Teen Fiction : Breaking Up
This is the review of Breaking Up By ShawMcKnight
Category : Teen Fiction
Judge : Hj_bell22
Was the description and cover of the book interesting?would you pick it up & read it?
The description could be more detailed. The cover of the book is interesting. It made me want to read the book.
Was the plot engaging?
The plot was little confusing for me in the start. I couldn't understand a few things. You might consider making it a bit simpler.
After reading first chapter are you interested in more?
Honestly, the first chapter was really long and readers might lose their interest in the book. I would suggest you to shortern the chapters.
After reading three chapters would u read the rest?
After the first three chapters I was interested in reading more.
Was the grammar correct?
The use of grammar is good. Although you did miss a few commas here and there.
I rate this book 3.75 out of 5
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