Alright so this is 3 of my original characters.
[from left to right]
Yuto, Ryo, and Eita.
These three are from my Naruto fanfic, Ryo: Naruto's Older brother.

I think the colored pencil killed it. In my defense I own no good coloring materials and it didn't look right as a contour. Also I did this at 12 a.m my time so I was kinda rushing.

Anyways... How does it look?