Good day to you, Orizone!!

I just read your book, Lucid!

It was really good! I like the part where you make it like Shakespeare and instead of chapters, marked different parts of the story as Act 1, Act 2, etc. The felt part was good, with your main character, Xyler, being a Harvard Graduate with a Software Engineering Degree. You described what he did and what he designed and created. Some parts had grammatical errors which you can watch out for:) Oh yeah, and I really liked the part when you wrote Xyler repeating lines in bed. It made me wonder what was going on in Xyler's mind. Good job on that!

And it freaked me out when the princess leaned toward and screamed in Xyler's ear. Why did that happen? But other than that the story seemed to be going in flow and I seemed to understand what was going on. But Act 4 was pretty cool, to be honest. When Xyler drank wine, he turned into a dragon. Pretty crazy, but cool, for a dream. So to me, the motive of the whole story was what happened in a dream and then remained the same in real life. The plot, theme, and description were okay, and overall what you have done is superb. Keep writing!! :)

Warm Regards, 

Kavin 🤩