Before I begin the interview, I want everyone to know I'm not a bully and that anything I criticize is not to offend or hurt the author. We are only trying to help. I hope you enjoy and learn from this review and please remember you asked us to do this.

Howl of Konoha By ? Strawberry-lover

Reviewed by Crowillow

First Impressions

The cover of your book is blurry and stretched but overall a decent cover to use. The coloring is pretty and does pop to the eye so that is a good thing for future readers who come across your story. The lettering of the title, however, is a little too dark so it could be a challenge for others to see it.

The title of your book is interesting and a little different from things I've seen before but not that different, unfortunately.

I feel as if your description is lacking in several areas with both grammar and the way it gives a lot of the plot itself away. I read half the story in the description and it was sad because I felt it was a spoiler to the rest of the story.

Your Story's Plot and Structure

The plot is rushed in a lot of areas and the chapters seemed really short as well. The story seems interesting and I can see you are trying to go somewhere with it. Line breaks are key things and I had trouble finding them. Descriptions are important and I really did not see much of in what I've read. Examples would be-

The wolves howled to the full moon to try and express the pain of losing their packmates in an unfair and unjust way.

Final verdict on your story

I can see a lot of potential for the story, though it is not one I would read as I don't read these type of stories I know they are popular.

Cheers mate!

-Crow