The first lines were awesome! You were killing it! Seriously!

Hello, redrose_lyricist 

Great book!! Honestly, I'm not much of a poem guy, but I really think this book is great. Each line has deep meaning and you are conveying what readers need to know perfectly. The first part was great and you also managed to rhyme half the lines! It was pretty cool, like when you said, 

'Haven't felt this way for so long 

Praying this time I won't get it wrong'

It made sense, and sounded interesting! 

I don't really think I can go into every single song lyric of yours because you've written so many. But I'll try to review your book generally. It was great and I think you have a great talent for songwriting and you should probably start making some music videos and stuff. Be the next Olivia Rodrigo:) Write more beautiful songs and I'm sure they'll be great. I know this probably ain't much, but it's just an overall review of your whole book and what a normal reader like me feels reading your book:)

Awesome regards!!!

Kavin 😋