya hai

Raavi chuckled at shiva's restlessness

Raavi : kal batadun?

Shiva nodded his head and goes to park his bike and raavi left to her room

On way to his room shiva heard conversation between dhara and gautam

Dhara : pata hai gombi kal raat suraj ne raavi ko propose kiya tha ( while listening this shiva made his hand into fist ) par raavi ne mana kardiya kyunki vo kisi aur se pyaar karthi hai ( listening this shiva's anger flew away and a smile came on his face )

Gautam : aur yeh baat tujhe kaise pata

Dhara : aaj maami aur raavi ki baat sunliya maine isiliye pata chala mujhe. Tujhe kuch pata hai kya raavi kisse pyaar karthi hai?

Gautam : mujhe kuch nhi pata hai jab sahi waqt aayegi raavi khud bataadegi bahut samajdaar hai vo thike chal ab so ja mujhe neend aa rahi hai

Saying this they slept and shiva goes his room

In raavi's room

Rishitha is already slept and raavi is thinking how to surprise shiva and a idea pop in her mind and smiles like never before and a msg comes to her from shiva she opens it is good night meri chipkali❤ unlike the last two days now she replied to his good night msg good night boothnath😊 and she sleeps peacefully

In shiva's room dev is fast asleep,after receiving a good night msg from his chipkali he is so happy he is eagerly waiting for tomorrow although he knows her answer but he want to listen those words from her he slept peacefully thinking about tomorrow

Next day morning all are doing their breakfast at the dinning table today there is no any function tomorrow is the wedding. today everyone decided to check their last minute arrangements for wedding.while doing breakfast shiva receives a message from raavi asking him to meet her on terrace after 2 hours. And shiva nods his head while looking at her who sat opposite to him. After finishing their breakfast all starts to
leave but stopped because there is a call on raavi's phone after cutting the call what she said shocked everyone

Raavi : mujhe wapas somnath jaana hai abhi

Soo that's all for today

The longest chapter since i have started this story

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