This book was written by ivoryswan

--> Cover/Description
Your cover is one of those things that i shouldn't but i absolutely love, I would usually say it's too bland, too white, but it works! And your description is really good, it has enough information, and enough questions to allow me to wonder what is this book about and that combined with your cover would definitely make me want to read it.

-->The beginning
I absolutely loved your introduction, was amazing the thoughts you put in there, it actually made me want to read it even more, not only that but you imprinted a little bit of yourself in that first part and I think that's the best way anyone could've started to read your book.
Loved the warnings, although I don't have a problem reading anything, I understand that some people do, so that is definitely a plus and you included a little humor into it, which was really creative, it gives a very welcoming feeling into reading your work, perfect way to start a book.
And when I thought it couldn't get any better...it did, and I've just noticed that I'm into your book already and wrote so much about it, but I haven't even started to read it yet! The way you choose to introduce your cast...that's it, I'm done praising you! It's all so perfect, the playlist, the aesthetics, the quotes, the cast, everything was on point and I can't wait to start reading your book.

-->Detailing/Grammar
You write beautifully, the way you describe things are beyond normal, I could envision everything, the number of details was absolutely right. I'm not a big fan of really long paragraphs, for some reason it makes me lose interested, and that's really disappointing to me, because you write amazingly well, and your way of embracing the character's whereabouts and feelings at every stage of the book is so beyond perfection, but I was losing interest in keep reading.

-->Character Development/Plot
You really took your time developing your plot, I couldn't tell where the story was going to take me next.
I think that extra time really helped me connect more with Delilah.
To me she was a warrior, I loved the way you portrayed her, her pain, fears, and beliefs make her a perfect main character, she is easy to love but at the same time really mysterious, which makes a great mixture, i didn't have a choice but do adore her.

-->Presence as a Writer
I think this book means a lot to you, that is my perspective view as a reader, you add little details that make this book more personal than most out there. And the fact you added little notes asking for feedback from your readers, also tells me that you take your writing very seriously.

-->My view as a reader...
I think this book has a potential to be a winner, it has a great cover, the description is perfect, the whole book is presented beautifully, lots of details, particularly good description, but I felt off by the way you wrote it, not how you did because that is really good, but those long paragraphs put me off reading, gets too "boring" at times and takes my focus away.
I'm so frustrated with that because everything else works but that, I would suggest you reconsider to change the way you distribute your paragraphs in a more friendly reader kind of way, but overall this is an awesome book and I really enjoyed reading it.

I would rate this book, 4/5

Reviewed by Claudushka