Before I begin the interview, I want everyone to know I'm not a bully and that anything I criticize is not to offend or hurt the author. We are only trying to help. I hope you enjoy and learn from this review and please remember you asked us to do this.

Ecstasy By -shisui

Reviewed by Crowillow

First Impressions

The cover of your book is alright if a little bland in my opinion. It also is a tad stretched and the title is blurred out as well.

The title of your book is interesting and kinda naughty too. (giggles with a blush.) It also captures the eye so that's great and important to do.

I feel as if your description is a captivating and I do like the quote you used. The grammar for the description was fairly decent and I hardly saw any flaws with it.

Your Story's Plot and Structure

The plot is slightly different from what I've come across but not too different at the same time.

I think some of your plot was rushed and not given enough time to develop before you would switch it over to another scene and plot. The chapters were written long, nice but the grammar could use a little bit more work as well and the descriptions by you were a little off but not by too much.

Line-breaks are key things for stories to established when you've changed the scene and tone of the setting, I found none of these within the story.

Final verdict on your story

I can tell your story will get plenty of reads, good luck!

Cheers mate!

-Crow