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Latty_TheWriter

--> Cover/Description
The cover is appropriate for the story, I can't really read the writing on it, but is an alright cover, not the best cover to represent your book genre in my honest opinion. Your description is all over the place, I don't understand why the need of having the rankings on the top of the description, I would strongly suggest to add it on the end of it as well as the cover credits, to be honest.
As it is right now, I would rather read it from bottom to top, the actual description is at the end and that throws me off from reading it. And even when I read it wasn't much better, you need to engage your future readers, and you are in a genre that must contain mystery and seduction, but you aren't using those things well enough on the front page of your book.
Please don't take this on the wrong way, but the first thing your readers will see is your cover and description, and if that doesn't catch their eye, most likely they will not open your book, so I would strongly suggest for you to work on your description and make sure people will stop and read your book without thinking twice.
Maybe rethink of a more seductive cover, even because your story is all about sexual attraction and mystery so this cover is not making any justice to your book.

-->The beginning
I really appreciate the time you took to introduce your first book cast (as this is the second book).
I think it's really thoughtful of you as a writer to make sure your readers aren't lost along the story, so that is definitely a plus. Not only that but you have a face to your current cast which is a nice touch.
As for the actual beginning of your book...wow what an entrance!?
For a moment I had to check if I was on the right book (kidding), I definitely liked the way you decide to start this story.
I was hooked up to the book from the very first written word, your book is really easy to get into it and you made it extremely sexy, I completely forgot what the plot was about, due to be so into Archer and "Buns" chemistry.

-->Detailing/Grammar
As for mistakes, I haven't noticed anything major, you can describe emotions and surroundings very well, without using complex words, but still having that very elaborated description, although I think you can go much further when is about describing their surroundings, but you already made such a nice job, that is hardly necessary.
But I have an issue with Your writing style, if feel incomplete in some sentences, and this is leaving me thorn because is the same issue with the description, I start to believe that you are an outstanding writer but don't really know how to organize your work, you seemed to not know how to use your own words in your favor, and that lets down your impact on your own book, is like you are not making justice to yourself, but I can see how good you are playing your plot and that stands out for me, but I would suggest you o look into this, so no one will miss the opportunity to enjoy your book.

-->Character Development/Plot
I can't write on the first person as a male character, so I mostly stick to female POV's, but you are comfortable and talented on both, I get to enjoy what goes on "Buns" mind, and you've also shared all the other characters opinions and emotional side, so I don't get to miss anything and as a reader myself that's very important on a book. You took your time introducing characters as well as moving the story, I never felt rushed as reading your book, and that is a big plus for me as a reader and/or judge.

-->Presence as Writer
You are superb as a writer, its like you are right there with your readers, with you Author Notes, and I've noticed that you take the time to answer your readers, which I think it tells a lot how important writing is for you.

-->My view as a reader...
As a reader, if I actually stopped after seeing your book cover, I would most likely read it, because I got hooked up to your book.
I don't pay attention to some of the flaws of other writers, because I am far from perfect, so as a reader the writing style, or grammatically correct is not a turn off for me, and I don't usually judge the book by its cover, but the truth is, if I don't feel dragged to read a book, then I'll miss it...so here is why I'm telling to revise your cover and description, so other readers won't just swipe left when they come across your book, because you deserve to have many, many readers.

I would rate this book 4/5

Reviewed by Claudushka