Before I begin the interview, I want everyone to know I'm not a bully and that anything I criticize is not to offend or hurt the author. We are only trying to help. I hope you enjoy and learn from this review and please remember you asked us to do this.

I Don't Know Why I'm Crazy... But i seem to know everything by the_new_author2000

Reviewed by Crowillow

First Impressions

Covers are important! Covers are meant to be like a beautiful predator trying to trap their prey! ^_^' Your cover in blunt words is boring, blurry, and rather stretched. I think you should try and find a cover shop or maybe remake your cover. It's up to you, writer.

Titles are important too and having a good one to capture a reader's attention can be hard. This being said, your title is entirely too long. I would suggest maybe shortening it to something smaller? Also, your title does give a bit of your story away as well.

Descriptions are the bane of every writer's existence. We need them to tell a miniature version of our story without giving our actual story away. Your description is lacking while at the same giving majority of your plot away. I would also suggest maybe working a bit on the grammar in it too.

Your Story's Plot and Structure

The plot of your story confused me rather hard in certain places. I feel your chapters were rushed and extremely short. You kept changing the scenery a lot too that at one point it caused my head to spin for a moment. Arime seems interesting because we hardly ever see male OC's.

You do not give enough description of anything at all. The surrounding descriptions of the scenery are rather bland and I hardly see any descriptions of people or emotions. These are key components as they allow the reader to connect with the story. Examples I would use-

Shikamaru's hazel eyes turned sharp like a hawk hunting for its next meal.

"What do you know about pain and suffering, Arime!" bellowed Naruto as his left hand tightly clutched his shirt right above his heart. "You'll never understand or fathom what loneliness, what hate, what despair can feel like to a child, too someone barely shown any kindness!" he raged azure-blue eyes glinting like the typhoon storms Fire country was known for in the summer.

Kakashi hadn't stepped one foot inside his house since the day he found the body of his father. The grass was of a dying yellow and of straw-like feeling while his mother's garden had become a forest of its own.

Final verdict on your story

While your story is not something I would read as I rarely read male oc stories, I can tell once you spruce it up even more readers will flock to it in no time!

Cheers mate!

-Crow