This Book was written by
Rinkou

--> Cover/Description
I had to say that I didn't know what red string of fate really meant until I start reading your book.
I think the book cover could make a better justice to the book itself, I like the string detail on it, but the whole white background and red letters don't really raise my attention.
On the description is a lot of information but no many (not at all) questions or that hint of mystery that would make your future readers to pick up your book without any hesitation, a description/cover for me is the door of the book (I know it's a weird example), so it is nothing that would make me curious about knowing what stands on the other side, I would just walk away without opening, so that's why I would suggest a new cover and a less detailed description, but instead raise a few questions giving little hints about the plot, to raise curiosity to future readers.

-->The beginning
The beginning was a bit weird to me, mainly because I didn't know what the story was really about and which genre it would be categorized, so I was apprehensive about it, but more I read the more I wanted to read.

-->Detailing/Grammar
Your writing style is really good, you have a perfectionist's eye for detail, you did describe emotions magnificently, your focus was on Scar, but at every character interaction you made sure to describe the other characters body language, and that definitely made me connect with Scarlet, even more, I'm not gonna lie, my first impression of Scar was a bit superior/superficial, but along the story I could see little glimpses of an emotional and vulnerable girl, so that definitely made me connect with her more.

-->Character Development/Plot
You took the story day by day, you didn't jump days, let alone steps.
I enjoyed reading, it was a very
Smoothly reading experience.
The plot is original in my opinion.
You developed Scarlet character giving the necessary time and attention to her, as well as the other characters.

-->Presence as Writer
You were always present in your chapters, with the author's notes, you asked their opinions, you apologize when you were with some delay on your updates, and that really shows how much you like writing this book and you take it seriously.

-->My view as a reader...
I have to admit, seeing the cover/description and title, I was a little lost in your book, I wasn't sure it was general fiction, romance, or something else while reading I'm almost certain that your book should be in the romance category.
You have questioned the same thing, and I think that because of those misleads on your front cover and description as well as being placed in the wrong genre, this book is being underappreciated, and not getting as many reads like it deserves.

I would rate this book 3.5/5

Reviewed by Claudushka