Okay first of all,is anyone having troubles with putting videos in a chapter they write?

No?

Just me then.

Secondly,I'm way better in case some of you were worried :-)

It's just time the pressure is way too big and you need to blow off some steam.

Thirdly,I'm also going to do a somewhat self promo because honestly I have been working my arse off these couple of days.

I made the horrible mistake to publish a new story.

And I also make the horrible mistake to decide to publish one more,a week ahead of schedule.

Yeah yeah feel free to face palm.

Anywho!You should totally check these new ones out(though only one has been published)because I really like the idea of where they are going.

The first story is called Trade Mistakes-as I've mentioned-and the other goes by Writers of Sins(and will probably be published within this week).

And now back to the Writer's project.Due to the lack of readers' participation I have already taken under my wings two stories.

(And I'm going for a third)

Both of these aren't finished yet but I figured it would be better to do the review now(so if you decide to read them you can catch up soon).

First story is called Confessions by GleeksOnCrack

It's the fourth Faberry fic I am reading and it's truly great.There is your normal drama,some exploring of Quinn's dad-who is a son of a bitch btw-and her view on Rachel is very interesting.

Quinn is also part of something bigger and kind of darker,so if you're looking for Plotless Fluff you should keep looking.There are some fun parts in it that kind of lighten up the mood though.

Finally what needs to be noted is that this story has a lot of Original Characters.This isn't necessarily bad,I personally find it very interesting and original,it purely depends on what you're looking for in a fic.

It's an on-going fic with very few chapters(but the updates are kind of regular)so feel free to check it out.

The second story I took was My Secret Love by NatalieMccarthy1982

This story has way more chapters than Confessions but I'll try to make it big.This is again an on-going fic and the writer even considers making a sequel.

There are many positive things about this fic that if I begin to name we will probably never be done.But to name a few;

•Finn is actually a pretty great guy
•Rachel doesn't want to date Quinn right away-not before Quinn is sure of what she wants
•It uses some songs Glee has already covered and just changes the ones who sing it
•I kissed a girl with Quinn instead of Santana.Since in this fic Quinn and Rachel are canonically gay,it makes sense for them to sing it.Unlike in Glee where although Santana is gay-Rachel claims to be straight
•You really find yourself hooked in the storyline and might end up making a long comment about how Quinn is making the wrong call

However,since the aim of this project is to make fanfics better I should name some disadvantages of this fic.

Here I shall note that the only reason I didn't write disadvantages about Confessions is not that it doesn't have any but only because it's too early to tell.

My Secret Love has 26 chapters and I have found one and a half flaws which is really impressive for such a long fic.

Of course there are some other flaws that I personally believe which I decided not to write.For example I didn't like that Quinn and Rachel broke up every few chapters BUT others may think that it is more realistic that way.

And perphaps they are right.

The vocabulary is not considered a flaw for me,it is good enough for one to understand without the irritating complex one some show offs tend to show.

Now to talk about the actual flaw that I believe would irritate many...Carly Fisher/Rachel Berry.

Let me just say that when writing a g x g relationship there are some things you should know think of.

I learned that the hard way.

Like in every fic,and in a nice book about how to not write Newtmas fanfiction that I read about a year ago,there is one thing you should never do.

"Hi,my name is -insert name here-did I mention I'm gay?"

It just doesn't sound good.Especially if you announce it to people-it would be better if it was in someone's head-in a somewhat homophobic society.

Why do I call McKinley a homophobic society?

Three words:Kurt and Santana

Kurt was bullied a lot and a jock had told Santana he could make her normal again.Don't even get me starting on Karofsky.

So yes that's the only thing I found bad in this fic,other than that it's a very good Faberry fic that you should check out.

But I should make a note that if you're below some certain age you-no matter what weird words you see...

Do not google it

I did this horrible mistake when it mentioned scissoring...long story short I went to Urban Dictionary where someone had a made a fic which explained it and now I'm traumatised forever.

(And there I thought the Milk Fic was bad)

As for the other participants,you should probably start reading the stories you are given(if I haven't given one to you message me and I'll work it out).

Next time-not next chapter-I will give me review at ellienerd14 's story :-)

Have a good day everyone!