This book was written by
sarcasticloner099

--> Cover/Description
I think your cover could be better, although I'm not complaining about having Joseph Morgan on your front page at all, is more how you placed the Book title and your username, it doesn't make any favors to the cover at all.
And oh my goodness! Your description is really sexy, you gave that domination and submissive kind of vibe, but you presented that in a very attractive and sexy way.
Also, you gave a twist on the last part which raises curiosity if your readers needed more after that little peek of your story(which I doubt), then you totally accomplished that with the last part of your description.

-->The beginning
I appreciated the fact you let your readers know what you think your strengths and weaknesses are, although after only reading the first chapter, I don't agree with your own opinion at all.
You started the chapter very well, you focused on Catherine's background, and gave her a very good and full introduction.
I seriously don't see why you keep saying you suck at beginnings, because I thought you did amazingly well.

-->Detailing/Grammar
You have several things to fix your grammar as well as punctuation, but nothing that an edit can't fix, just keep that in mind for the future.
Your eye for detail and describing surroundings are on point, I didn't get the feeling that I was missing anything.

-->Character Development/Plot
I felt you rushed after the first chapter, and I think you did that because you were in a hurry to introduce Vincent into to the storyline, and of course to highlight the connection between him and Cate, I felt that was a little cliche by the way you jumped into the love story, she's in trouble, he saves her, they try to pretend they don't feel attracted towards each other but secretly they are totally into each other. I didn't have much of a chance to focus on Vincent as a character because instantly I was picturing him hooking up with Cate, and it should have happened on a more "natural" way.

-->Presence as Writer
As a writer, you left a Mark on your book, you are right there with your readers, you share your music choice at every start of a chapter and you leave your authors to note at the end.
You apologized many times because it's your first story and I think as first time writing something you did a really good job, and improvements come with time, so don't worry too much.

-->My view as a reader...
I think you're on the right path, you have all the elements to bring a very good werewolf story into reality, you have that vision to attract mystery into your words.
In the description, you mentioned that this book isn't about cliches, but it felt like I was reading a fanfic rather than an original version, it felt like a vampire diary but with Klaus as Stefan. I felt rushed, I think you had this idea of a connection between Cate and Vicent that you let the rest your story down a bit.
You can make it hot and sexy without having to rush into the love/lust connection.

Overall you have great ideas, but I think you need to take your time to allow your readers to digest the story before stepping into what comes next.
I honestly think that you have this idea of standing out and be different with your plot choice, but by trying too hard you are doing the exact opposite, I would suggest you would take your time digging into the world of the characters and taking a step at a time.
Overall for a first time writer, and not having English on your background, you did absolutely amazing, as I said improvements come with time. Best of luck.

I would rate this book 3/5

Reviewed by Claudushka