Before I begin the interview, I want everyone to know I'm not a bully and that anything I criticize is not to offend or hurt the author. We are only trying to help. I hope you enjoy and learn from this review and please remember you asked us to do this.

Another Uzumaki?!: Naruto's Sister? By DreamsDoComeTrue

Reviewed by Crowillow

First Impressions

The cover of your book is alright if a little bland in my opinion. It will do and does have a little pop but not that much. The title is clear to see.

The title of your book is alright I guess but it didn't capture my attention either as I've seen multiple versions of it.

I feel as if your description is great though a little lacking too as it gave bits and pieces of the plot from your story away. The grammar is perfect and I could not find much wrong with it.

Your Story's Plot and Structure

The plot is interesting as it sings a completely different tune compared to the other fanfics of its type.

I think some of your plot was rushed and a little bit confusing at times. The chapters were written long, nice but the grammar could use a little bit more work as well. Descriptions by you were a little off but not by too much.

Line-breaks need to be used a little better but what you did use worked well.

Final verdict on your story

I hope you update soon because I'm waiting to read it. ^_^

Cheers mate!

-Crow