Short-Stories/One Shot: The Open Book Collection
This book was written by @xAnnaJoyx
*As it was a mix of different prompts, I'm focusing my review on the first chapter.
--> Cover/Description
I understand the connection between the brain on your cover and the description but I would definitely reconsider the cover, is not that doesn't work, I just think the colors/fonts and the way those are displayed isn't working.
As for the description, it explains well what your book is about, although after reading this, I'm thinking if this book should be placed in the random category instead of Short Stories.
-->The beginning
Wow...if this was made into a book, it would be a hell of a book, I loved it so much! I think you portrayed both characters beautifully, I loved the twists, I loved how you choose to present the story, from reviewing werewolf book into actually being a werewolf was a very smart plot and the way you chased the storyline was just perfection.
-->Detailing/Grammar
You have an amazing writing style, no mistakes at all, you are too good actually.
You detailed and described everything exceptionally well, I could visualize every scene which shows how amazingly well you did at describing every detail.
-->Character Development/Plot
I love the way you paced the chapter, you didn't rush and you carefully followed every step of the storyline. You not only focused on your main character but you gave the needed attention to everything else.
-->Presence as Writer
You added a little note at the end of your chapter, and I appreciate that I think it's always a plus when a writer connects with the readers and answering your own question...you definitely should, this prompt deserves to be made into an actual werewolf book! Is too good to be only a prompt...
-->My view as a reader...
As a reader, I'm not a big fan of prompt books, because of my belief that every story should be told, and reading your book, I'm even more convinced of that same statement.
You are too good, you shouldn't be writing prompts, instead, you should be writing an outstanding book! And I apologize if my opinion goes against your own, but I sincerely believe that you are wasting your talent, don't take this on the wrong way, but this is my truest opinion.
I would rate this book 4.5/5
This book was reviewed by Claudushka
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